Ishveer FF: The Cell Phone Exchange :- Chapter 1 on page 4

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Hey guys! Long time no see! So, this a new FF on our beloved couple Ishveer[<3] ! This nowhere near the original story of Meri Aashiqui tumse hi, but i think you all will like it as much as you like the show. I decided to write this since i saw that the forum has been so silent. So here ya'll go' i hope you enjoy this. I will continue this if i got good response...😊





PROLOGUE

WHERE IS MY DAMN PHONE?!

"Oh God Ishani! Can't you walk a little bit faster! We will miss it!", Rithika screamed at her best friend, Ishani, as she moved further in the crowd, trying to get to the front of the it for a better view.

"Easy there girl, maybe you go on walking in the midst of concert crowds every other day, but it's my first time, so please have a little mercy on me." Replied Ishani as she tried to catch up with her friend which seemed next to impossible with people huddling and pushing each other away.

"Oh come on girl! It's RV's concert! And you know the crowd, if we will not walk faster then we won't get the front seat and if that happens then you are going to get to listen me taunt you about this every single day of your life!"

"Oh please! I am not even a fan of his and you were the one applying makeup for straight two hours to get that damn eyeliner wing perfect, so you are the one who got us late so don't you dare blame me!" Ishani said. She herself was dressed in a white tank top and a black velvet skater skirt with white flowers on it. Her feet were in black ankle length high heeled boots Rithika had forced her. She was wearing silver earrings while her hair went in waves down her back. She had gone for the whole smoking eyeshadow look with a minimum amount of lip gloss. Rithika was wearing a red lacy dress which went down till her mid thigh with black heels, her hair in curls while her face was having the perfect amount of makeup.

"Hey! I have to look perfect today! What if he calls us on the stage? Or if we get to see him backstage? I don't want to look like a chipmunk in front of my legend!"

"Oh like he's going to do that! And no offence, but you look more like a constipated chipmunk at home." Ishani said as she finally made it to the line Rithika was standing in.

"Oh please! I look like a dolled-up chipmunk! I am a goddess!", Rithika retorted back flipping her hair.

"Yeah, sure darling, whatever helps you sleep at night." Ishani said as she stood beside her smirking.

"Oh shut up." Rithika said as she hit her friend on the back off her head, smiling at her.

"Ow! Woman that hit hard! What the hell do you eat!?" Complained Ishani as she rubbed at the spot Rithika had hit her.

"Oh stop acting like a baby! I barely touched you!" Rithika said rolling her eyes as she gave her a friendly smile.

Ishani laughed as she reached rummaged through her purse looking for her phone. "It has to be here somewhere." She muttered to herself as she checked all the pockets and chains but came up with nothing. "Oh God where is it?" She said, her tone frustrated.

"Hey, what's the matter? Are the huge cans of coke you drank finally knocking at your bladder?" Rithika joked thinking that Ishani wants to use the washroom

"Coke. Yes. The coke. Uh Huh!" Ishani said, her eyes widened at the realization. She started searching in her purse frantically hoping that her assumption was wrong.

Rithika noticed the sudden anxiety in her behaviour and became concerned " Hey whats the matter?"

" I can't find my phone." Said Ishani finally giving up.

"You had at when we were getting those fries and coke, I remember because Prateek won't stop texting you."

"Oh Shit! Where is my damn Phone?!" yelled Ishani as a few people in the line glared at her.

"Hey-hey! Don't panic! Maybe you left it at that table we sat on." Suggested Rithika as she checked her watch for the time and starined her neck upwards to look at the amount of people ahead her in the line.

"Damn! I have to get it!" Said Ishani as she noticed the disappointment in her friends's eyes. Their number was going to come and there was no way they can get there and come back on time since it will atleast take 10 minutes.

"You stand in the line and I will go get the phone, ok? I will be back soon." Ishani yelled as she made her way towards the shop. It was near the concert ground only, a minute walk away. She reached the shop and searched on the table they sat on but found it empty. Frustated with her carelessness she stomped her foot and ended up hitting the table which resulted the spoon on it to fall. She rushed to pick it up and saw shining object on the grass, it was a phone. Hope bursted in her as she picked it up, it looked like her phone. Relieved to have it back she let out a huge sigh of relief. She thrusted it back in her purse and made a run to Rithika. She found her requesting the security to wait for her. Rithika beamed at the sight of her and they soon made their way inside the concert. She ran holding Ishani's hand as she tried to get infront of the stage. She wanted to shake hands with the man who possessed the melodious voice she had been listening to for a year and forcing ishani to listen to but the damn woman won't give in, ofcourse she wanted to be in the front! As Ishani tried to catch up with her pace she asked her, "Did you got your phone?"

"Oh! Yes and thanks for asking as soon as I got here." Ishani said sarcastically' referring to her stupid action of getting them in first instead of asking about her phone.

"Girl! That security guard was almost going to hit me if you hadn't showed up, I care about my life! And I want to be in the front so no more getting late. It's RV's convert for God's sake!" Rithika said defending herself and her star.

"Yes, yes, the man who has not even showed his face to his fans for more than a year. What sort of star is he?"

"That makes him cool and hot."

"That doesn't makes sense. How can you look cool and hot, both at the same ti-" Ishani was cut-off as the lights went off indicating that the star was soon going to reveal himself.

"Oh. My. God. He's coming, he's coming! Ishani! He's coming! Oh my gosh! We will finally see his face!" Rithika started ranting as crowd got excited too. Ishani looked around herself in amazement as she wondered why everyone is getting so worked up! He's not even that popular Nor was his singing so good.

"Oh God Rithika, will you stop yelling? My ears are hurting! He's not even that good."

"Oh please! You know that even you want to see his face!" Rithika said flipping her off.

Even though she wanted to stick to her opinion, still Ishani cannot deny the fact that even she was a little bit excited and eager to see the the man who's voice she was forced to listen every single day since Rithika first found him on Youtube almost 1 year ago.

Ishani was about to retort back when a male, husky, sexy voice boomed in the speakers, silencing everyone.

"Hey guys." The voice said, and all Ishani could think was how hot the voice sounded. She had never heard RV's songs clearly so she was surprised to listen the beautiful voice he possessed.

A white and a blue spotlight centered at the stage revealing the man of the night. He was wearing a black V-neck t'shirt with black jeans and shoes, his midnight black hair styled in the just-out-from-bed look.

His head was lowered and as he raised it up the light increased. Everyone was silent, watching his every move.

The light finally basked the whole stage revealing his face and as ishani saw him all she could think was how hot and sexy he looked even with that blank expression he had. Goddamnit he was smoking hawt. She was totally dumbstruck with his looks that she almost missed his brown eyes staring at her black ones. She immediately blushed as a smirk found it's way on his face as he noticed her reaction.

The concert ground was filled with screams of cheers and hoots of the crowd a second later.




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Constructive Criticism is more than welcome. 😉
Edited by Anne30ishveer - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome, Anne! Really loved it. I'm sorry I can't write a longer reply at the moment, but please continue this one. It's exciting and I'm eager to know if Ishani and RV have a link. Does he know her? I have many questions and hope you continue to write this FF. So many writers begin and give up in between only. I'll be writing longer replies too. Just bit occupied at the moment. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Anne darling
it was damn cute update dear
loved it to the core.
its interesting story too dear
excited to know what is going to happen between Ishani and Ranveer
keep rocking dear 😉😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haye Meri jaan..
Kya likha h.. muaahhh..!!😊
Dil Khush kr Diya..
Ek baat batau..
M kabse aisa ff likhne ya padhne ka soch rhi thi..
I mean RV as a rockstar or Ishani uski fan..
Kamaal ka likha h..
Vo phone pakka Ishani ka h ?
Waiting for next update soon..😉
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Hey Anne..

Very very interesting concept and a very good start.. RV as Rockstar.. wow.. 👏 and have to say u described his looks very well 😉
and the best part was the way Ishani's thoughts changed with just one look on him.. 🤣

Plz do continue this.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great storyline sis... Do continue it... But pls don't stop abruptly ... b safe & sound
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Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey Anne..

Very very interesting concept and a very good start.. RV as Rockstar.. wow.. 👏 and have to say u described his looks very well 😉
and the best part was the way Ishani's thoughts changed with just one look on him.. 🤣

Plz do continue this.. 😊


@bold totally agree..😆🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pls dont leave this ff midway.
Cool & amazing concept 😛
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Awesome, Anne! Really loved it. I'm sorry I can't write a longer reply at the moment, but please continue this one. It's exciting and I'm eager to know if Ishani and RV have a link. Does he know her? I have many questions and hope you continue to write this FF. So many writers begin and give up in between only. I'll be writing longer replies too. Just bit occupied at the moment. :)

Hey Elvish!! Thank you for replying, and no worries dear you can comment whenever you have time to do so...And I know right, I myself have not updated my previous ff but actually I just don't have any idea about what should I do with it, I mean I have ideas but it just doesn't fits on ishveer, which is why I started this new ff! Hope you enjoyed and I really need to edit this, I know. This was a rough draft and I will try to update next weekend! Love ya'...⭐️
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Originally posted by: RookeyRookers

Reserved ...its awesome .

Thanks a lot...⭐️😳

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