*JAB THEY MET* Updated Part 3 on pg.7 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Pallavi!!!!!!!!by god!!i haven't heard from u for sooooooooo long!!!!luv ur FF and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz make the pts longer and plzzzzzzzzz cont.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Pallavi!!!!!!!!!!!i haven't heard from u for soooooooooo long!!!!!!luv this new FF and plzzzzzzzzzzz make it longer(parts)and do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome Pallavi,sachme,tumhare writtings main jadoo hain!!!!!!!!!
plzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ynaiita

OMG Pallavi!!!!!!!!by god!!i haven't heard from u for sooooooooo long!!!!luv ur FF and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz make the pts longer and plzzzzzzzzz cont.

ynaiita

you haven't heard 4m me coz I was busy sadofying in my hostel...and yah I will make the parts longer...
and thanks for the comments....I am glad u liked it!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowow pallavi you are dam good plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice work once again pallavi! do pm me ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi all my dear friendz I am sorry I could give all of individual replies...actually was a bit busy....Hope you enjoy dis part...
THE SHOW BEGINS.......
The door bell rang and Nupur ran to get it...She opened the door and a quite good looking chap was standing der...he opened his mouth to say sumthing but she cut him "Delivery kahaan hai?" she sharply asked realized he was not holding a package. He looked puzzled and raised his eyebrows in question...Nupur eyed him with a frown "Bade batameez ho....first of all...I am sure tumne hamare order rastein mein hi kha liya...aur ab expression aise bana rahe ho jaise tumhe pata bhi nahi hai tumne kya kiya hai...dekho.."
"Excuse me Ma'am..."
"Shut up!!! Let me complete what I am saying....should I complain to the authorities about your lack of manners...and why r u not in the uniform?" said asked tartily...noticing his cool striped blue tee-shirt and faded signature jeans....
Just then a smiling delivery boy came onto the doorstep "Ma'am your order" Her mouth sagged open and she turned to face the other guy whom she had mistaken as a delivery boy.....he was rollling his eyes. She bit her tongue "here.."she paid him and took the package.
"I am so sorry...by god mujhe laga ki tum delivery boy the!" she fumbled
"Shakal se maybe ...magar akal se tum usse bhi kam ho..." he threw
"Dekho main sorry bol rahi hoon na..."she fumed at his jab.
"Main faltoo main waqt waste nahi karna chahta hoon....Tum town soccer team ki matches ki media coverage handle karte ho na?"
Nupur nodded proudly "haan...was just promoted to the job...its part time"
"Not interested..." he told heavily with boredom.."yeh lo...here are the invites and celebrities cuming for the next match....Ur job to see that they are comfortable"
"Magar that was sheetal's job ryt?"
"Sheetal is being hospitalized and so out Sports community president is trusting u wid this job...."he told her authoritatively...his voice rising with each syllable...
He den dropped his voice....and said under his breath..."pata nahi kahin...opponent team ke coach ko chaprasi samajh liya to....match nahi mahabharat shuru ho jayegi..."
"Jee apne kuch kaha?"she asked suspiciously.
"nahin" he plastered a smile on his face and walked off.
"By god!!!! Kya ladka hai....Nupur tujhe savdhaan rehna padega!!!!" she told herself watching his retreating back.
"Kaun tha di?" Gunjan asked.....
"sum guy....soccer team waalo ke taraf se aaya tha yeh batane ke liye ki...I have to take care of the celebrities cuming der for the match because sheetal is not well...yeh le pizza"
"Di...agar aap chahtein hain toh main aapko help kar sakti hoon.."Gunjan offered
"Yah sure..." Nupur pecked her onb the cheek and smiled.
The next morning ....Nupur was tugging at Gunjan's blanket.."Gadhi uth!!!! Tera date hain aaj ...aur woh ladka pahunch gaya hai!" For the first time in her life Gunjan was oversleeping and Nupur was up already!!!! Gunjan whined "Please di sone do na!" she snuggled comfortably in her cosy blanket.
"Gunjan!!! Tujhe aaj hio sona tha!!!" Nupur screamed getting delirious...Samrat had turned up promptly at sharp 6 and Nupur had heard the doorbell and went to attend it...
"Jee...hame aaj dudh nahi chahiye!" she had told him...her eyes closing slowly.
He had smiled and replied "Jee I am Samrat!"
That sentence had kicked full sense and life into Nupur who stared at him.
"Andar aayiye..." she showed him the way and realised she was dressed in her night suit.
She made him comfortable and told him..."Pata nahin Gunjan aaj kyun nahi uthi...baki saare din toh panch baje uth jaati hai..." she smiled apologetically.
Samrat just smiled...he had been in tension the whole night if he would get up in time and so had slept incompletely..fitfully...and here this gal was snoring away....in her bed...
Nupur had been trying in vain to wake up Gunjan for the past 30 minutes...atlast she woke up rubbing her eyes and staring at Nupur..."Samrat 6:00 se tumhara intezaar kar raha hai...jaldi tayyar ho jao.." Gunjan jumped out of her bed and rushed through her activities and was ready in jet speed. She ran downstairs to see samrat sleeping comfortably on the sofa...she smiled..."Lagta hai adat nahi hai ...jaldi uth ne ki.." Nupur went forward and woke him up. He cutely rubbed his eyes and saw the gals smiling at him..."sorry...kabhi itni jaldi utha nahin..."
Nupur pushed Gunjan forward and hastily said "Toh jao tum dono..."
Samrat...smiled and asked Gunjan politely "Toh chale?"
Gunjan nodded and waved a bye to Nupur.
Nupur sat in front of the mirror carefully masking her face with the beauty clay...she had the whole day to herself and hoped to laze it away. The door beel rang as if gently breaking the news to her dat her day would not be as easy as she wanted it to be. She opened the door and shrieked...."Tum!" He looked up at her and jumped back..."Hello Mr. yeh kya batameezi hai...yahaan baar baar kyun aa rahe ho?" "Main apne marzi se nahi aa raha hoon madamjee.....I happen to be the soccer team captain so I have to take care of all this stuff..."
"Andar aao.....just gimme a minute" she ran off to wash the stuff from her face. She was flustered...the guy was damn handsome...she thought while she scrubbed her face. When she got back he was sitting on the sofa flipping through sum magazine....
"Tum kya loge...Mr. ....."
"Mayank Sharma..." he smiled "no I dont need nething.....just let us get to business"
She plopped herself opposite him. "Toh ab kya problem hai...?"
" The sports community president, Mr. Bhootwala has asked me to show you who are the celebrites and known figures so dat there is no mix-up on the match day..."
She coloured pink and shot past to red remembering dat she had mistaken this handsome guy to be a pizza delivery boy. "Ok...."she just murmured.
"Miss...."he searched
"Nupur..."she offered
"Miss. Nupur aap please yahaan aayiye..." he requested as he removed a file.
"Drop the Miss" she told stationing herself next to him.
"yeh hai Mr. Chadda" Mayank seriously told her....the distant and blurry look in Nupur's eyes didn't catch his attention. After half an hour of tedious explaination he closed the file and looked at her..."So will you be able to remember all der names?" The glazed look on her face was still der. "Nupur..."he said snapping his fingers and bringing her back to reality. "Uh uh...aap kuch keh rahe the?" she fumbled...her head was ringing with the wild fantasy she had been dreaming.....
Mayank and she...amongst the trees..the wilderness playing soccer in the rain...romancing and dancing......
The tune played hard in her ears .....
Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon
Paas aao to keh doon
Aakhir kyoon pal mein yun deewaana main ho gaya
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana -
Jo hosh tha voh to gaya
Badan ki yeh khushboo jagaane lagi jaadu
To hoke beqaabu dil kho gaya
Tumhe jo maine socha, tumhe jo maine maana
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha voh to gaya
Itni kyoon tum khoobsurat ho
Ke sab ko hairat ho
Duniya mein sachmuch hi rehti hai
Pariyon se bhi zyaada pyaari si ladki koi
Haan itni kyoon bolo haseen tum ho
Jo dekhe gumsum ho
Dekho na main bhi hoon khoya sa baheka sa
Mujhpe bhi chhaayi hai deewaangi
Tumhi ko maine pooja, tumhi ko chaaha paana
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha voh to gaya
Badan ki yeh khushboo jagaane lagi jaadu
To hoke beqaabu dil kho gaya
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana -
Jo hosh tha voh to gaya
Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon
Paas aao to keh doon
Tumne jo dekha to kya jaane kya ho gaya
Jaane kyoon rehti hoon khoyi si
Jaagi na soyi si
Ab dil mein armaan hai saanson mein toofaan hai
Aankhon mein khwaabon ki hai chaandni
Haan, jaane kyoon baheka sa yeh mann hai
Maheka sa yeh tan hai
Chalti hoon itraake ithlaake sharmaake balkhaake
Jaise koi raagini
Tumhe jo maine samjha, tumhe jo pehchaana
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha voh to gaya
Badan ki yeh khushboo jagaane lagi jaadu
To hoke beqaabu dil kho gaya
Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana.............
"Oye madam......main koi bhoot hoon kya?" Mayank literally shook nupur...who sighed under her breath "by god!!!!....kitna handsome bhoot hai!"
"jee apne kuch kaha?" he asked suspiciously
"Nahin toh" he hastily denied.
"Chalo...let me see if you remember the names and d faces..."he said opening his file again.
"Nahi nahi...aap mujhe yeh file de dijiye....main padhke wapas kardoongi..." she panicked. He put his hand on hers without relasing that whatever sense she remaining in her slumped away and she was melting under his gaze and revelling in his touch. He opened the file and pointed at the first person and asked "Nupur who is this?" She dreamily muttered..."Mayank..." He looked up at her in utter shock..."kya????" he screamed crashing her back to reality...
"Nahi ...main woh keh rehi thi ki.....mujhe yaad nahi rahega....woh main itni intelligent nahi hoon" she bit her lip. He smiled "theek hain...tum yeh rakhlo....I'll be back in the evening to collect it" he rose and took leave of her.
She fell back on the sofa with a smile and opened the picture of the man whom she had identified with Mayank's name....
"cheee! " she threw away the file after seeing a fat,ugly man with a fluoroscent colour tee-shirt struggling to look young.....Mayank was a greek god compared to him, Nupur fondly thought.
"Haila, Nupur teri toh dil ki ghanti baj gayi!" she jumped.
Gunjan smiled and sat in Sanrat's car.
"So where do we go first?" he asked flashing his signature cute smile. She smiled back "Mandir...."
"Kya????" he looked at her ridiculously. He hadn't been to a temple for the past five years.
"Aap mandir nahi jaate hain mujhe pata hain...magar I want you to remember this date....so I want you to do all the things that you haven't done or enjoyed today"
He nodded and kicked the engine alive...she was so different....from her entry...wasn't her god supposed to Fabregas?
"FM?" he asked.
"Tumhara gadi hai jo chahe karo..." she smiled..shocked at her replies.....she had never spoken like this to neone before.....what was wrong wid her??? She looked out into the streets as the fm belched out one of her favourite numbers....
"Hey I love this song!" Samrat excitedly increased the volume....Unknown to even gunjan...she was humming it very sweetly that samrat couldn't help lowering the volume to hear her voice....
"Tum bahut aacha gaati ho!" he praised.
"Woh...bas ...aise hi..." she blushed.
The song broke out between their silence....
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Theek hai theek theek sab kuch theek hai
Paas hai sab kuch rab nazdeek hai
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Heeyyy rab ke hazur mein kasmein bhi kha li
Duniya ki auni pauni rasmein nibha li
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Phir bhi na mane koi toh dafa kar
Mane jo mane na mane toh bhala kar
Duniya na mane kasmanu khaye
Kasmanu khaye mar jaani
Haaiiee marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani
(Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani) 3
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Haaii khayal bhi jaane kya kya
Sochtha rehta hai ga
Ufff, ki nochta rehta hai ga
Hey tu mud ke dekha na kar
Jo sar mein soch aayegi (hey)
To pao mein moch aayegi
(pao mein moch aayegi)
Utt utt ke raathon mein
Dard yeh pala hai
Andhi jawani mein dard ek uchala hai
Dil tera na roki baliye
Dil tera na jogi baliye
Dil tera sansar hey ga
Lage dil ko bemari
(Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani) 2
(Une pene peyo
Une pene peyo de hai ha
Nako vetoleya
Suli odi umee oo) 2
Haan, chalo ab dur yahaan se
Pahado se bhi aage
Woh, jahan per subha jaage
Ho, bade sab kehte hain yeh
Chuno ache hum saaye
Samjh ke jo samjhaye
Ro ro ke raathon mein
Aankhein bhi khali ki
Likh likh ke tarikhe deware kaali ki
chup kar chup chup kar baliye
Bhag le chup chup kar baliye
Duniya se bhage duniya mein
Hey duniya ko hui hairani
(Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani) 2
Ohhhhhh….
Theek hai theek theek sab kuch theek hai
Paas hai sab kuch rab nazdeek hai
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Rab ke hazur mein kasmein bhi kha li
Duniya ki auni pauni rasmein nibha li
Oh oh oh oh….
Oh oh oh oh….
Phir bhi na mane koi toh dafa kar
Mane jo mane na mane toh bhala kar
Duniya na mane kasmanu khaye
Kasmanu khaye mar jaani
Haaiiee mar jaani mar jaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani
(Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Marjaani marjaani
Oye kasmanu khaye mar jaani) 3
"Yeh lo mandir aa gaya" samrat halted the car. Gunjan smiled and got out...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
wow itx was awesum yaar keep it up👍🏼 tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
awesome part.loved the wild imaginations of nupur😆.update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wooooooooooooooooooooow i can jus imagine sammy gettin up frm his sleep n cutely rubbin his eyes!!!wat a swt cute idea!!!love it!!!

PM me if possible yaar!

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