#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 88

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

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Is this 18 + chap ?😆 because the tittle suggest that☺️

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

I demand 10 kids from IshVeer😆 because if it is 10 kids in this ff and 10 from Elvish ki ff I will have 20 IshVeer kids to babysitt

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Sighhh... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Pata nahi kab hosh ayega...

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

I'm totally in a different world now. I'll be able to say anything once I return to this world ☺️

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Wordless, speechless & spellbound... I'm left with nothing to say further... Don't knw what to say...I'm overwhelmed by today's episode... I want to ask u something sissy...what spells u have used for the creation of today's episode???... Ranveer & Ishani r now one like "two hearts & one soul"...a big big big clap for u...sorry sissy this is what i can do for u 🤗 ...waiting for the next fantasy...b safe & sound sissy

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey LM hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope you are good.
Temperature around me has suddenly has risen up to the peak after this chapter.☺️ see response of the people * replying from freezer*

what was it wait a minute can you combine few adjectives and come up with a word that defines all of them- passionate, loving, sensational, breathtaking, stupefied, dreamy, hot, emotional.

I dont think so there was any emotion left which a human nature felt that was left in this chapter. Anger- for always running away from the situation😡, pain and love- both side unleashing an ocean of it😭😭, guilt- of knowingly and unknowingly breaking each other😒, happiness- finally having their universe and soul merged into one😳😳

magician genie how can you do this always. you always create the most passionate moments without even once crossing the line of vulgarity. That's why i always trust you that you can never make a moment awkward both for readers and yourself. this was most perfectly crafted moment i have came across.👏👏👏 a standing ovation will also not suffice it. 🤗🤗* jhappi*
I cannot even tell you how many times i have read it and every time I have been left spell bound the same way. I am uncertain whether my review will be justified or not because there is no way i can do that.

All this while ranveer's love was strong enough to never fade but today her love was so strong that she didn't allowed it to go away. He loved her but ishani knows how to make that love her own. i so love this girl nothing not even her ownself can come in between her love for ranveer.👏👏

He acts so idiotic pushing away everyone whenever he is close to loosing his pain but she knows him better.😊 first time he revealed his life time of pain everyone he loved left him so he dont want anyone to leave him again. The way he expressed his pain and her love to help him overcome it never once loosing hope made me really cry in happiness😭😭 these two are the idiots who never knows the boundary in their love. He is so afraid to break the wall but she fights back and breaks that wall to bring his maimed self out from it😭 every word he said dripped of the pain and insecurity of lifetime felt even though he never showed it because he was too busy to be with her in all the pain and insecurity he forgot his own. more than the death all the promises he had to live upto snapped out life from him slowly. She is lucky enough that he is expressing it himself to make her heal him.

The most painful line was how he was pushing her away to keep her safe and how she lost all the fear when she lost him. Not her parents nor anything else made her feel numb to the fear because her worst fear of ranveer leaving her came true so no other fear can scare her.😭😭

the way she summarized all their previous moment into something which didn't had the love ranveer holds for her made me realise that thokar khake hi akal aati hai badam khane se nai there was a time when she didn't understood her own feeling and here she is now which can feel the emotion even in most intimate moments and justify their bond way above then the seven wows of marriage was too overwhelming.👏👏

He left her in the middle beta bhuki sherni ko jaga diya ab dekh wo tujhe nai chodegi tu kahi bhi chala ja🤣🤣 whether its ishani or miss parekh both have what they want
she reflected years of sanity in this one night only never allowing him to go away, just confessing her love and need rather than arguing with him for running away from her and not letting it go. Her confession was just wow she said years of love she had for him the negligence of her own emotion everything and making way for both of them to express their long controlled love.😊😊

(reminded of the caskett)
and then start the work of an incredible writer detailing such a delicate and intimate moment with so perfection that it made all those things flash right before my eyes. And first time there was something that overpowered his love for her his respect towards her. i mean he always respected her but never giving it up for once even in such a moment which was his dream and always caring and tendering her more than anything is something that made me love him more. how much more loving he can get why he is like that. no wonder our girl is mad for him. his love and respect can surpass even oceans.👏👏

the whole thing was delicate loving fresh. the amount of gratitude he felt for ishani reciprocating his love with equal amount was awesome and the look on his face to know how much she treasured their promise band was the best...and like always ishani laid him and took control of everything😆😆😆 she cannot depend on him now kya pata kab bhag jaye bich me this is one thing she cannot afford at this point of time😆😆


whole thing was so passionate incredibly described i cannot tell you it was such an awesome and wonderfully created moment. you crafted so awesome that i am short of words to express my own feeling. it was stupefying with every para casting the spell. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

i just cannot bring myself to review those part they were so perfectly created. and the best part was you crafted this so beautifully to accommodate their pain and love equally in the heat of the moment. 👏👏 their eyes speaking volumes even though words refused to leave the lips. fantastic dear

you impressed me totally girl this was the best i have came across. i cannot say more than this.

thnx for pm
waiting for next

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

totally agree with you
we need to spend the rest of the day in freezer to overcome the heat stroke of this chapter leaving us paralysed.

I had told LM she should also give a warning that the contents of this chapter are to be read only in freezer😆😆

Originally posted by: khazina

Hey LM.. Seriously spellbounded by the chapter... Awesome dear... It was really out of the world.. The chapter was really a traet to read. their intimate moments ..omg how can be they be so much hot, adorable, passionate... Amazing.. Dont know what to say ...u are brilliant... loads of love dear... Waiting for u next update.

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy LM
The chapter is breathtaking
But it's so passionate
The chapter is beyond the words dr..
Their love,passion,pain,desire everything falls in your writing
Do update next soon dr..
Keep smiling
Take care 😳