|| Dosti Ya Pyar? || (MayUr)Completed Pg. 5 (5/19) - Page 5

i jst read it all dat was gr8 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Me!

Aww poor Mayank is nervous and on top of that Nupur doesn't realy wanna see him. I love how he's a bit positive about Samrat being there =) Yup...Samrat makes all the difference it looks like na? 😛

Nupur's paird with Ranvijay? Me no like him =) I know! haha

I love how easy it was to get rid of Uday 😆 Lovesick describes him perfectly 😆 Anyway, too bad Nupur didn't wanna talk to him but Mayank made her listen anyway. And I love the apology, the way he described how she affected him. Thanks!😃😳 Mayu's too sweet like that! 😊

Meera, me loved it =) Loved how you described everything and the way it was written was awesome! I actually thought he would confess his love but then I realised it would flow 😆 Oh well. Pyar ki shuruat (that how you spell it?) dosti se hi hoti hain =) I heard that in a movie😆 Awww thanks! 😃 Yup...I think I've heard it before...

Originally posted by: angelz

that was relli cute

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Meeru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hello ji!!!!!!!!!! mine!!!!!!!!!!!! Maddy!!! 😃

Yeah, i've been following the show since the first episode!!!!! I absolutely adore this show!!! It's the best SHOW ever!!!!! 😆 Awwww same here! 😛 I definitely agree with that! 😃

Awwwwww that was adorable!!! I won't lie, i really partial to Mayur!!! I like Sajan too, but i'm much more into Mayur!!!!! 😳 I loved the Majan scene!!!! They are always really sweet, though the Sanu scenes are usually much funnier!!!!! 😆 Awww same here! 😳 I'm glad you liked it! 😛

You captured all the emotions Mayur were feeling really well!!! I liked how you kept to the story line but at the same time added your twists ans turns!!! *thumbs up* 😃 *Giggle* For a sec there Nupur scred me in the end!!!!! 😆 *pouts* Really? 😳 I didn't wanna use exactly the same, but I needed my effect in it!😃

I'm much more active on the KDMHMD forum, but i visit this one just as often!!!!! 😊 Hope you write more Mayur here!!!! I'll try when I think of stuff! 😃

Love you!!! *hug*

Originally posted by: munam_13

ME ME ME ME ME😛

this part was tooo toooooooooooooo tooooooooooooo cute😊, loved everything in this part, loved Mayank being all determined to apologize and poor Nupur holding grudge against Mayank... O Samrat's talking about Sheena???🤢, is ladke ki to main😡... I loved how he changed his dialogues and apologizes to his friend in such a sweet way, and totally loved Nupur's reaction, it was awesome😃

Originally posted by: ash08

Hey Meera,

I landed here too. Wow dear, that was awesome. 👏 As I said earlier, u really write so simple and effortlessly, its so beautiful. PM me when u write more.

Love,
Ash

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

its awesome.....iam sorry for late reply..i had gone out..........u really twisted the real story....pretty awesome....plzzzzzzz write more...thanks for the pm.😳

Originally posted by: 268143

i jst read it all dat was gr8 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I want a Mayank. You got one in your one shot! 😉

Meeru, I loved it! I read all three parts in one shot, and I so have to catch up with the show, but I loved your take on the whole thing. It kept in the character of both, and the Mayank-Sammy interaction, and the Mayank-Gunjan interaction was very cute. Loved the way you've portrayed his friendship with them. Awww thanks! 😃 I'm glad you liked it! 😛

You have got to write more MJHT stories, and tell me when you do! If I think of more ideas....I definitely will! 😃

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: shabo24

*pouts* Thanks for telling me about this Meera. Oops? 😳

Feel loved. I am supposed to be studying for a test - but this was way better and allowed much more room for daydreaming. 😉 I read it all in one go and ohmygosh - seems like this couple has advanced so much. 😭 You so need to catch me up - but you wrote this just fantastically and the way he said sorry and all was so perfect and I loved how you added Gunjan reading a textbook in bed. 😆 You HAVE to write more Mayur and tell me when you do. *stern look* Sorry, and I'm glad you liked it! 😛 We semi got you caught up na? 😳😛 It's what Gunjan does! 😆 As for more MayUr....got any ideas?! 😃

--shabz

p.s. whatever happened to that fanfic in the "Fanfic Section"? The one with a bunch of friends and all...that still going without you telling me? 😛 Indeed it is! 😃 Want the link again? 😛