The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~

First Previous

Page

113

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1111

Mayank admitted his feelings for Nupur to his mom! YAY! Albei, it was unwittingly, but you wrote that scene so well, I could see it happening before me. And then, they both have changed subtly no? To make the other one happy? Mayank has become more relaxed and Nupur has started to study harder.

And on the other side, Sammy has become a complete bookworm. So cute. *pinches cheeks* And humari Gunjan mehmsahb is still coming to terms with her feelings for him.

And Radz and Adi, they've become pretty good friends no? *does a little dance*

Loving the story!

Love,

Radz

Quote

RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1112

it was late but kyunki mera result saturday ko tha so its completely f9 and also as u weren't well..........I hope ur f9 now........ok!!!!! so the update was really nice.........I for a change loved the radz& adi scene........and Mayur parts were awesome as always.........sanji prt was nice too......(bechara benjie)........atlast the sajan prt was short but very well written...... it was a cute scene.............overall 100\100 for this update..... only 1question is tht Abhay for dia.............

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1113

wow debby awesome part loved the ending mayur scene cont soon

Quote

sherizzz

@sherizzz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1114

woowww debs......coooll updates........Wen mayu said "teenon"....awww i can well imagine mummyji's expression......n mayu like bhaagooo.....😃

And mayu mentioned JWM.....😲😲😲....i was startled jus like Nupz....😆😆😆

Quote

Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1115

oh gosh debby, i am sorry for commenting so late. hope you are feeling better now jan. I loveddddddddddddddd this part. It was one of the best, everything was sooooooooooooo like mayur and sooooooooooooo relatable as usual. Hats off to you for always being able to restore and maintain mayur's real and original charm. lovedddddddddddd it so much jan. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote

GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1116

😆ooooooooooo debby how will i catch up .... I want to read from chapter 1 and... it is chapter 57 ... !!!😲

ok dear give me time I will read it part by part and will comment on it ......also in parts .....😆.........😉

Quote

Anjalika

@Anjalika Khanna

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#1117

wow awesum update

plz continue soon...........

Quote

MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1118

maazaaaaaaa aagya amazing
really nice cntinue
and yes better take care of urself

Quote

416391

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#1119

heyy debby!!!

its ok.......but u better take care of yourself now.......and get well soon

coming to the update......its was fantabulous.....i loved it!!!

mayur were so damn gud....i could literally imagine them..

the sajan scene was short be it was awesome.....

update soon whenever u get time and do rest...

Quote

Disha

@disha141094

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1120

hey debby....awesum part agn.....luved d mayank n mom convo..esp.

**Mom: (nodding her head from side to side) dekh rahi hoon ke mere bete ko Mumbai ki beach se pyar hai, notes se pyar hai ya notes dene wale se?
Mayank: (smiling indulgently) teeno se.**

hehehe....w8in 4 d next

Quote

1 ... 109 110 111 112 113

The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 112

Related Topics

Explore Topics