Ishveer FF:Undying Love Of Two Souls| Updated(pg.No.3). - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: harisha39

It was a great one didi's...Glad to see u both together as always... 😉 Waiting for the epi...How r u both didi's???Take Care.. ❤️


HI harisha..
Glad u found it great one..
We will always be together.. 😉
Yeah.. Will update soon..
We both are gud.. Wht abt u..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nice story line dear.
Plz continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Ishveermyheart

Nice story line dear.
Plz continue.


Sure.. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: harisha39

Ya I'm fine...Glad to know u both are fine); 😆


😛😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Hey gudiya and sana. Niz job. But I can't get the outline clear now.
Waiting for the update. That will clear me
Keep smiling and carry on both
Take care😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hey gudiya and sana. Niz job. But I can't get the outline clear now.

Waiting for the update. That will clear me
Keep smiling and carry on both
Take care😃

Hi, Maya!

Sorry dear, for confused outline but surely you will get it in updates.
Thanks

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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
First Segment!

A girl in a blue jeans and blue shirt with light makeup standing around avenue! "Happy new year", someone whispered, her ear recognized the sound which brings smile on her dull face she turned her face with lovely smile which making her face looks more beautiful, her eyes met with the eyes who was pointing her towards the sky. when she trolled her head saw queue of colorful balloons with arc shape which displaying "Happy New Year" she took her feet up in joys and hugged him, he gave her cute smile and again pointing her towards sky, she turned and moved her eyes to sky, she saw another big balloon with word "sunny", Ranveer you, with cute anger face she roved her head and suddenly her face expression changed in frustration she didn't found anyone a drop of tears start falling from her left eye and her lips said just one word Ranveer! So you are there, baby what are you doing here? Party going on inside. I know you loved the place which surrounded of trees but if your father and specially your bodyguard will see you like this he will just change the shape of my face. Actually I was not feel well that's why I came here Chirag, said ishani by interrupting him. Okay, no problem!! By the way, Happy new year sweaty, said Chirag. Thank You with a light smile Ishani responded him. So are you coming inside, asked Chirag? Yes, sure, you just go I'm coming, said Ishani. Where are you Ranveer? It's first time happened in this many years after our friendship first time another person wished me new year wishes and you let it happened why? She took her cell phone and dialed Ranveer's number but no any response from his side with disappointed face she moved inside the party hall. The night is full of lighting everyone seems happy with their close one, families and friends enjoying every moment but is this night is really a striking night for everyone? No there are many person on the earth who can't find their happiness in this nights and that persons are those whose "heart is broken" and a broken heart can't feel anything that's it. And in this brightening night there is someone taking lots of pain in his heart and tears in his eyes walking on the road with lots of old memories suddenly his feet slips but someone held him by his arms and saved him to falling. What happened man in this lighting night why are you looking so sad? Asked stranger. Nothing, the boy responded and start to walk. Hey, can we stay together for some time, asked stranger in very pleased manner? But why? boy said. To release pain, said stranger. But I don't want though I know it will never be escape, said boy with watery eyes. Is someone your close person left you too? Queried stranger. Is someone left you also? Asked boy with surprised face. Yes, my love my wife, said stranger.

Why? Where is she? And why she left you? Asked boy. She is dead, couple of hours ago, replied stranger. What she left you and you are here with not minding state, you're wife your love is passed away will never come back to you and you are standing here like nothing happened, said boy in bit loud voice. She can't leave me she is always with me even I can feel her now with us, said stranger. I can't believe, how can be you like that, told boy with confused face. I can't cry because I know my tears always give her pain so how I can give her pain, I can't kill myself because the little wound on my body always brought tears in her eyes and I can't bear the pain of her tears and I know she know very well I can't leave without her, so I'm sure she will come back to me if she will not then she will bring me to her I know just I have to do some wait, said stranger. What strategy is that, said boy with painful smile? What happened with you hopefully you can tell me now, asked stranger? I lost someone whom I do love so much since I saw her, she is going to marry someone else, responded boy. Why? She doesn't love you? Questioned stranger. I'm his friend only, boy answered. Is she happy with the boy whom she going to do marriage? Asked Stranger. This question made boy confused, He quiet for a while and then said may be yes. May be? You are not sure, said stranger. Boy with struggling face turned himself by showing his back to stranger and said, no, she is happy, yes she is happy, the boy whom she is going to marry is a rich and handsome so why she will not be happy, yes she is happy by saying this he moved back he got surprised because he didn't found stranger and asked question himself where he has gone?

After while he start to move and finally his feet found destination. He unlocked the door of a room while he enter in the room and found darkness only there, he light up candle that brought some light in that dark room with little candle light the walls of room which are scathing with some images are giving more beautiful looks, he goes slowly move forward to the center wall of room and touches it with his fingers which displaying a beautiful girl face with innocent smile to see this smile he took a long breath and said, I lost you ishani forever caressing image with his hand sit down to his knee, he roved his eyes and saw a pen and closed eyes. In a library a girl is writing her class task unexpectedly her pen stopped writing as ink was over, Oh shit! She threw it away with bit anger but suddenly her eyes saw a pen at the front of her though it was held by another person's hand she stood up and snatched it, sorry actually it's bit urgent, said a girl to that person. Okay but return me back, said that person. What is this Ishani? Its right way to used others things, said a boy. What is your problem Ranveer, it's your pen? Then stop and don't disturb me, I'm doing my math assignment if it will be not completed then that MM (Monster Monika) will punished me, said ishani with irritating face. Why you have much fear from miss Monika, asked ranveer? Don't you see till stick she always carrying along with her every time, responded ishani. Oh! So your frightened are with her stick but Ishani you also have stronger thing to defend yourself, said ranveer. What? Asked ishani with questioning face. Your dhi kilo hand, said ranveer with snickering. Isahni with anger face and taking book up in her one hand to showing him for beating but with realizing face for no I have to complete this let me see you later by saying she start to do her work. Okay let see what you will do, said Ranveer showing his hand to her. What this pen doing in your hand? This pen is empty it's not working, it's useless, asked ishani? Just for you it can be useless but not for me, said Ranveer. Are you crazy Ranveer? Said ishani. Yes I'm, said Ranveer by leaving. And this bring smile on ishani's face, idiot, said ishani with cute smile. With her smile he opened his eyes by holding pen in his hand. Don't you know ishani even you will never been know what is the important of this pen is for me dragged the pen near to his heart. You can't be mine ishani but this all your thing are mine because they have your touches and I can feel your existence in them, but just only you can't be mine he asked by crying and tears falling from his eyes. Why, just why? Why it happening with me why? If you can't be mine then why I met you? Why my heart just want only you why? He questioning himself with question nock of pen get inside in his heart and injuring him and it start bleeding. Ouch! What happened? Are you alright? Oh my God blood! Ishani your hand is bleeding, how this glass broke, asked chirag. Don't know, I was just holding it and it broke himself, I don't know how it happened, said ishani with confused face. Its okay but how much it's bleeding said Chirag. It's okay I'm fine Chirag, said ishani. Fine, you know what ishani when your bodyguard will see this wounds in your hand he will killed me almost, stopped Chirag! Stop calling him bodyguard he is not my bodyguard he has name Ranveer and he is my best friend and I'm his, he is careful for me that's why he behaved like that but you will not understood it, ishani said by interrupting.

With each of his question the nock of pan going inside in his heart scrunching him badly but he can't feel pain the pain of losing ishani was much more than this pain for him now his eyes start to shedding blood of tears and slowly his eyes being off and his lips was calling just a name ishani. Sorry ishani! I was just joking, said Chirag. It's okay, can we leave for home now as I am not feeling well, said ishani. Yes, sure but ishani how can I leave the place so soon as my all friends are there what they will be think about me if you don't mind my driver will drop you, said chirag.

Yes sure, said ishani. Hey, Ishani you come back so soon? Why? Asked Falguni. Yes, mom I am perfectly fine but was not feeling well so just come back, ishani answered. Okay go and take rest. Told Falguni. Ishani shook her head as okay, Ishani in thoughts, where is Ranveer is he at home? Mom called ishani to falguni? Yes, said Falugni. Mom, Papa? He is sleeping, today he slept early, answered falguni. Oh! It's good, okay, mom I'm too going sleep, said ishani. It mean he is not with papa then where he is? She goes towards servant quarter. The door was locked she knocked on the door. You came Rnveer a old women said by opening the door. No kaki I'm, said ishani . It means ranveer also not at home then where he is? Ishani in her thoughts. Don't worry kaki he will come back soon he will be enjoying somewhere as today is new year night, said ishani. Enjoying and my Ranveer? He was in so much pain today because of you, when you agreed to marry with Chirag, said Amba in her thoughts. Kaki? Said ishani. Yes, amba responded. Kai you go and sleep he will comeback, said isahni with light smile. Amba nodded her head as yes.

Ishani in her room, where ae you Ranveer? Either you are responding my calls where are you please come back please Ranveer. She comes near to window, Today I took decision to marry with Chirag but I m bit confused with it want to discus with you but you are.. where are you please come suddenly a side of window in speed opened with forced of air and hit ishani's injured hand, Och Ranveer! She called by feeling pain. Isahni, Ranveer open his eyes slowly by calling her name. when he opened his eyes completely he found blood on the floor then he noticed and slowly kept his hand on his heart and took a deep breath. Both were holding theirs wounds to halt bleeding.

Sorry for typos and brevity.


Edited by -gudzila - 8 years ago
PrinceAsif thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Great update sissy...but y this shitty chirag always has to interfere in ISHVEER'S life...i can't even bear his godforsaken name...anyways a marvelous episode u have given ...waiting for only ISHVEER scenes without any disturbances of chirag...b safe & stay healthy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Hi Gudzila
I like your update so much. You have chosen very interesting track. Ishaani misses Ranveer so much.
Update the next one soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Just amazing episode, girls. The plot is very interesting. please don't stop writing. I want ishaani to realise her love for Ranveer.
Update soon

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