FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

PYAAR KI MANZIL(sweet si love story..)

Part 2:

Gunjan:xcuse me..

Gunjan stands..

The guy: im sorry..

Nupur: dekh kar nahi chal saktey kya...???

Gunjan: di.. it's okay..

The guy leaves..

Gunjan:di galti sab se hoti hai..aur waise bhi aaj ke din aap kisi se panga mat hi lo di plz..

Nupur:hmm..tu sahi hai aaj ke din panga nahi lena chahiye..

After some time..

Nupur:gunjan tu yahan hi ruk main wash room hoke aati hoon.

Gunjan:theek hai di..

Nupur goes to wash room.

Gunjan is seeing here nd there..suddenly she see the guy..selecting some gifts...

After 5 to 10 mins Nupur comes back..

Gunjan:chaley?

Nupur:haan chal..

They both goes to ladies section..

Sales person:yes mam..could I help you?..

Gunjan see's a dress for Nupur..on the maniqueen....

Gunjan :woh wala dress bataiye..

Sales person: sure mam....

Nupur: gunjan kitna pyaara hai yeh dress..mere liye na?

Gunjan: haan di..main pehle aap hi ke liye toh dekhungi na..

Nupur:by god meri behan meri maa bann jayegi ...har waqt mere liye hi pehle sonche gi.....

Both smiles..

Sales person: pink waala dres mam??

Gunjan: haan..

Nupur :isse pack karwado..

Nupur:aab tere wastey..chal..

They both see's plenty dress but Nupur doesn't like them........

Gunjan:dii.......ghar decorate bhi karna hai na...........

Nupur: haan haan gunjan tere hi liye dekh rahi hoon na..main meri behan ke wastey koi aisa waisa dress thodi hi na select karungi..

suddenly Gunjan see's a dress.....

Gunjan:dii..woh wala?(point her finger towards a dress in the other block..)

Nupur:haan gunjan?.

Nupur:who wala dikhana..

Sales person shows the dress..nupur likes it soo much..

Nupur:haan.....issey pack kardijiye.....

Sales person: sure mam..aur kuch dikhaun mam??

Gunjan:hmm..nahi bas yeh do pack kardijiye.....

They completes the billing.....

Leaves the mall..

While coming......

Nupur:gunjan.. kuch kha le?bahut bhook lag rahi hai.....

Gunjan: hmmm....theek hai

Nupur: who dekh gunjan pani puri ka stall.....tujhey bahut pasand hai na pani puri..chal khatey hai

Gunjan:diiii....

Nupur drags gunjan towards the pani puri stall

Nupur:bhaiya pani puri..

They both eates 2 -3 plate pani puri..

Gunjan: bas..bas di aab chalo..

Gunjan gives money to the pani puri vendor..

While coming again the guy comes in front..

The guy:hii im Samrat.....(says to nup's nd gunji)

Nupur: kya hum ne tumhara parichey maanga??

Gunjan (slowly to Nupur):diii.....aab yeh ladne ke liye humare pass time nahi hai di..hum chaltey hai chalo....

Gunjan: sorry..

Nd gunjan & Nupur leaves ..

On the way..

Nupur: gunjan....

Gunjan:hmmm?

Nupur: tu kyun aise chup chap rehti hai.?agar main teri jagah rehti na toh....

Gunjan: diii...chodiye na.....

Nupur: aacha aacha......

Gunjan: di ravi uncle ko call karke bol dey ki papa ko bulaye....

Nupur:maine keh diya

Gunjan:kab??

Nupur:jab tu billing karwa rahi thi tab

Gunjan:ohhhhhhh..

Both are at home.........

Nupur keeps all the covers in their room..(gunjan & nupur's)

Nupur opens the cover(decoration) and keeps gifts aside..

GUNJAN COMES..

Nupur: gunjan cake toh order ho gaya na?

Gunjan:haan dii......aabhi aata hi hoga..

They both starts decorating..

After some time the bell rings........

Gunjan: dii main dekhti hoon.

Gunjan goes to the door&opens the door..

A man: mam ur cake..

Gunjan takes it over..places a side..

Gunjan:thank you..

The man: mam bill..

Gunjan:ohh..

Gunjan takes the bill nd pay's.......

The man:thank you ..(nd leaves)

Gunjan closes the door..

Places the cake in fridge..

They both completes the decoration..

Nupur: gunjan kitna aacha lag raha hai na......

Gunjan:haan di.. aapne kiya hai toh aacha toh lagega hi na..

Nupur:tu ne bhi toh kiya hai na....

Gunjan:haan di..main kahan keh rahi hoo aapne akele kiya hai..par idea toh aapka hai na..

Both smiles nd hugs..

It's already 6:30 pm..

Nupur:gunjan chal jaldi jaldi tayaar ho ja ..6:30 ho rahe hai papa ajayenge..

Gunjan:haan di..

Both gets ready..

After some time..Bell rings..

Nupur opens the door..

Its ravi uncle's family..(but ravi uncle is not there ..he's with G & N'S dad)

It's nearly 7:30 pm..

The bell rings..

They switches off the lights nd gunjan opens the door..(it's ravi uncle & N&G'S dad..)

All together: surprise............

Hope u guys liked this update.......

Do comment.....

Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago

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jia kapoor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

do write more

very cooolll part

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

It was...coool!

Ill wait 4 next update!

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rida

@angel.samee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey nice updates dear...

i loved alot...gunjan falls in sammy's arms...ahhhh:)

newayzz..plzzz con't sooonnnn...

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

wowowow tht was cute part plzz contuied soon

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CookMySock

@CookMySock

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Wow....

That's a really good script. Really liking it and love Nupur's ;ines. Fabulous

=D

Thank you. Carry on writing just like this a.s.a.p

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Soni

@Dreamy_Girl03

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

this part is so cute. Thanks for updating it. do continue it soon.

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hmmm...here'a d nxt part 4 u alll.. so n'joy it...

PYAAR KI MANZIL(sweet si love story..)

Part 3:

Everyone njoy's the party..

Ravi:aacha beta aab hum chaltey hai(to n&g)

Nupur:theek hai uncle..

Ravi uncles family leaves..

Srikanth:tum dono kitni badi ho gayi ho...surprise party de rahi hoo...mujhey apni betiyon pe garv hai..(haha..some emotional dialogues..:))

All the three smile's n hugs...

Gunji&nup in their room....

Gunji: di kal college hai bhool mat jana..jaldi uthna kal humara pehla din hai college main..

Nup:haan gunjan main bhi who hi sooch hahi hoonn..(standing in front of mirror)

Gunjan:aacha dii goodnight..

Nupur: GOOD NIGHT.....(goes to her bed)

Both switches of the lights...Nupur sleeps..

Gunjan writing her diary..after some time she too sleeps..

Next morning

G&N at break fast table..

Finishes their breakfast..

While going to coll they both takes blessing of their father..

AT EXCEL COLLEGE:

Gunji&nups coming....

Nupur:gunjan...

Gunjan:haan dii....

Nupur:mujhe na thodi si ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

Gunjan:nahi dii..aap aisa math soncho..aap toh humare skool ke first day bhi ghabrati thi par aap school main acche rehne lagi naa...

Nup:haan..woh toh hai...main toh miss excel hoon...shayad agli miss universe toh mujhe ghabrana nahi chahiye..(smiles..)hai na..

Gunji:haann..

Some guy crashes with them..

Nupur:by god yahan koi dekhar nahi chal sakta kya???

Guy:hello aap beech main khadi ho ....main wrong nahi aap wrong ho..

Nupur:tumhe toh...

Gunjan:dii jaane do..

Nupur:nahi gunjan galti iski hai aur mujhe keh raha hai?bahut dekhe hai maine aise ladke..

Guy:maine bhio aap jaise bhaut dekhi hai..

Nupur:tum mujhe keh rahey ho..

Guy:jii haan aap hi ko ..aap paristaan ki pari thodi ho jo main aapko nahi keh sakta..

Nupur:tumhe dekh loongi..

Just then the bell rings..

Guy:haan dekhte rehna par mere paas aapke liye time nahi..mujhe class ka time ho raha hai..

The guy leaves..

Nupur:issey toh main dekh loongi..

Gunjan:haan dii par baad mein aaj pehla din hai toh late nahi hona chahiye..

Nupur:haan chal claas ke baad baat karenge..

Gunjan:bye dii

Nups:bye gunjan..apna khayal rakhna..darna nahi..

Gunjan:haan di..

They both goes their classes..

Nupur:oh no..shayad class sjhuru ho gayii hogi..

She gets into the class..

Sees the same guy who fought with her in the corridor..

Nupur:yeh yahan bhi ..main issey nahi chodungi?

Nupur sees a place to sit but there is no vacant place

There is only one vacant place beside the same guy..

Nupur:by god..!!! nupur tera din hi kharab hai...

Goes nd sits beside that guy..

Next scene at gunjan's class..

Gunjan is seated in her desk..

Some guy comes and sits beside her..

Guy:hey..remember me..me Samrat..

Gunjan:aap..

Samrat:haa main..aapki frnd sath main nahi hai..

Gunja:ohh....woh meri frnd nahi meri dii thi..

Samrat:ohh tabhi...

The lecturer enters..

They all greet her..

The lecturer is miss aha..

Miss aha:so everyone howz ur first day....

Everyone:good..

Miss aha:my self aha chand.. now its ur turn guys for the introduction..

Dia:hii myself dia ahuja

Annie:anita mansukhani

Some random guys..

Samrat:Samrat..samrat sehgal..

Gunjan:gunjan bhushan..

And rest of the class..(srry guys no time ryte about everyone)

Nxt scene to nupur's class..

Nupur to herself:by god!!! yeh sir toh sar paka rahe hai aur toh aur main kis ke paas baithi hui hoonn .. woh bhi ek sar pakau hai...hey bhagwaannnn...

The guy: tumney kuch kaha...

Nupur:hmm..nahi maine toh kuch bhi nahi kaha..shayad tumhare kaan baj rahe hai....aur agar kuch kaha bhi toh bhagwaan ka naam liya usmey tumhey koi problem..??

the guy: newayz my self MAYANK ...aur haan agar aap aab kahogi ki 'kya main aap ka parichai maanga' toh aisa mat kehna...kuch baatein bina boley bhi kahoge toh kuch bura nahi hai...

Nupur: (smiles)..myself NUPUR BHUSHAN..

After some time the bell rings..

While going Nupur's leg slips..she fells in mayank's arms...

They both seeing into each other's eyes..

Mayank: aapko baat ke saath saath theek se chalne bhi nahi aata....?

Nupur:tum?tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhey pakadne ki...

She stands..

Mayank: who kehtey hai na..pehle chori upar se seena zori..isi ko kehtey hai..

Nupur:hello...

Mayank leaves...

Nupur:huh!!samajhta kya hai yeh apne aapko..?(she to leaves to cafe)

At cafe..

Samrat..dia..annie..jacko..benji and some other r seated at a table..

Dia: sammy..tumhari aaj ki partner kaun thi..?

Sammy:GUNJAN..

Dia: woh toh behanjii type hai....upar se chashmish...

Every one there laughs..

Dia : actually Sammy maine tumhe kal kaha than a main kisi party main jaa rahi hoon..

Sammy:haann candy.

Dia: who party isi ke ghar thi..

Sammy:toh tumne njoy kiya..

Dia:tum shayad samajh saktey ho..yeh kaisi hai..aur iske ghar pe party..aur kaise reh sakti?

Sammy:ohhhh...puri gharelu typ..

Dia :hannn..

Nd other side..

Nupur:gunjan teri class kaisi hai...

Gunjan:aachi thi di.. aur aapki..

Nupur:meri..meri toh pooch hi math..

Gunjan:kyun..? Aachi nahi lagi?

Nupur:kya khak aachi hai..sarr ka dard.

Gunjan: (smiles)..aur di aapko pata hai ..

Nupur:kya..

Gunjan: kal who joh ladka humey mila than a?mall main..

Nupur:haan usney kuch naam bataya tha ..hmm..

Gunjan:Samrat..

Nupur:haan haan Samrat ..toh...aaja bhi aay kya woh..?...

Gunjan:who meri hi class main hai..upar se mere ki side main baitha tha aaj....

Nupur:aacha..yah sab chod..(they talk some thing we can't here..)

Both giggles?suddenly some one comes in front.. nupur crashes with him..

Nupur:by godddddd....aaa..

Nups in the guy's arms....

Hope u guys liked this update......

Do comment..

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 16 years ago

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sherizzz

@sherizzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

njoyed the whole epi...esplly mayur part...plz upadte next epi soon:)

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

That was so sweet.. loved Mayur's interaction. Cant wait to read more! 😊

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