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Sam

@STWB25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Your story telling is so flawless ... its so nice to be inside the head of both characters - you understand the characters so well.

As amazing3 said, rv is really vulnerable, and their innocence comes across really well from the diary entries :)

Fabulous work - keep it up :)

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amazing3

@amazing3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

LM,

Chapter 5 made me speechless but this 6th chapter has stunned. ...WOW

You are a very very good writer.

I like how Ishani said " it was not he who needed me but I who needed him"...BEAUTIFUL

The explanation of how their relationship started from talking about academic and then opening up on personal stuff was lovely. ...

What made it for me was when Ishani said " Ranveer broke through her wall"...FANTASTIC

All in all. ...Amazing LM😆

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behirlover

@behirlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

You made me speechless today yr 😭
Sumwhr I connect to ishani's thoughts coz same WS me few yrs back whn moved to a new city 🤔
Loved each and evrywrd of dis
C knws bleeding heart of ranveer WS d best part of itit 👏
Yr seriously u made me nostalgic today so cannot rite anymore review bt dis ws marvellous. Sry ll write more next tym
Thnx f pm
Update soon

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Bloomfield

@Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Sorry...A damn late reply again😭😭😭 Was held up with homeworks...

Coming back...🥳🥳for your skills...You write it so well LM...Like I said earlier...You are by far one of the best writers who write the feelings of people so well...And you proved that, once agin...And I am loving to read it in this form as I am now able to read their minds even more better...

How are exams going??TC of your health n studies...😳😳

#Yours3fan,

Aarushi

Edited by ishveer4eva - 9 years ago

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VC288

@VC288

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

wowww!!!!just another masterpiece from you!!it was so beautiful!!the way u described about how ranveer changed ishani,broke through her wall was just amazing!!!it seems ishani started loving him but didn't realised it and took it as a friendship,a pure form of love and companionship.it feels so great to read it in form of diary entries as characters r unsterstood in much better way like this. I loved it soo much!!I am amused by thinking that how could someone who is still in clg can write this much beautiful and that too every thing !!!!!!don't have words to describe my feelings!!!thanks for pm.
Do try to update soon!!
Your fan
VC288

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Sry for late reply I was having exam... Wowww nyc chapter 😊 😉

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: amazing3
LM,
SPEECHLESS. ...

Another fabulous chapter.

Ranveer's vulnerability deserved a friend and I'm happy he's found a friend in Ishani.

Don't have the words to describe the chapter. ...that's how good it is. ...

(Sorry for replying late)

Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this chapter. ⭐️⭐️

Yes, he has always been vulnerable, but has also been that pillar of strength to others. 😳😳 It's about time that he found someone to be vulnerable with as well. 😃😃

And don't apologize, dear. 😛😛 Actually, it's my fault because there was a bit of a mix-up with the PMs and you didn't receive yours.

Thank you so much once again, sweetie. ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: MM123456

My beautiful senorita 🤗 🤗 🤗

I am so madly in love with you 😳 😳 😳

You did it again , wrote a masterpiece my dear , the way you have converted Ishani 's feeling , her beautiful description of their friendship , that forever lasting bond and how he broke her wall was

It is so beautiful , and reading this has such a soothing effect on me dear and I travel into the world of your writing 😳 😳

SO SO beautiful job with this chapter dear ⭐️ You are truly a star when it comes to writing , and dear continue writing like this 😳 😳 You make me so proud each time I read from you 🤗 🤗

Update soon , but studies and health comes first 😉 😉 Love you so much dearie and sending you tons of hugs for this beautiful update and also I just want to hug you 😛

Yours truly
MM

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#YoursNr1fan

Thank you so much, ma cherie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so thrilled that you liked this chapter.

And I know that you are in love with me, but shhh, no romancing in public.

Yes, this chapter was perhaps the most interesting one for me to write so far, and I have actually written this in 20 minutes.

Yes, the wall is something most of us have around out hearts these days, and it's only very rarely that we find someone who can take it down completely. 😒😒

I'm really so happy that you have been liking this story so far and that you do think so highly of my writing. 😃😃 You really make me feel humbled with all the love and praises you shower upon me. ☺️☺️

Loads and loads of hugs to you too as well and love you! ❤️❤️ I'll try to update soon enough and will take care of myself and my studies as well. 😉😉

Ps. Received the hugs. 🥳

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: STWB25
Your story telling is so flawless ... its so nice to be inside the head of both characters - you understand the characters so well.

As amazing3 said, rv is really vulnerable, and their innocence comes across really well from the diary entries :)

Fabulous work - keep it up :)

Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️

Yes, this is a feeling that I do enjoy. 😳😳 It's a different experience altogether and something very rewarding for me as well. 😃😃 For these two characters have so much indepth in them that every single time I sit to write them, I get to learn more and more.

Thank you so much once again, dearie! ❤️❤️

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LadyMeringue

@LadyMeringue

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: amazing3
LM,
Chapter 5 made me speechless but this 6th chapter has stunned. ...WOW

You are a very very good writer.

I like how Ishani said " it was not he who needed me but I who needed him"...BEAUTIFUL

The explanation of how their relationship started from talking about academic and then opening up on personal stuff was lovely. ...

What made it for me was when Ishani said " Ranveer broke through her wall"...FANTASTIC

All in all. ...Amazing LM😆

Thank you so much once again, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm happy that you liked this chapter so much. ⭐️⭐️

Yes, and that fact does hold true for her. She is only to realize more and more as to how much he means to her and how much his presence has changed her soon enough. 😳😳 Yes, and that's always Ranveer. He can break through the walls around a person's heart so easily yet he cannot let anyone into his own shares of darkness. 😕😕

What will be interesting to see is how Ishaani makes her way through it.

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