From ishani to ranveer: MISSING SOMEONE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys... hello everyone., this is my first poem on ishveer.. i hope you like it... m really sorry beforehand if its lame
here u go-
How does it feels when you miss someone,
days passes by one after other and ur mind on that someone,
before a prayer, u remember someone,
before opening ur eyes every morning u miss someone,
before drifting off to sleep at night u want someone,
you want to know the whereabouts of that someone,
you want to run to them everytime u miss that someone,
but all you know you could do is to keep missing that someone,
your heart yearning, your mind almost traumatized for that someone,
it feels like dying a hundred deaths when you miss someone...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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True true true esp the last lines that you can't do anything but keep missing .
Very nice Aastha 🤗

P.S subha subha poet ban gayi🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Enchanteur..

True true true esp the last lines that you can't do anything but keep missing .

Very nice Aastha🤗

P.S subha subha poet ban gayi🤣


thanku thanku thanku 🤗
YO its raining here romantickkk mausam to poet bahar aa gaya 🤣
kha ho yaar missing u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice lines Aastha, loved it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..BABYGIRL..


thanku thanku thanku 🤗
YO its raining here romantickkk mausam to poet bahar aa gaya 🤣
kha ho yaar missing u

Rite now in bed & sneazing🤢🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mas123

very nice lines Aastha, loved it😳


thank you so much mas 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Enchanteur..

Rite now in bed & sneazing🤢🤣


kya apko thand lag gayi hai kya apko badan dard hai... apko chahiye zandu baam..
EK BAAM TEEN KAAM 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great job for first poem aastha!!

You describes their situation perfectly! Yearning for each other, want to run to the other but all they can do is missing the other. Claps for you!!!👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sadi darling take rest and take care of ur health...🤗 mausam change ho raha hai na thats why u caught cold
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VC288

Great job for first poem aastha!!

You describes their situation perfectly! Yearning for each other, want to run to the other but all they can do is missing the other. Claps for you!!!👏👏


thank you so much vaishali for ur lovely appreciation... 🤗 i m so happy you liked it 😊😊

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