#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 12

hi LM
I had not imagined that i would be able to read any better ff than neapolitan city,but then you came up with this and its just brilliant!!!!
I had read NC continuouly whole night!!!!only slept at4 in the morning!!but this is something that competes with NC,rather better than it or not??oh ,i am confused!!Loved the way ishani's feeling are expressed.it touched my heart when she stands outside the door and feels helpless,when she describes about family members,its fabulous!!
I think i should say that all your chapters have touched my heart.i can imagine them in front of my eyes.you are the best writer!!!!
Please update soon!!whenever i open forum i expect to see your pm telling that next update is done.
Its just wonderful feeling to see your pm!!gosh,i am too carried away with emotions!!but really i loved your writing!!!!you have written it in excellent way possible!!!waiting for next update eagerly!!

Your fan
VC288

Originally posted by: VC288

hi LM
I had not imagined that i would be able to read any better ff than neapolitan city,but then you came up with this and its just brilliant!!!!
I had read NC continuouly whole night!!!!only slept at4 in the morning!!but this is something that competes with NC,rather better than it or not??oh ,i am confused!!Loved the way ishani's feeling are expressed.it touched my heart when she stands outside the door and feels helpless,when she describes about family members,its fabulous!!
I think i should say that all your chapters have touched my heart.i can imagine them in front of my eyes.you are the best writer!!!!
Please update soon!!whenever i open forum i expect to see your pm telling that next update is done.
Its just wonderful feeling to see your pm!!gosh,i am too carried away with emotions!!but really i loved your writing!!!!you have written it in excellent way possible!!!waiting for next update eagerly!!

Your fan
VC288

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nice one LM...

Originally posted by: NidsJ

nice one LM...

so Ishani's thoughts... loved the way u portrayed her bonding with Harshad... he gave her the required space... that was needed actually coz she already had a lot of sufferings...

but this Baa... 😡 she is a pure devil...

in the serial also she is truly an evil witch... her tortures on her servants and specially on ranveer just because he supports Ishani... God... and then her treatment to Amba... this serial literally showed some very inhuman scenes... the way she beated Amba and that necklace scene and many other...

now she is turned into all goody goody but I still don't like her... vaise bhi her repentence is not properly shown... she made everyone's life hell... in fact that was the purpose of her life... now she is good but her sudden change can't rectify her past... 🤢 🤢

and then the sweetest part... Ishani watching him and feeling the similarities... then her promise to herself... and finally a balm of friendship for his miseries (although I feel that it is much more a support system for her rather than for him... 😳)... and the end was quite surprising... even she felt that there is something more to this friendship... I never analyzed it from this point of view but now it sounds interesting...

ur such small touches are adding a new charm in this story... vaise bhi as i said before also u r exploring their childhood which is completely new for us and then these sweet moments...😳good work dear... 👏 👏

waiting for next... update soon... 🤗

lovely dear ...her bonding with her uncle 👏n the way he give her space is recommendable

Originally posted by: kimnana

lovely dear ...her bonding with her uncle 👏n the way he give her space is recommendable

baa she is getting on my nerves 😡.

the way she was lending him helping hands ,consoling him ,they r similar ,

so soon new friendship will bloom or i would rather say

We haven't known each other
But heck who says we have to?
We've had our ups and downs,
We've been all around.
You are my all time best friend,
And it's never gonna end!
Sure we have had our fights
But we have never been this tight!
I can go to you for anything,
You are my shoulder to cry on,
And the one who cheers me up.
You are my hero.
We have the greatest times
And the best memories.
Side by side or miles apart
You will always be in my heart.
So when that day comes for us to say our good-byes,
Remember this...
You are my everything.
I don't know how I could get through without you.
So just don't forget this friendship
And know that I am always a phone call away
To tell you everything will be ok

ty for pm

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Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️ And yes, I'm perfectly fit and fine right now. 😃😃 And don't apologize, I can understand. Focus on your exams first. 😳😳 And all the very best for them. 👍🏼👍🏼 Btw, are you giving your 12th Boards this year?

Yes, that breakdown scene was very sad for me to write as well. 🥺🥺 Baa was a scarecrow only before she got all that goodness from her heart transplant. 🤣🤣 Even I miss HP so much! 😭😭 Why did they have to kill him so soon?

I think I gave a bit of a description about Falguni in the second epistle. 😛😛 (Which reminds me that I have to make a correction over there. 😕😕)

I'll try to update soon enough, and love you! ❤️❤️

I definitely want to hear her review. 😉😉

WOW. . . LM,

Originally posted by: ishveer4eva

Thank you LM...I just came back and have an off tomorrow...No...I'm in my eleventh now..😉 What about you??

Exactly...He was one sensible character in the show...😭😭...You gave a description??Lemme go n check then..😛

So, you want to hear her review??Here you go then-

"Hey!! Did you complete NC??"

"I just did"

"Kaisa tha?"

"The whole story was mesmerising...Mujhe yakeen nai ho raha hai ki the writer is a student...Badiya he bae...Kya language tha...It was awesome...Tell her that I gave her hugs...Lovely story...I was shattered when I came to know about the first 6 month leap...And I stopped watching it and Ranveer's character was butchered in the show...But yahan to aisa kuch nai tha...I loved every bit of the story...To be frank, this is surely one of my favourites...The way she described the accident scene in the end...My god!!!None of us could've written emotions like that...Tell her that I am giving her a BIG ROUND OF APPLAUSE...Acha, ye batao...Is she writing some other story??"

"She has just started...And it is form of Epistles...Do you wanna read??"

"Not now...I can't wait for updates...So, tu bas pado...aur jab vo complete karti, you'll give me the link and I'll read it...Can't wait to read more from her..."

"You wanna read more?"

"Ya"

"I'll give you the links of her OS...Read that.."

"OS??"

"One shots"

"What is that?"

"This will have only one part and will not be continued..."

"Teek hai...exams ke baad links bejna.."

"Fine..Bye"

"Bye"

This was her review LM...Fine??😉😆

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Originally posted by: amazing3

WOW. . . LM,

This chapter to me is a masterpiece. ..😆

I like Ishani's narration. ...😆

What a beautiful way to start a friendship. ..

Your way of describing emotions with outmost care is breathtaking. ..😆

It's really progressing well. Thanks for sharing this beautiful talent of yours😆

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