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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi LM. thnkng you for the small entries of chishani. Reading a whole epistle on them is such a tough task for me. 😭
I know you are writing them so it is more painfulfor you but still.
Chirag was preparing for this many days how to harbour more of ranveer's nature. What astonishes me that he was so sure about making everything planned and be successful in trapping them.
Apparently why every mom get so excited when a decent guy comes to home it's like all their satellite connection for imagination get activated.
Food poisoning really the toxins must have got inactive after entering this poisonous snake's stomach. 😡 serves him right. And while parekh clan is happy fixing him up with their girl. But HP why didn't he bothered about their growing friendship as he knew about ishveer and their feelings for each other.
I want to know baa reaction apparently before her transformation to a sage I liked it when she used to be hostile towards. Chiru baba.
Seriously this is the mistake of ishani she always thought she has an upper hand in them but was driven completely by him. With all the pampering and protection she was getting with ranveer this might be some sort of relief for her because she always wanted to be independent.
You see one theory is their in my mind is it because she never Interacted with boys so closely that her own feelings which felt confused about ranveer or chirag made her believe initially that she likes him other way more than as a friend. Actually she wasn't close to any of them.

Teasing and blushy smile great going seriously. But I can't blame them apparently she was sin so much shelf seeing her smile was their only wish. I like the way you have moulded the chapter showing how gradually and slowly their relationship progressed. But this sort of connection that's he apparently thinks is something that makes me wonder why didn't she felt like that for ranveer inspite of reading so many love stories novels forget about even normal novel. Dumb girl as she is. 😕

Coffee and meals and secrets what a beautiful love saga is in making I will die of love at the end of this book I guess 😃 😆
Harshad well loved his son so much he would have actually wanted ranveer to take over his place in company and in loving ishani also but alas. This girl is doubting finch's intention well throw some cold water on her face bring her in reality dear you need to be on guard which is why you are giving away so easily.
Peanut allergy I so want to give him a smack stop it copy cat. Didn'tonce it happened that she found out about these lies it's like 3 years they were together it's astronomical odd. But alas love makes you deaf dumb blind and everything ishani was at that time. And apparently I feel like I would have loved this chirag had he not betrayed ishani... For all his behaviour 😉 😆 😆 just kiddin.

Chishani now it will start all the embrace soft touches and it's going to be a little more difficult from now on to bear them. 7 chapters more to it. Harry potter is every novel lovers admiration so got a good shot at it. Actually I don't trust this girl in her blabbering session she might herself have given many things many hints about her behaviour.

Finally the mystery unfolds here his luck was stronger than their love and he himself got access to the key to ishani's world. And this girl had she went there and got the book things would... How come she can think that ranveer will not do something that she asked for and moreover it's really a romantic idea and how come ranveer deny it.

Nice chapter dear and each and every day I count how much more I have to bear with them. But seriously a nice effort the build up of their relationship and her vulnerability giving it all.

Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
Edited by dvprt418.py - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just caught up with the last 4 chapters today and I have to say even though I didn't really find these chapters so interesting, but your writing is beautiful. How can you write so much and so good. You must have so much patience to write this stuff, it's flawless. I can't wait until it goes back to the interludes, I really enjoy those. Thanks so much for entertaining us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
read epistle 81 and 82 and they are painful... they are not together and burning in their loneliness... 😭 how terribly they want each other and want to run in each others' arm but know they can't... he is in new world but happiness is incomplete without her and same is the case for her... trying to divert her mind but she can't... 😔
and then there is their letters... pouring their heart out for each other but can't reveal it... he always loved her and knows she is his world but she also realized her love for him... as they say distances made u realize the true worth of something... she can't explain her love but that is more amazing... at least she admitted what is there in her heart, how much she care for him, want him and is incomplete without him... her this confession is like the true one right from her soul... ❤️ and how they both promised themselves to not fall weak and be each others' strength is again shows their ability to sacrifice themselves..

u again wrote it brilliantly but it's making it more difficult... I mean already there is pain of their separation and then ur writing brings every emotion alive... and now it's just two chapters, don't know what will happen in future...😕 but this book was needed... now only we'll get the real picture that how the dynamics changed so much in two years...

bracing myself... but u keep writing fast fast... 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

As to the ending of his dream, both of them have seen the inverse of each other's fates in the other's dream. 😛😛 Which one is right or whether both are right or both are wrong you'll come to know eventually though. 😆😆 And as for your rabbit assumption, don't worry it was meant to be Shanella only. 😊😊


Yes, bad timing and even worse circumstances pushed her to the complete edge. 😳😳 Oh yeah, poor thing thought what gul he was khilaaoing and the Sunny Leone in her came to life too, along with Sunny Deol. 😈😈




both have seen each other dying and if it can be taken as inverse means they'll not... so can we take it as assurance that u r not planning dead end although i already have a feel that u'll not do something like that... i mean u can give n number of hospital visits and pain for them but not the dreading end... 😆.. so keeping my faith on u... 😊


just like ranveer don't know her truth Ishani also didn't know his plan for Shanella... but I hope jaldi pata lage bhi na... 🤪this Ishani is truly fun 😈 and poor Ranveer... m already laughing thinking about his future... 😉



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Oh. Kill me... I had to really think for a looong time before pressing that like button..

And remember it's just for your breezy writing otherwise I hate this chapter..
:X :X




Hehe, compliment taken for the breezy writing. 🤗🤗 And duh, you're supposed the hate the Chishaani chapters. It means that I'm doing my job right. ⭐️⭐️ We don't want Chishaani shippers now, do we? 😉😉 Those rights are only kinda reserved with ChirVeer. ☺️☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Oh gosh.. This girl really 😲 Believe someone within this little days... Ranveer is right... She is very bad in judging people... She wanna regret more for it... 😕 Waiting for ur next... Keep smiling... 😳




Oh yeah, the girl is so naive in believing that the world might afterall have some roses and not just thorns. Oh yeah, she's regretting and paying for her lack of judgment now sadly. 😭😭 The next chapter is right here! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM. thnkng you for the small entries of chishani. Reading a whole epistle on them is such a tough task for me. 😭
I know you are writing them so it is more painfulfor you but still.
Chirag was preparing for this many days how to harbour more of ranveer's nature. What astonishes me that he was so sure about making everything planned and be successful in trapping them.
Apparently why every mom get so excited when a decent guy comes to home it's like all their satellite connection for imagination get activated.
Food poisoning really the toxins must have got inactive after entering this poisonous snake's stomach. 😡 serves him right. And while parekh clan is happy fixing him up with their girl. But HP why didn't he bothered about their growing friendship as he knew about ishveer and their feelings for each other.
I want to know baa reaction apparently before her transformation to a sage I liked it when she used to be hostile towards. Chiru baba.
Seriously this is the mistake of ishani she always thought she has an upper hand in them but was driven completely by him. With all the pampering and protection she was getting with ranveer this might be some sort of relief for her because she always wanted to be independent.
You see one theory is their in my mind is it because she never Interacted with boys so closely that her own feelings which felt confused about ranveer or chirag made her believe initially that she likes him other way more than as a friend. Actually she wasn't close to any of them.

Teasing and blushy smile great going seriously. But I can't blame them apparently she was sin so much shelf seeing her smile was their only wish. I like the way you have moulded the chapter showing how gradually and slowly their relationship progressed. But this sort of connection that's he apparently thinks is something that makes me wonder why didn't she felt like that for ranveer inspite of reading so many love stories novels forget about even normal novel. Dumb girl as she is. 😕

Coffee and meals and secrets what a beautiful love saga is in making I will die of love at the end of this book I guess 😃 😆
Harshad well loved his son so much he would have actually wanted ranveer to take over his place in company and in loving ishani also but alas. This girl is doubting finch's intention well throw some cold water on her face bring her in reality dear you need to be on guard which is why you are giving away so easily.
Peanut allergy I so want to give him a smack stop it copy cat. Didn'tonce it happened that she found out about these lies it's like 3 years they were together it's astronomical odd. But alas love makes you deaf dumb blind and everything ishani was at that time. And apparently I feel like I would have loved this chirag had he not betrayed ishani... For all his behaviour 😉 😆 😆 just kiddin.

Chishani now it will start all the embrace soft touches and it's going to be a little more difficult from now on to bear them. 7 chapters more to it. Harry potter is every novel lovers admiration so got a good shot at it. Actually I don't trust this girl in her blabbering session she might herself have given many things many hints about her behaviour.

Finally the mystery unfolds here his luck was stronger than their love and he himself got access to the key to ishani's world. And this girl had she went there and got the book things would... How come she can think that ranveer will not do something that she asked for and moreover it's really a romantic idea and how come ranveer deny it.

Nice chapter dear and each and every day I count how much more I have to bear with them. But seriously a nice effort the build up of their relationship and her vulnerability giving it all.

Thnx for pm
Waiting for next






Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, hehe, almost all the Chishaani updates from this point forth are going to be with three entries so there's a better flow and its easier on all of us to bear with them. 😛😛 Oh yeah, Chirag had been planning and planning this and his luck was with him that they both fell into the trap. As to Indian mothers, well you've given the perfect name - satellite dishes. 🥱🥱



Hehe, the food poisoning was just an excuse. He was just trying to play the wait game. 😕😕 But yes, had it really happened, the poison would have certainly died against him. 😡😡 Coming to HP, it was just the start and he wanted Ishaani to break through that shell for once rather than mourn Ranveer and close herself into a deeper shell. 🤔🤔 Turns out that it backfired on him even before he knew about it. 😳😳



Baa's reaction you'll come to know about in Epistle 88. 😉😉 And yes, Chirag always let her be in the assumption that she was the dominating power in the relationship when it was he who had her strings in his hand ultimately. 👎🏼👎🏼 As to your theory, it's a little mix of both along with what I've written in Epistle 87 as well. 😊😊



Coming to your next point, the reason why she partially never saw it for all those years was because she was blinded by her friendship to the extent where thinking about anything like that felt wrong, like I'd mentioned in Epistle 83. 😔😔 And she'd just begun to realize that perhaps there might be something more between herself and Ranveer when Chirag tapkofied. 🤢🤢 All Chirag had to do was tap into that connection and put on Ranveer's facade to make her realize her feelings that existed for the 'facade'. 😒😒



Oh yes, such a lovely saga no? 😈😈 As to Harshad, you've said it all for me. 👍🏼👍🏼 And coming to her needing cold water to slap her back into reality, I wish Ranveer would have actually done that though - thrown cold water upon her. 😳😳 And as to the peanut allergy, he does really have one. 🤪🤪 The present-day Ishaani should send him peanut-butter cookies and do the job. 🤡🤡



Seriously, I can't believe you just said that! 🤣🤣 Chalo accha hai, if you can think of Chiru baby that way, that mean I'm doing my job properly so far in terms of the facade. As to the HP series, well like you said it's so popular that the probability of him hitting the mark was definitely a lot more. 😵😵 And oh yeah, it is going to get rather unbearable for all of us but we'll all have to be strong. 🤓🤓



Yeah, she gives away quite a lot about herself, no? And as to the key to her world, yes that fateful moment has finally arrived. 💔💔 She likes to think that for once Ranveer used his brains and not simply just did whatever it took to make her happy, but alas... bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha ab. 🥺🥺



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: robal

I just caught up with the last 4 chapters today and I have to say even though I didn't really find these chapters so interesting, but your writing is beautiful. How can you write so much and so good. You must have so much patience to write this stuff, it's flawless. I can't wait until it goes back to the interludes, I really enjoy those. Thanks so much for entertaining us.




Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you find my writing worth the pain of the chapters. 😳😳 Hehe, the chapters must be rather boring to read, I can understand and it does take a lot of patience from my end as well to keep up with it, but I'm happy with how they're turning out so far. 😛😛



Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ

read epistle 81 and 82 and they are painful... they are not together and burning in their loneliness... 😭 how terribly they want each other and want to run in each others' arm but know they can't... he is in new world but happiness is incomplete without her and same is the case for her... trying to divert her mind but she can't... 😔

and then there is their letters... pouring their heart out for each other but can't reveal it... he always loved her and knows she is his world but she also realized her love for him... as they say distances made u realize the true worth of something... she can't explain her love but that is more amazing... at least she admitted what is there in her heart, how much she care for him, want him and is incomplete without him... her this confession is like the true one right from her soul... ❤️ and how they both promised themselves to not fall weak and be each others' strength is again shows their ability to sacrifice themselves..

u again wrote it brilliantly but it's making it more difficult... I mean already there is pain of their separation and then ur writing brings every emotion alive... and now it's just two chapters, don't know what will happen in future...😕 but this book was needed... now only we'll get the real picture that how the dynamics changed so much in two years...

bracing myself... but u keep writing fast fast... 🤗






Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it so far. ⭐️⭐️



Coming to the review, oh these two chapters have been really painful for me to write as well. 😭😭 The despair, the loneliness and the yearning for each other that they hold within their hearts is so intense that it tends me make my heart ache too. And you've said the rest for Epistle 81.



Those two letters were just something I wrote on the spur of the moment since it all just came to me so quickly. 🥺🥺 This letter confession was always a part of the original and first draft of US, so I wanted to retain it over here as well even though what this FF looks like now is nothing like what I'd planned about it earlier. 😛😛 And the rest you've said it for me. 😳😳



I'm happy that you see the importance of this book. 😃😃 It is not going to be an easy ride, but if I can keep up with my speed, I think I should have this book done well under the scheduled date that I have in mind. 😉😉 Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ




both have seen each other dying and if it can be taken as inverse means they'll not... so can we take it as assurance that u r not planning dead end although i already have a feel that u'll not do something like that... i mean u can give n number of hospital visits and pain for them but not the dreading end... 😆.. so keeping my faith on u... 😊


just like ranveer don't know her truth Ishani also didn't know his plan for Shanella... but I hope jaldi pata lage bhi na... 🤪this Ishani is truly fun 😈 and poor Ranveer... m already laughing thinking about his future... 😉







Haye, your bharosa upon me gave me khushi ke aansu in my eyes. 😭😭 Jhappi pa! 🤗🤗 Yeah, but I'm still not saying what's happening in the end though. 😈😈



As to Ishaani, she's not going to come to know about his motive with Shanella for some time. 😉😉 And as to Ranveer, don't make me laugh so much abhi se at that poor fellow's fate when he comes to know about the real picture with Ishaani. 🤣🤣

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