IshVeer FS: Fire and Ice. [COMPLETED] - Page 26

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Hey, Kaju! 🤗 Welcome to the thread. Your review was much awaited. 😳 No problem, it's totally fine. 😃

Aw, thank you so much. Sigh, memories... ❤️ I just chanced upon this poem when I was doing my English assignment last year. And I totally loved the theme.

Thanks a lot! I am really happy you liked Ishaani here. Take a break. 😲 Ah, made you dark? 😲😲 Kaju, you are giving me too many bombs to hold.

Hi, as I told Elvish, the doves were an integral part from the show and I really felt like I had to use them here. Nothing more. But the two doves do represent the essence of IshVeer.

Yes, I did like the first and third shots too. Fun to write. And thanks, again! 🤗

Kitni bhi thank karun, kafi nahi. 😳

I haven't yet started working on it because of projects and assignments but it will be up by tomorrow or Tuesday. 😊

Love,

Your Lil's Sis. ❤️

PS. The review is so beautiful, perfectly fine! 😳

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

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Originally posted by: IshveerForever

😆 Thank youuu Poplu 🤗 , phew I'm so relieved now that i have given the review 😆 , now to finish the update which is pending 😆

He was one beautiful poet no words can describe his style of poems

I loved Ishani😳 , take a break as in i had to stop and read after a while 😆 i remember i had lost track on Lm's old Ff *Nepolitan city* and i had read ALL the chapter in one day 🤣 no breaks or anything and then i ended up getting a bad headache 😆 , and by dark i meant it made me cold 😆 if you get what i mean .

Ah! 😃 So I stood correct 😆

Arey chortu , there is no need for thank you's 😆 , formality chord bhi do 😆

Oh , there is no hurries dear 😳 update whenever 😳

Love

BBP

Ps- Glad you liked the review 😆😳

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

🤗 🤗 Hehe. 😆

I will be waiting for your update. 😳

Yes.

Ah. 🤣 🤣 Kaju - The bundle of unpredictabilities. 😉 Yes, I get it. 😃

Formalities chodun bhi toh manners nahi chod sakti. 😆

Love,

AP.

PS. 🤗

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Oh, I had replied it to this! I-F! :/ Swallowed my message.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Will be waiting for it. 😊

Ah, telepathy. 🤣

Originally posted by: IshveerForever

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😆 yup its greta telepathy we 3 share 😎

Hey Anu... 😊 😊

was waiting to read and enter ur thread for long... actually was thinking to read all chapters but now done with first and can't wait till I read all... so here... 😎

Now beginning from the beginning I mean title, it was amazing in itself.. 👏 so intriguing, it did gave the hint of all angst awaiting us and den u started... 😉

awesome awesome write up... plot of these five shots was amazing.. hate track.. most interesting part of the show for me (of course minus some stupid stuff like his nonsense dialogs at party and running to wrong person with entire story) and u gave even more interesting twist in ur story... ⭐️

Beginning with the doves was just superb... the way they saw each other in them... wow... ranveer as usual risking himself to save bird coz for him it was her while he himself lay down with injuries and survival is difficult even when Ishani saves malhar... I don't know how much I am right but I am seeing too much symbolism here... and surprise was Ishani feeling for him and wanted to be the one for him...😲 but again can't admit it and brushes that thought aside.. can't blame her, their situation and status was not appropriate to think something like this practically at that time...💔 and I am in love with the names Malhar and Bhairavi.. ❤️

And now he's in Milano.. away from her and she is all alone... all other things slowly came on track with kailash, laxmi (thank u to send her back even after patch up with Ishani, she was not needed in any form.. 😆) and amba also with parekhs respectfully logging out of her sasural... but still she doesn't have the one thing.. actually only one thing she wants... him... her condition is painful with all d realizations and loneliness... and finally a call from her... a hope for her and she is running for her life...

this was d chapter but now coming to ur writing... U r just outstanding yar... matlab awesome se bhi better.. 👏 kya dhamaka kiya hai pehli hi writing mein... every thing was perfectly described with all d beautiful words... it was like something taking u along... kho jana story mein... 👍🏼all I can say is where have you been all d time.. u r totally a surprise package here... u r done with 4 out of 5 so plz start thinking what next coz we definitely want more... 😳

Loved d colorful font of title... in fact d entire presentation was beautiful with with all the required explanations.. and ur title pic is lovely... 👏