[Crazy for You ❤️] - Ch.6 p14 Mayank Proposing - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
Amazing part as usual. Loved karan's entry as Gunjan's past..
Continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: me and just me

Amazing part as usual. Loved karan's entry as Gunjan's past..
Continue soon 🤗



thanks soo much..
will continue 2moro..
i need my mind to be in the right mood for FF..😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Nice & lovely update pri :)
Love
Piya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 4

Finally Gunjun and Samrat goes to the Prom Night and Gunjun is looking gorgeous and so is Samrat. Nupur and Mayank are looking awesome as well. Dia asks Uday out to the prom night and he says ok.
This is what Gunjun and Samrat are wearing:
Mayank & Nupur:
Dia & Uday:
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They all arrive at the Prom Night.
Samrat: wow gunjun you are looking so beautiful.
Gunjun: thanks. You are looking very handsome as well.
Samrat: *blushes*
Nupur: Hi Mayank. You are looking very stunning.
Mayank: thanks. u are looking pretty and gorgeous
Will continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
cute part but it is so shorh part plzz contuied soon long part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ....the dresses r .....mind blowing ..kaash mere paas bhi aisa koi hota ...nyways ....sammy blushes ...wowo ...continue shoon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

cute part but it is so shorh part plzz contuied soon long part



thnx hun..
sorry i was in a rush so i did a small update.
will continue 2moro!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hip-hop

wow ....the dresses r .....mind blowing ..kaash mere paas bhi aisa koi hota ...nyways ....sammy blushes ...wowo ...continue shoon



Hey Sara..thanks soo much..lolz i wish that too..
will continue 2moro!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 5: Christmas Eve

In Chapter 4 as you all read...Samrat asked Gunjun to go with him to the Christmas Snowball Party and Mayur asked Nupur. They all had lots of fun and Samrat made Gunjun smile again. The Best smile of her life with Samrat.
Next, you'll all see that now today is Christmas Eve and see how MayUr & Nupur gets closer
& Sajan getting closer.



Mayank: Calls Nupur & Gunjun!
*Phone rings @ Nupur's house*
Uday: Hello...hi Mayank.. whats up?
Mayank: Hii.. i wanted to you and Nupur & Gunjun to come over at my house for x-mas eve gathering. We can play games, chat, drink hot coco and more fun.
Uday: uhh... aaj... ohk i'll tell them.
Gunjun: Hi Uday.. tell us what?
Uday: oh.. hi um Mayank invited us his house for xmas eve gathering.. for hot coco, play games and more fun.
Nupur: wow! thats great! i am so ready
Uday: uhhh...
Gunjun: oh. that means Samrat will be there na?
Nupur: what do you mean gunjun? don't you like him? he's so cute, but not like my Mayank.

**As you all know now, Nupur is in love with Mayank**

Gunjun: nahin aisi baat nahin didi.. lekin u know what i mean?
Nupur: no i dont. You are being childish. Stop acting like that & forget whatever happened.
Samrat heard everything at the door when he was coming to Uday's house to surprise Gunjun with flowers and candies. Samrat heard everything from the doorstep and left flowers and candies at the doorstep and left. Uday heard something outside, so he goes outside and sees and sees Samrat heard everything and left. Uday told Nupur & Gunjun, see Samrat came here and heard everything and left. Thanks to Gunjun.
Gunjun: Kya..yeh mera problem nahin hai..
Nupur: kya... not my problem. what do u mean? let me tell u something Gunjun that we
came in this new atmosphere coz of you. You lost your love and your blaming it on to us
and Samrat. what did Samrat do? In fact, he doesn't even know about your past life.
Uday: oh boy...cat fight!
Nupur: Shut up Uday.

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Its 5pm Gunjun & Nupur aren't talking to each other but they get ready to go over at
Mayank & Samrat's house.They all arrive at their house and Mayank says Welcome to Our Home!


Nupur: hi...wow you guys have a beautiful home.

**Mayank & Samrat's mom comes in! She is known as just MOM!**

Mom: Welcome Nupur & Gunjun. I've heard so much about you both. Please come & sit. I'll
get you some hot coco. I can't believe its so snowy and horrible weather outside.
Gunjun: Hello Mayank. Is Samrat home?
Mayank: Yeah. He's in his room.
Gunjun: Can i please go talk to him?
Mayank: yeah sure. His room is upstairs and up the attic.
Gunjun: leaves.
Mayank: Is she ok?
Nupur: Not really. But i'll tell you another time. Ok, I am going to go help your mom in the
kitchen.
Uday: Hi... Nupur & Gunjun had a cat fight at home about Gunjun's past life.
Mayank: Kya.... ? Gunjun has a bad past kya?
Uday: Its something like that. But, letting you know Nupur started liking you. Ok.. im out.
Mayank: Wait. Nupur likes me? I kinda like her too. She's really optimistic. Aren't you going to
stay yaar?
Uday: Sorry, I have a hot date with Dia. Laters!
Gunjun: walks slowly up to Samrat's room and sees her own picture frame on the computer
screensaver. Samrats walks in from the bathroom and sees Gunjun standing there.
Samrat: Gunjun tum yahaan?
Gunjun: Samrat, I need to talk to you. Before I fall in love again and make a mistake, I need
to tell you everything about my past life. I don't want to start off our friendship with a wrong
step.
Samrat: Tum kisi aur se pyar karti ho? Maine laga tum aur mein ek ho sakte hai. I guess I was wrong.
Gunjun: Wait. Can we please just talk?
Samrat: sure. Lets talk! *Sounds pist*
Gunjun: Before i came into this new country (United Kingdom), I was already in love with my boyfriend. His name is Armaan. He was a doctor and love of my life.
Samrat: Was?
Gunjun: yeah. He died in Oberoi Hotel during the terrorists attacks. I was really sad and destroyed in his love. Aur mere parents found out about that and they told us to leave this country so i could get some peace.
Samrat: OMG. I am sorry about him. But we can have a chance. I am not that type of guy who would leave you. I really like you and thinking to spend rest of my life with you. Please don't give up.
Gunjun: I need some time. Its been still a year since he died.
Samrat: sure. you can have all the time you need.

****BREAK****

Back to Nupur & mom & Mayank.


Nupur: Hi aunty.
Mom: Hello Nupur. So Nupur, tell me who is in your family?
Nupur: Well, Its me, meri sister Gunjun, cousin Uday & Step-mom & dad.
Mom: Wow! What happened to your mom?
Nupur: Almost fell apart *tears in her eyes*. She died when Gunjun was born.
Mayank walks in. aare what happen Nupur? why are you crying? mom tumne kuch kaha usko?
Nupur: No, its ok.
Mom: Sorry to hear that beti.
Nupur: looked up to mom and says, aapne mujhe beti kaha? Gives a hug to mom!
Mayank: Come on Nupur lets take a picture near our x-mas tree. Where is Gunjun & Samrat.
Nupur: Probably making love.
Mayank: kya... what do you know that i don't?
Nupur: aare. you are too slow. Samrat loves Gunjun.
Mayank: Aur Gunjun?
Nupur: She likes him.
Mayank: So, talk about us now. I really like you too.
Nupur: *blushes* Walks away!
Mayank: smiles follows her. Comes & hugs her. Nupur unfortunately doesn't know she is standing under a mistole and Mayank tries to kiss her.
Nupur: turns around and says what was that for?
Mayank: look up. There is a mistole. Smiles at her.
Mom: Awwhh..soo cute.
Mayank: MOM! why are u snooping?
Mom: I am not. I am checking out my gonna-b daughter-in-law.
Nupur: faints!
Mayank: OMG.. Nupur.. Mom told you i was taking it slow. and you just had to say it.
Mayank: splashes water on Nupur's face. Lifts her up and puts her on his bed.
Nupur: Grabs Mayank's hands and says, " I LOVE U!"
Mayank: smiles and says Mujhe Shaadi Karogi?
Nupur: Gets up. Kya? Is this your way of proposing me?
Mayank: Nahin.. I was only practing.
Nupur: Well, practice in front of the mirror.

***BREAK***

Will continue soon!
Are you guys getting excited that Mayank is going to propose Nupur?
&& Do you think Gunjun will start loving Samrat?

Prii
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aree wah Pri ..kya scene the by god 😆
Lovely part dear.. 😛 Awesome dear..Enjoyed reading it.. & must say lovely dresses 😉
Thanks 4d pm..
love u
piya.
Edited by piya2025 - 16 years ago

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