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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan
Aaru :)
The whole concept was really good and quite sad too

I mean love is unfair so was Ishaani, feel pity for Ranveer 😔

Seriously even if they get together now in old age, the gone years won't be back :( what about those year when Ranveer was all alone hurt, I know Ishaani was too but she did not listen to Him so she had to suffer😡

Thank you, Afrah! <3 <3

I never thought from the other angle. But don't worry, Poplu is writing one on Ishani's pain and suffering and I am dying to read that😳😳. I am sure, you'll enjoy because she is one such good writer for her age!😳😳

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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ayeshamukhtar
Ohhh God it's just lovely ...
And fantastic... Happy ending 😳
Loved it thnx for this OS dear

Thank you so much, Ayesha! I am so happy that you liked and please, don't thank me😃😃

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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sakshi5050
Hi Aarushi,

completely a different concept
Thanks for sharing this OS with us..
Nice climax
Ranveer getting his love after 40 years made me emotional for a while
And last word of him "And I won't let you die" seriously made me speechless
nice one dear you rocked it 😉😉😉 with your writing 👏👏

Thank you so much, Sakshi! I am so happy that you liked it and please, don't thank me😃😃

ANd I am glad that you liked that climax too!

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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Sania03337
Hi,
It was something more than best👏.I just loved the new concept😊. You did really well😛. You are reaching the heights👏. I must say your every word was worth reading. Thank you so much dear for making my day.😳

Thank you so much Sania! I am so happy that you liked it! I am thrilled that I had made your day!😳😳

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-FlameOfHope-

@-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Thank you so much, Poplu! I am so happy that you liked it! And a bow from you is something! *Dreams* Thank you so, so much!

Well, his view about the younger generation is though, true. So that was a reality check. Like children of new age are 😲😲

And josh toh hoga hi. He-he. Ranveer! *haye* He is something else altogether! *Correction* He was something else altogether!

He-he. I like that comparison :P :P And IshVeer, will remain beautiful even after ages! They are just the synonym of passion and sacrifice!

Yeah, he was. Unfaithful was triggered into his mind and he is still not able to get over that night, sadly.

ANd thank you so much for praising me! I don't deserve so much, to be honest.😆😆

AV

Ah, what's so special in that? 😕😕 I am no great. 😳😳 And you deserve a bow, Daaru! ⭐️⭐️ And yep, it's true. It was like a reality check.

Presto! This is like a reality check for me. For us. Ranveer was. And yes, IshVeer are eternl beauties. And they stand for all the things which our families has mbibed and has been trying to do so - Love, Sacrifice, Friendship, Selflessness, Passion (to do things with a zeal; here about IshVeer, it's the passionate love) and more of all those.

Ranveer is always like that. He just keeps the past tied to him and doesn't leg go easily. Like, that, "Driver ka beta." thing in the show.

You deserve it, girl. 😳😳 Don't tell me that you don't. 🥱🥱

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-FlameOfHope-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Me back!

The words which you selected were from The Notebook (I know, you have read that ;P) and the lines suited his scenario, so I just added it here :) I am happy that you liked them, Poplu.

Wah! Meko woh wala pain chahiye! *Wishful Wish*

Well, that was the twist and I knew, none would have expected it. Ishani is one such dumb who needs help in even thinking!🤢🤢 Such a DUMB she is🥱🥱

And Ranveer' s job is only to take in the pain and live alone! Oh, these two!😆 Our babies!😳😳

Well, the phrase of him being an unfaithful servant is engraved in his heart, making them slice into pieces

TL is Vancouver? I thought she was in Toronto.

Anyway, I had updated it long back and I have replied to the next review, too. So...😆😆 I am late😆😆

Thank you so much once again!

AV

Yep, I have read The Notebook and it's beautiful. And oh, it's been such a long time I have read it that I didn't recognise the lines. 😆😆 Reading I Let You Go now. Psychological Thriller.

Zaroor milega padne ko. Bas mera net teekh ho jaye. Not able to make the topic. :\

Ishaani's and Ranveer's description here was apt. ⭐️⭐️ And TL is in Vancouver. 😊😊 Got to know from stalking old threads long back. 😉😉 Haha, it's okay to be late. 😳😳

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Afrah

@AnYa_ArMan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Thank you, Afrah! <3 <3

I never thought from the other angle. But don't worry, Poplu is writing one on Ishani's pain and suffering and I am dying to read that😳😳. I am sure, you'll enjoy because she is one such good writer for her age!😳😳

Yhh sure, will be waiting to read :)

Bdw I have updated part 4 of my Ss 😳

I hope it won't be boring

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Avocetxellis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Thank you so much Sania! I am so happy that you liked it! I am thrilled that I had made your day!😳😳

No need of thanks dear. 😳

Even it needed more appreciation 👏

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

SADISM ALERT! SADISM ALERT!

Our forum has gone into a sadism alert! 🤣🤣 Jise dekho sab Ranveer ki zindagi ki vaat lagaane pe tule hue hai! 🤪🤪 Okay, I'm just drunk on working constantly with the updates, so please excuse my silliness. 😆😆

Coming to this SS, ah, I really, really loved the concept. ⭐️⭐️ It was so simple yet you've written it with a grace that defines why you have the potential in you to become a great writer. 😳😳

You start off with the first chapter as Ranveer and Ishaani's last, ugly conversation where everything breaks off for Ranveer and he's left shattered away into pieces with the fact that she saw him as not just a servant, but an unfaithful one. After everything they'd been through, together. It's true what you say - love is no less than a suicide. 🥺🥺

Moving over to the next chapter, okay this was something I wasn't expected. A forty-year leap! HA! This is the first time anyone of us has written about IshVeer in their old-age (well, we are so obsessed with killing them before they turn thirty that we just don't give them the chance. 😉😉).

So, Ranveer's in Canada (and so's Ishaani as per the past records) and he's a successful billionaire. Successful, but lonely. 😭😭 Sigh, the wounds of an incomplete life, an empty life. 💔💔 And he decides that he has to meet Ishaani. He'd done his time biding; now it was time to see whether she was okay or no, one last time. 😊😊

His love for her never fails to make my eyes go dewy. 😒😒

And then comes the last chapter - he doesn't find her in Vancouver, but finds her instead in Mumbai, back to where they left of things. 😆😆 The circle of life, if you must. 😛😛 And fate had it for the cross-starred lovers to cross paths, not at their dawn, but at their dusk. 😳😳

Ishaani tells him about her life and they confess (God, how can three words cost so much? 😕😕), and yet he's ready to embrace her back. The feeling of being complete at long last. Two broken heart joined together with the other's broken half. Ishaani's joke about Ranveer not being able to beat Chirag up as a 63-year old was 🤣🤣.

I could imagine the old-age version of ChirVeer in GSDC. 😈😈

Err, never mind. ☺️☺️ This was a really beautifully penned story, love! 🤗🤗 Keep churning out such gorgeous pieces of wriitng! ❤️❤️ Study well, take care and be happy! 😃😃

Loads of love,

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@matsh1

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Superb Os. Tq fr sharing.

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