A poem by me for SOMEONE SPECIAL..do see - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: mdkr

Very nice one i really liked it. I wish i had the talent😔
And surely you love him😉

thanx yaar..so sweet of u ..n ya i totally luv him..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i am overwhelmed by your comments guys..thanx a tonn all..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
i didn't realise tht i hadn't commented...so sry 4 commenteing late

i loved ur poem....awesome
loved the rhyme scheme👏
soooo cutee n true😳
its excellent!!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: 371768

i didn't realise tht i hadn't commented...so sry 4 commenteing late

i loved ur poem....awesome
loved the rhyme scheme👏
soooo cutee n true😳
its excellent!!👍🏼

its ok yaar...
better late then never...😉
thankx a tonn..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hey..nice poem..very well rytin...👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rohinipaul003

hey..nice poem..very well rytin...👏

thanx a tonn...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: cuppycake990

❤️ ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART....🤗

I thought of a poem especially for my sweet heart,❤️
Describing his qualities i dont know from where do I start,🤔
He is stylish and hot , handsome and smart,😎
His KILLER SMILE just took away my heart,😃
That voice, those eyes, that talent, those looks,😊
They drive me crazy and make me forget my books,
I just feel like pulling his cheeks whenever he smiles,😳
Just to do that i can even run miles and miles,😉
I think i love him but is love that simple??❤️
I just dont know coz' i forget everything whenever i see his dimple,
I really wanna tell him how do i feel,😳
But i guess whenever i'll see him ,my lips will seal,😕
My heart starts crying when his eyes become moist,😭
But when he is happy ,my mood becomes light,😆
His SMILE always takes my breath away,
I just wanna hug him but is there a way??🤗
I adore him , i love him from the depth of my heart,😳
I didnt know how to write poems,but his eyes also taught me this art,
I wish to meet him one day in my life on a beautiful sight in the evening twilight,😍
My ARJUN, MY LOVE, MY SWEETHEART seeing and talking to you would be such a DELIGHT.............❤️
......thats the wish to meet arjun in my hand....i pray it reaches him.....

UFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
yeh tumne kya kiya..janu.....mere hi dil ki baat kehdi..tune..
@blue....those lines are so simple but yet so true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
they touched my heart!!!
@black..yeh toh mere liye bhi sach hai..u knw tht....AHEM AHEM..*WINKS*
fab wrk yaar..👏
chupi rustam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chupake rakha....yeh cute poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do write sum more...i would luv to read them!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep rocking!!
luv
ya lods🤗
Nihu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@nihu..thanxxx jaan....🤗to u..
n ya the lines in black totally reminded me of u....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY AISHA nice poem.........my name is hello as in heli.....iam new to this forum......iam piyu's best friend.....i have heard a lot about u from her.........can i be ur friend??😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaYuR.CaNdY

HEY AISHA nice poem.........my name is hello as in heli.....iam new to this forum......iam piyu's best friend.....i have heard a lot about u from her.........can i be ur friend??😃

hi jaan..thanx a tonn....ur piyus best friend really....??the one who suggested the one shot mayur ff na..??i remember that..piyu told us abt u..youre bunch of a talent sweety....offcourse yaar youre piyus friend so youre my friend too...

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