CONTRACT MARRIAGE[MJHT] Part14-15 pg 52 28/6 - Page 11

Originally posted by: khushali16

arre yaar,what shud i tell u?????

Tell anything dear...but i want to hear you guys...how was it..??

u were jus toooooo good........

Thanks...!!!!

.bt 1 thing,as ur writing this FF for DMG too,there are sum parts that need 2 be edited properly..........like in 1 of d paragraph,gunji and sammy changed to armaan n ridz....pls see 2 it that this happens less often......

oopsiee...yeah dear...actually i had replaced it all properly...but when i added some thing there i wrote Armaan and riddhima...that was in first para...😆😆

i will take care from next time..!!!

otherwise,awesooome update.....i m literally waiting to read more......hope sam comes out of his coma........i m praying 4 him..😆😆...

He will come out but wait for it..!!!

will update soon

this is 4 u:

Thanks...!!!!

i m waiting to read more.....

Originally posted by: piya2025

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Me leaving now but 'll comment after reading..
Love
piya.

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Hey great part👏👏👏Nicely wrote _ good dialouges😆😆
But AR ko becch mein kadha kar diya😆😆😆But thats also was nice..
Gud going.

Love
piya.

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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Hey

First of all, what a looong update! Loved reading it!...Thanks...yeah it was big...and that would be the length..!!!

Oh my....such a hot scene in the beginning...for a moment there I thought It was going to be a Mills and Boon scene! I think I'm right about the rating going up....lol...Hahah...i am glad that you liked that romance...many more coming up..!!!

Sam's an ABSOLUTE casanova....Yeah that he is..!!!

I really liked the present part where he falls and hurts himself....they way you keep flashing back and forh between past and present is good! Makes it interesting...
Awww....i am glad that you loved that scene...Yeah that is the one thing i would be doing here...!!!

And another Mayur scene...hehe...Mayank will be Mayank...can't stop talking about books! And you used the Academic meet scene for ref, right...?
Yeah...i thought of it from there...!!!...He will never change..!!!

But as someone mentioned in the comments....there were many times I could spot Armaan and ridz name especially in the first para..kiss scene...
Yeah there were...😆😆😆....i had written it while posting...added something...but by mistake wrote..it to be armaan and ridzi...😆😆

But these things apart, great job on this!! Thanks for the PM.
Thanks,..!!!!

Nidhi

P.S. Agree with cute_Ash....they way you write its like reading a novel...! What with the decsriptions and flashbacks and continuing the story properly....like a real book...

Awww...m floored..!!!😍

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

OMG!

No comments on the kiss actually the way u wrote it and I wa simagining it!😆

Oopsiieee....hahahha...yeah that was little..'erm.'

Actually can't think of tht any mor enot of my age !...Yup..."😆

Okwonderful family links!...Awww...Thanks,...!!!!

I used to always read since it started but never got time to comment!...oopsiee....so finally you brought yourself to comment...haan...!!!

But I must sya u ahv thought a lot an dmade all the family links

the story u used is mindblowing and quite unique!

Awww....i am glad that you loved that storyline..!!!

U shoudl write novels man!...Yup...NEah i am not that good...In forum when i am writing this for Ar there also many of them have told me to write a novel..😆😆

I luv the ladke wale purab samrat and mayank one and ladki wale dia gunjan nupur!...Yup m glad that you do..😃😛😉

Now all the wonderful twists are gonna be during teh amrriage...Yeah the main one during marriage...!!!

nok jhok between boys and girls

awsumw ill wiat for the next part!

Keep up the good wurk

ash

I Will..Thanks...!!!