*JAB THEY MET* Updated Part 3 on pg.7

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

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😆😆😆 OMG Nupur's wild fantasies!! They made me crack up....!

Wat imagination yaar....dancing, romancing in the rain and playing soccer...!

By god, loved that one..."dil ki ghanti baj gayi".

Nupur is totally smitten over him! Didn;t even know what was happening around her since she was SO lost in him...hehe...

And Mayank's introduction was nice! Uske kuch bolne se pehle hi Nupur ki Morena express shuru ho gayi.

And Samrat actually came right on time and Gunjan was still sleeping!

haha...really funny part yaar Pallavi and then they found him sleeping on the sofa....even better!

You write really good!

I can;t wait to see further interaction between Mayur...Nupur ke reactions toh the best hain!

Looking forward to Sajan date as well....

Do update soon and thanks for PMing me.

Keep up the good work!

Nidhi

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

hey...i am dng well

and after reading dhaansu update ...i am awesum now !!!!!

it was fab specially mayank-nupur part [sorry i am biased towards them]

loved the intro of mayank----delivery boy !!!!!!!, by god nupur..she is in love with him already...hahahaaa

mayank asking nupur abt the celeb. was awesum and poor nupur didnt remember anythng !!!!!!

lolz..it was a complete paisa-wasool update

too good..........luking forward for mayank-nupur meeting again

loved it

i loved nupur's wild day-dreaming.....haila..mast tha

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shrishti gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

I'm speechless. You do this to me each time you update! I always run short of words to praise this novelty of a fan fiction that you are writing. It's heavenly good, so much so that I could imagine it all happening like in a film, while reading the part. Love the Mayur interaction which was a great example of effortless conversation and ofcourse my januable Sajan were so much at ease.

You are a wonderful writer, with great vocabulary and extensive narrative skills and the way you concoct the storyline is just too good to be described.

Keep it up! Update as soon as possible and thanks for the pm!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

lovely part yaar nupur to by god kya ladki hai
bechara mayo from soccer captain to delivery boy kya demotion hai.
and gunjan kya baat sammy ko wait karvati hai firat time bechara on time and here the princess is sleeping.
good yaar.
nupur is too funny and guanjan is so cute definatly sammy yeh date kabhi nahin bhoolega.
bye sumi

do continue yaar its awesome.

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

amazing update rocking kool plss cntinue

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ashred12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

i read d 3rd part first n got addicted.. its very nice.. 've u seen 'win a date with ted hamilton'? .. pls continue soon..

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TheLastCarnival

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ashred12
i read d 3rd part first n got addicted.. its very nice.. 've u seen 'win a date with ted hamilton'? .. pls continue soon..

yah I saw dat many years back....starring josh duhamel ryt?....

thanx buddy was not able to remember the movie name...and the story...I just remembered dat there was this event and a gal wins it and....at last she goes back to her friend....

thought the event idea was novel and so used it😆