IshVeer TS From bottom of my heart part 2 updated on page 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
MM, this little piece of your writing was brilliantly captivating. The pain and anguish in which Ishani is living was marvelously mentioned in your lines. How much I love the Ishani that regrets, although what Ranveer goes through is brutal. You reminded me of the show. Sighs... those memories.

Good job, MM. Please update the chapter soon, too. I can't wait!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Anne30ishveer

Hey Anjali, Yes I do write but I have just written a ff on ishveer and have updated just the prologue and first chapter. I do want to write more but time doesn't permits...😊


I am glad you are writing😊 Yeah the time can be a challege😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

MM, this little piece of your writing was brilliantly captivating. The pain and anguish in which Ishani is living was marvelously mentioned in your lines. How much I love the Ishani that regrets, although what Ranveer goes through is brutal. You reminded me of the show. Sighs... those memories.

Good job, MM. Please update the chapter soon, too. I can't wait!


Thank you so much Elvish🤗Ishani is in pain and so is the pain Ranveer goes through😭😭 The memories of the show just make me sad about how they ended it😭😭

Thank you so much sweetie😳😳 I will try to update ASAP😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a very big res will unres soon as possible my dr MM🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Update, update, update! MM, you can't disappear like this. Update soon, darling!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Update, update, update! MM, you can't disappear like this. Update soon, darling!


Hehe so sweet😊 Sorry for making you wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58


AN : Hey peeps😊😊 Sorry for being so late, studies have been really hectic😭😭 With mock exam and tons of projects and tests right around the corner😭🤢 Anyways thank you for the feedback😃😃 A huge thank you to Ash for helping me and Elvish for encouraging me. Have a nice reading😳


Part 2

Ishani took a deep breath before she dived into the water , the memories with Ranveer still fresh in her mind . It had been two years, two years and yet she still remembered his eyes pleading her to take a stand for him.

She closed her eyes slowly as every memory came to her in full tilt , everything from the first time she met him to their almost kiss and last but not least his hand parting hers. Her heart pained in agony and she felt herself becoming numb. She wondered if it was really worth it to stick her head above the surface.


"Ishani are you okey? You have been in there for a long time" asked Laila worried as she knocked on the washroom door. Getting no respond got Laila worried for her friend and without a second thought she broke the door and rushed inside going rigid upon seeing the scene , fortunately she reacted on instinct , and rushed to the tub and pulled Ishani up.


She shut the faucet, took warm towel around her and hugged her to her heart.

"I am alive, dont start crying," Ishani said impassively to her worried friend.

Laila sighed, as much as it tempted to scold her , she knew her friend was not in a state of grasping something. Laila mourned over the situation her friend was in , being deprived of the person she loved in the worst way possible.

Ishani " S..so much agony, so many tears and so many unsaid things" she whispered in a broken state. Laila knew how much Ishani loved Ranveer, every night she would wake up to her screaming his name and until daylight she would stay awake crying for not being able to deny the allegation placed on her lover that dreadful day.

Two years ago Ishani had knocked on her door and without any hesitation she welcomed her with open arms, but seeing her friend in this state for two years was more than enough.

This had to end, she had to play her part to not let two lovers part , because she knew they loved each other unconditionally

" Ishani, I will bring Ranveer here in two days , be ready" she said and for the first time in two years did she see a little spark of light in her friends eyes.

It was now her responsibility as her caretaker to not let the spark of light vanish but make it bigger and brighter



Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
finally you updated it.
in two days she is going to meet ranveer.
she is the happiest person.
but actually she will be more happy after meeting ranveer.
keep going..
post the next soon. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishveermyheart

finally you updated it.
in two days she is going to meet ranveer.
she is the happiest person.
but actually she will be more happy after meeting ranveer.
keep going..
post the next soon. 😊


Hey😊😊

Yeah finally updated it😆😆

Yes, finally there pain will end and they will meet😳😳

I will update ASAP😃😃

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