IshVeer TS From bottom of my heart part 2 updated on page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey😛 For those who dont know me I used to write on IshVeer😃 This might become a three shots , depending on if you guys like it or not😆


From bottom of my heart


Part 1

Amba looked outside the window after another night off waking up hearing her son scream. His screams so powerful , so full of pain and yearning it made her freeze each time. Amba had cursed the Parekh family for the accusation they had put on her son , but it looked like her son was cursed with lifelong pain.

Amba had tried to heal him with all her motherly love and had prayed each and every day for his happiness , but nothing was helping. He was perhaps wealthier , but she knew as a mother that every second he breathed was painful for him. He was longing for her , the one person Amba was so scared of .

Ishani Parekh. The name left a bitter taste in her mouth, the one girl who had the power to make him and destroy him. His every happiness , his every pain related to that one girl. Amba knew what kind of a person Ishani was , she also knew the amount of fondness her husband and son had for her. What her son and husband forgot was Baa, her grandmother , and no one better than Amba knew how wicked that women was.

Kailash " For how long Amba? I don't know about you but I can't take another night seeing him wake up from nightmares " he said tiredly. Amba saw the circles under his eyes which were bloodshot .

Amba went to her son and ran her hands through his hair and kissed his forehead. Drops of tears fell on his cheeks , which made her son let out a breath.

"Come here " said Ranveer , opening his arms for his mother who fell down in his arms. Ranveer let her sob in his arms , knowing the pain she was carrying. Ranveer knew his mom was doing everything to get back the glint of life in his eyes , but his happiness had been taken away by one accusation .

Ranveer shut his eyes, remembering how they had told Ishani he had cheated on her with her sister. He had known that his class would never match with Ishani , as he was a drivers son and therefore he shouldn't be in a relationship with her , but she had insisted that their love was stronger than class difference.

All he was left with was a shattered heart and memories to haunt him.


Constructive criticism is more than welcome😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
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MM! Welcome back! You've absolutely no idea how happy you've made me by returning back to writing. And this piece... It was magic after your long hiatus. I missed reading from you, and oh, you've improved so, so much! There were almost no grammatical errors (unless I missed them because of my excitement, which I keep doing all the time, you know :D ). Yikes, you start with an AU, right? It'll have the same plot as the show but with slight difference.

Angst! Ah, favorite, favorite! Ranveer screaming and dying from inside and Ishani not there? God, I'm excited to know what went wrong and if he and Ishani were in relationship already. What did Disha do? And Baa. These women, I tell you! They need to be thrown in a mental asylum. Vahi unka dimag thikane aayega. :@ Wow, lovely work, darling! Update the next part soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

MM! Welcome back! You've absolutely no idea how happy you've made me by returning back to writing. And this piece... It was magic after your long hiatus. I missed reading from you, and oh, you've improved so, so much! There were almost no grammatical errors (unless I missed them because of my excitement, which I keep doing all the time, you know :D ). Yikes, you start with an AU, right? It'll have the same plot as the show but with slight difference.

Angst! Ah, favorite, favorite! Ranveer screaming and dying from inside and Ishani not there? God, I'm excited to know what went wrong and if he and Ishani were in relationship already. What did Disha do? And Baa. These women, I tell you! They need to be thrown in a mental asylum. Vahi unka dimag thikane aayega. :@ Wow, lovely work, darling! Update the next part soon!


Elvish🤗 You saved me okey😳😳 I was so nervouse ,gosh😆 Thank you so much😳😳 I would not have been back if it had not been for you😳😳 Aww okey now I am blushing ☺️☺️ I am sho sho happy you liked it sweetie😳😳 Also I can't take credit for having no grammatical errors, as Ashu helped me with my errors😆 I will try my best to improve with my grammer😳😳 Yes it is an AU because they were a couple unlike in the show 😆 It has the same plot , apart from them being a couple and ow Amba is not bad 😆😆

You do love angst😆😳😳 Ishani and he was in releationship😳😳 Disha and Baa😡😡😡 Lets throw them together in mental asylum😆😆 Thank you so much❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey MM
welcome back ⭐️⭐️⭐️
wow an update from you after so long thats really a treat now😳😳😳
crying and screaming ranveer haye even you also entered the angst zone 😆😆😆
amba was tensed about his son's tears 😲 rare thing and kailash spoke also rarest of the rare
but this was good that they were in a relationship one thing was solace but like elvish said disha and baa dont send them to mental asylum there insane people also have humanity but these two idiots deserve even worst than that
really nice one i liked it totally
now please update it soon and dont you again become Mr.India now

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey MM
welcome back ⭐️⭐️⭐️
wow an update from you after so long thats really a treat now😳😳😳
crying and screaming ranveer haye even you also entered the angst zone 😆😆😆
amba was tensed about his son's tears 😲 rare thing and kailash spoke also rarest of the rare
but this was good that they were in a relationship one thing was solace but like elvish said disha and baa dont send them to mental asylum there insane people also have humanity but these two idiots deserve even worst than that
really nice one i liked it totally
now please update it soon and dont you again become Mr.India now


Hey beautiful🤗

Thank you❤️❤️ Yeah I dont usually write angst😆 So I will have to take advises from Elvish and LM😉😉 Yes Amba was worried about her son , she is actually a caring mother here😳😳 Kailash is not khamosh here😆😆😆 Disha and Baa is😭

I am glad you liked it dearie😳😳😳

I will try to update asap😃😃 Hehee 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OH. MY. GOD!

Cherie posted a new fic! *squeals like a fangirl*


Ahem, I'm alright now. Forgive me, this is my first review in months so I might be a little sluggish. But by Jove, how much you've improved at that! Honestly, for a moment there I was wondering what I'm reading because you and angst is the last combination I was thinking of, and yet this was the most pleasant surprise I could have today.



Ranveer screaming and waking up from his nightmare... How it pleases the sadist in me (and all the angst lovers). A sane KAmba who are trying to help him but know that only one person can mend that broken heart and that's Ishaani. And wow, alternate universe where they did confess their love but Disha and Baa like always made their story go sour. Mental fools. But I agree with Dv that mental asylum isn't a place for the two of them. But Ranveer... God, pain and heartbreak is just written in his destiny across a thousand timelines also, no?



This was brilliant, brilliant work, love! Update the next part soon, I can't wait to see how this goes ahead now!



Loads of love,
LM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

OH. MY. GOD!

Cherie posted a new fic! *squeals like a fangirl*


Ahem, I'm alright now. Forgive me, this is my first review in months so I might be a little sluggish. But by Jove, how much you've improved at that! Honestly, for a moment there I was wondering what I'm reading because you and angst is the last combination I was thinking of, and yet this was the most pleasant surprise I could have today.



Ranveer screaming and waking up from his nightmare... How it pleases the sadist in me (and all the angst lovers). A sane KAmba who are trying to help him but know that only one person can mend that broken heart and that's Ishaani. And wow, alternate universe where they did confess their love but Disha and Baa like always made their story go sour. Mental fools. But I agree with Dv that mental asylum isn't a place for the two of them. But Ranveer... God, pain and heartbreak is just written in his destiny across a thousand timelines also, no?



This was brilliant, brilliant work, love! Update the next part soon, I can't wait to see how this goes ahead now!



Loads of love,
LM


Senorita🤗🤗

You are just to adorable🤗

Aww dont worry about it sweetie❤️ Yeah Ikr this is really out of my comfort zone , but I love challenging myself😆😳 So I will do my best and I can't wait to learn a little more how to angst😳😳

Poor Ranveer, he is living zoombie in the moment😭😭 Kamba is sane her😳 They are actually going to be awesome here😆 Because I love strong , badass and protective mothers😳😳 You will read about the confession in the next update😃😃 Amba and Disha is a lost case😡🤢

My poor IshVeer😭 😭 So painfully beautiful they are💔

Thank you so much love🤗

Loads of love
Anjali❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A NEW STORY FROM YOU *SQUEALS*


The starting of this TS had my heart skip a beat 😆 ( no kidding )
Poor soul , ranveer is always in pain no?😭 Who am i kidding i love angst 😆😆 you already know how much of a fan i am for Angst stories 🤣⭐️ , truth to be said thou , I'm in LOVE with this TS and i cant wait to read further , this is something quiet new as we have usually seen the past script being the same and the future things changing but in this case Ranveer and Ishani were already in a relationship , which makes me curious ( being the curious cat i am ) to know what happened that caused such a scenario . And Baa and Disha , gosh i dislike those two so much , always interrupting with IshVeer😆😡.

Haseena i think this is my second most fav story / Os from you ( after A&F ) and i cannot wait for you to write the next part 😃 .



With heaps of love

Ash 😳
Edited by IshveerForever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshveerForever

A NEW STORY FROM YOU *SQUEALS*


The starting of this TS had my heart skip a beat 😆 ( no kidding )
Poor soul , ranveer is always in pain no?😭 Who am i kidding i love angst 😆😆 you already know how much of a fan i am for Angst stories 🤣⭐️ , truth to be said thou , I'm in LOVE with this TS and i cant wait to read further , this is something quiet new as we have usually seen the past script being the same and the future things changing but in this case Ranveer and Ishani were already in a relationship , which makes me curious ( being the curious cat i am ) to know what happened that caused such a scenario . And Baa and Disha , gosh i dislike those two so much , always interrupting with IshVeer😆😡.

aseena i think this is my second most fav story / Os from you ( after A&F ) and i cannot wait for you to write the next part 😃 .



With heaps of love

Ash 😳


Choco monster🤗🤗

Aww 😆😳 I KNOW YOU ARE ALL ANGST LOVERS😆😆 I am glad you liked it sweetie😃😃 Yes Ishveer were a couple😳😳 Baa and disha 🥱 After my babies😭😭 Dont worry "someone " will protect them 😉

Aww really? Thats makes me shoo happy😃😃 the next update will be here soon😳😳

Loads of love
Anjali❤️❤️
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer


Choco monster🤗🤗

Aww 😆😳 I KNOW YOU ARE ALL ANGST LOVERS😆😆 I am glad you liked it sweetie😃😃 Yes Ishveer were a couple😳😳 Baa and disha 🥱 After my babies😭😭 Dont worry "someone " will protect them 😉

Aww really? Thats makes me shoo happy😃😃 the next update will be here soon😳😳

Loads of love
Anjali❤️❤️


Sigh been so long , love , since we talked on If 😆😆 (update : i have forgotten how to use it 🤣)

🤣🤣Yes WE ALL ARE ANGST LOVERS , like ? girl , no no no , i LOVE it !😃 .
O-o I cant wait to know who that 'Someone' is 😆 you are being very mysterious 😆 😈

Yes really ! 😆



Edited by IshveerForever - 8 years ago

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