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Posted: 9 years ago
res ( will review after exam !)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear how are you?
This chapter had many amazing lines which showed the purity and intensity of ranveers love and I don't know how much more you guys want me to drrol over him how come he is like that 😳 😳
Well first line indicated exactly what was coming under way and ranveer and his love for both sunny no one doubt them but his love for them get expressed at wrong times 😳 😳
Ishani and brain are two deadly things they can never be together then how he expects that she ll use them to lessen their misery 🥱
Now whts fascination you guys have with ranveer and hospital again prepared to go inmean seriously he never takes care of his health no wonder ishani scowls at him 😕
All her dreams got different endings because reality was too much harsh on her and now she has the liberty to go to us but she cannot.
She was with braces and nerdy 😆 😆 I can imagine her now but have got stunning feature like her dreams no wonder she is getting all that leering glances from boys but we can definitely understand how awkward it is to be always under someone's eyes it becomes so irritating at times. 😡
So thts the reason for her mood upset and baa as a cherry on the cake so as obvious ranveer would be her punching bag
Poor guy have to bear all those glance and control his possessiveness and other feelings also
He always valued loyalty above love but that one thing also got shattered breaking his heart further I to pieces 🤢
I wish baa should be alive to see his present status she would have been happiest when he had left parekh mansion. 😡
Though he lives to love her but never let that feeling overpower his responsibility towards his parents.
Well I have a question if isha I doesn't drool over him for his looks in her sense unlike in her drunkard sense when he is the most cute person on the earth 😉
This line "I never dared " was so marvellous his pure love and how he was so vulnerable if anything happens to his dreams everything was visible in this.
Horror movie,chilly weather one blanket and two passionate lovers ahem ahem can things get more deadly then this and to top it she clinging on to him bechara pe to emotional physical mental har tarak ka atyachar kitna control kare wo akele
And then comes the best line of this whole chapter my heart will betray me o dear that line was just fantastic it expressed his love so simply yet impactly.
Chilli cheese Maggi I love it with extra cheese I somlove it
I must say how beautiful and intimately you describe their embraces that even reading them I go all 😳 😳
How much he banked upon that one hope that she consider him as her best friend a human unlike the whole society and then suddenly one day that hope is broken down brutally and this then take away the very base of livi f that's what happened with him. He trusted her so much and she only broke away that hope so it was bound that he would never return back to that place and a promise amde one that one person ash who always lived him never betrayed was fianl nail that he never checked upon her once after leaving parekh mansion.
OK thn they watch that part he was right in that sense if she can read all erotica novels than he can have his share to but no one can explain anything to ishani and so much ruckus over it
That whole moment was hilarious here he is somehow controlling his feeling and their they are turning him on bechara
Now let's see what he is giving her birthday gift this time or is it another trip to his vacation suite.
LM thi chapter and those lines were amazing it had so much in it with alk the hormonal locha in it I cannot even begin to tell I loves this chapter a lot
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
Sorry soem problem with my tab not able to use emoji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bravo! wonderful chapters. Sorry for being late, just caught up with the last 3 chapters today and I must say you are a genious, I am amazed by your writing, it's flawless and so real. I loved this chapter, I loved the time spent when they were watching the movie and Ranveer's feelings, how real was that and he loves her so much...Thank you so much for the PMs, I truly appreciated it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii LM,
Wow...its was just awesome update..!! Really Ishani as ishani inke pas brain hi kaha h alwaye new problem ko dawat deti h
And our ranveer iska toh kuch nhi ho sakta i think he loves going to hospital just like iska sasural ho Har 3 update me jata hai...!!
So ranveer upset and the reason that all college boys staring ishani hehe... bhai ladki beautiful hogi toh ladke chul ho ge hi...but i liked it how much ranveer possessive towrd ishani even he know that her dream never be fulfill...!!
Poor boy how much bearing all those harshly word Baa just like dog alwaye ishveer ke bich lagi rhati hai...!!
The best part where chill weath ranveer and ishani watching a horror movie and at the moment when ishani scared and tightly hug her and ranveer thought that her heart betreyed him and he can't control his feeling its was amazed...!! i m dream now this scene..!!
Now waiting for next that what he give her birthday as gift bcoz ranveer gift alwaye be special for ishani...!!
And thanx for pm...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey,
Sorry for late.😭 Amazing update👏 . So , the hug *awe* , lovely 😳 . I just wanted her to hug for a while more😆 and him to commit his feelings out .😉
Then comes the Sunny leaone( in real , I don't like her) 😡And Ishani was absolutely right 😆
Beautiful 👏
Stay blessed 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
This was really funny... When did you take up writing?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Lm... 😊 Epistle 63 & 64...

Ishani back to her tabahi mode and like always victim Ranveer... they both are sitting in front na but as we know YOU... injury have to follow Ranveer...😆 Ishani frightened but Ranveer has some other plan and that was awesome... it's like instant revenge...😆 the way Ishani was terrified and crying... poor girl... and then his laughter... U know, this is where it all began...the third scene I remember as my first memories of this show... the way he laughed in that episode after saying.. hum dost the, par ab hum pati patni hai... his one of the most genuine laugh in the show... then his banter over reception saying mujhe dar hai ke agar main aaj uske sath so gaya to vo mujhe hamesha ke lie na sulade and his scream in the wrong room seeing other girl... sigh... Intoxicating era it was and bacterias are still intact... 💔

Coming back... accident was not enough and Ishu baby is ready to complete the deed... throwing stones with Ranveer running for his life... u wrote it brilliantly...👏 vaise Ishani should've understood it much earlier when Ranveer called her Sunny for hurting his arm... she missed it, her whole concentration was in to overpower and to pacify him...😆 and coming back to home her Mr. Perfect is ready with another perfect story which nobody can doubt about... 😎 but after all this she is still adamant on having her revenge on him... evil girl...

And between all this I felt that Ishani's present miseries was equally his fault also... why did he made her so dependent on him that she fallen straight into the trap in his absence...and when he knew her to use bhi sath le jata for studies... Ranveer ke sath rehte rehte bechari ki brain development hi nahi ho payi to understand anything...🤣 she never paid any heed to his words in spite of so many demo from him and final result was worst...

Speaking of listening to each other he is also a gone case here and he is even more nonsense to ignore his health even after knowing the importance of it... our forum aptly named him JD... his philosophy.. I don't want anything, neither food nor sleep... I am abnormal and can work like zombie until I crash... but in all this I need Ishani as the energy supplement, see how I parked 5 cars with mere thoughts of hers... 🤣

And what can we expect from that old lady... but Ishani was awesome... 👍🏼 she is so right that its already no cherries for them to atleast she should vent out... this old lady will anyway remain the same so better she relax herself... but her confidence is amazing... abhi abhi dhulai hui hai but she is all set to rule the world...😆 she must've started with her home...

but why this headache and nose bleeds... what are u planning LM... abhi last update mein hi accident karaya hai na to atleast give him some reasonable break... I know u'll send him home but not so soon and see how much he is fed up with all doctors and hospital stuff so plz at least try to have some mercy...

Nice updates... and the latest one (65th)... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Will be back soon on that... 🤗 🤗

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Okay, so I am back after a bad day. So no emoticons.

Leave the emoticons, but this was more than enough to make me laugh again and again. I read the first few lines of the Epistle and was thinking, "Kya hua hoga, why is bacha so tensed and doing this?" And then, I read...well, embarrassment is bound to knock the door now. Ranveer, you usually watch them and this time, you're caught. Sigh. Poor boy. But I had wonderful time reading this.

So Ishani comes over and he makes his special Chilli Cheese Maggi. Do you have the recipe? I have never tried it and want to.

Um, so she now asks if he was watching a horror movie (well, not my type.) and then joins him, bad idea. I avoid horror flicks just because of that reason. I am scared and my sister takes advantage on that. Crazy girl.

Well, I am drifting back again. And then she hugs him in fear, (that was to happen!) and then he feels awkward, (Oh my bacha! This guy has become too shy.) But then, he decides to hug as well when the real game started. Sunny Leone! I just read it and broke into peals of laughter. Gosh, that was just a recording problem done by the shopkeeper or may be... But anyway, Ishani is super awkward now and shouting him again. And Ranveer tries to make up the situation but again blames her for reading erotic novels. Ha! Can't get any better. So Ishani is flushing and looking like the fish out of water. And boy, the justification she gives is literally silly but you know, girls know to blame the boys and she did it.


Wonderful update, sweetheart! I would have died laughing! Update the next one whenever possible because you know, I have to read the Interludes and something else too.

Love
Aarushi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

res ( will review after exam !)





No problem, sweetie. Take your time! 🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear how are you?
This chapter had many amazing lines which showed the purity and intensity of ranveers love and I don't know how much more you guys want me to drrol over him how come he is like that 😳 😳
Well first line indicated exactly what was coming under way and ranveer and his love for both sunny no one doubt them but his love for them get expressed at wrong times 😳 😳
Ishani and brain are two deadly things they can never be together then how he expects that she ll use them to lessen their misery 🥱
Now whts fascination you guys have with ranveer and hospital again prepared to go inmean seriously he never takes care of his health no wonder ishani scowls at him 😕
All her dreams got different endings because reality was too much harsh on her and now she has the liberty to go to us but she cannot.
She was with braces and nerdy 😆 😆 I can imagine her now but have got stunning feature like her dreams no wonder she is getting all that leering glances from boys but we can definitely understand how awkward it is to be always under someone's eyes it becomes so irritating at times. 😡
So thts the reason for her mood upset and baa as a cherry on the cake so as obvious ranveer would be her punching bag
Poor guy have to bear all those glance and control his possessiveness and other feelings also
He always valued loyalty above love but that one thing also got shattered breaking his heart further I to pieces 🤢
I wish baa should be alive to see his present status she would have been happiest when he had left parekh mansion. 😡
Though he lives to love her but never let that feeling overpower his responsibility towards his parents.
Well I have a question if isha I doesn't drool over him for his looks in her sense unlike in her drunkard sense when he is the most cute person on the earth 😉
This line "I never dared " was so marvellous his pure love and how he was so vulnerable if anything happens to his dreams everything was visible in this.
Horror movie,chilly weather one blanket and two passionate lovers ahem ahem can things get more deadly then this and to top it she clinging on to him bechara pe to emotional physical mental har tarak ka atyachar kitna control kare wo akele
And then comes the best line of this whole chapter my heart will betray me o dear that line was just fantastic it expressed his love so simply yet impactly.
Chilli cheese Maggi I love it with extra cheese I somlove it
I must say how beautiful and intimately you describe their embraces that even reading them I go all 😳 😳
How much he banked upon that one hope that she consider him as her best friend a human unlike the whole society and then suddenly one day that hope is broken down brutally and this then take away the very base of livi f that's what happened with him. He trusted her so much and she only broke away that hope so it was bound that he would never return back to that place and a promise amde one that one person ash who always lived him never betrayed was fianl nail that he never checked upon her once after leaving parekh mansion.
OK thn they watch that part he was right in that sense if she can read all erotica novels than he can have his share to but no one can explain anything to ishani and so much ruckus over it
That whole moment was hilarious here he is somehow controlling his feeling and their they are turning him on bechara
Now let's see what he is giving her birthday gift this time or is it another trip to his vacation suite.
LM thi chapter and those lines were amazing it had so much in it with alk the hormonal locha in it I cannot even begin to tell I loves this chapter a lot
Thnx for pm
Waiting for next
Sorry soem problem with my tab not able to use emoji





Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this! ⭐️⭐️ I'm doing alright and I hope that you are doing well too. 😳😳



Coming to the review, I cannot even begin to tell you how relieved I am. 😭😭 I've been so worried with this chapter for many reasons and I'm glad that you found it good enough. 😛😛 Oh yeah, the purity of his love is one thing that I've been wanting to highlight with this and I'm glad that you liked it so much. 😃😃



Ishaani and brains are complete oxymorons. But yes, all her dreams are really harsh endings to them. As to Ranveer, uska mahurat nikal gaya hospital ka toh main kya karu? 🤔🤔 He should be worried about his health but idhar he's worried about beating up any boy who lays eyes upon her. 😕😕


But yes, I've always imagined both of them to be very nerdy looking as kids when they became friends who didn't have anything extraordinary about their looks but it was each other's heart and soul that they fell in love with. The rest you've said it perfectly in terms of Baa and his responsibilities to his Mota Babuji never being forgotten for his love. 😊😊 As to Baa, well you might not be entirely disappointed. 😉😉



Disha's query you'll get the answer to in Epistle 67. 😎😎 And yes, mausam itna suhaana hai and the whole scenario is just the same but bechaare pe atyachaar pe atyachaar hue jaa raha hai. 🤣🤣 I'm glad you liked both those lines that you've pointed out because those two are my personal favourites too. ☺️☺️



You've once again explained the scenario pretty succintly in terms of what happened between them. 👏👏 Hehe, Ishaani is a namuni only like that - khud wahi kar rahi hai par jhaad usko rahi hai. As to her birthday present, *Coughs*, you'll get your answer in the next chapter. 😈😈 But I agree with you, this chapter was a total hormonal locha. 🤪🤪



Thank you so much once again and the next chapter is here! ❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago

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