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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear the way u explain is mind blowing
Loved it😳
You rocked👏
Please update daily😃 .
I will read it. 😊
I love reading and the way you write is just great.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mas123

Hey dear, you are brilliant with your words. How you come up with such flawless and super tracks. Chapter is 👏 👏

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Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so overjoyed that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And sweetie, you are making me blush. ☺️☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Dear the way u explain is mind blowing

Loved it😳
You rocked👏
Please update daily😃 .
I will read it. 😊
I love reading and the way you write is just great.
👏
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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And I will try to be regular in posting the updates, although updates may get a little slow dues to my exams starting from this Thursday. 😛😛
Thank you so much once again! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dis ws amazing yr 👏
Hw mch u hv grown as a writer yr I mean u r d nly omne who hv gt me so addictd to ff 😳
D way u hv written ishani's thought tht I cn actually imagine d scenes in front of my eyes tht swt innocent ishveer 😳
Tht egoistic baa 😕
Yr u are jst amazing I fall shrt of wrds whn I sit to praise ur writing 😛
My Sis nd my bst frnds r already bewitched by ur charm jst on my recomndtn nd nw dey r gvng me tuff competition in hw many tym repeatedly v hv read ur chp 😉
Nw loved it tht difrnt perspective both hv to dere relatnship I mean fr ishani he is jst a swt innocent boy nd fr her c is his life nw Waitng fr d story to further unfold
Bst part is HP didn't forced her fr calng dad d nly sensible person in d show whm I alwys admire 👏 👏
Thnx fr pm
Nw Waitng to see hw it goes 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Dis ws amazing yr 👏
Hw mch u hv grown as a writer yr I mean u r d nly omne who hv gt me so addictd to ff 😳
D way u hv written ishani's thought tht I cn actually imagine d scenes in front of my eyes tht swt innocent ishveer 😳
Tht egoistic baa 😕
Yr u are jst amazing I fall shrt of wrds whn I sit to praise ur writing 😛
My Sis nd my bst frnds r already bewitched by ur charm jst on my recomndtn nd nw dey r gvng me tuff competition in hw many tym repeatedly v hv read ur chp 😉
Nw loved it tht difrnt perspective both hv to dere relatnship I mean fr ishani he is jst a swt innocent boy nd fr her c is his life nw Waitng fr d story to further unfold
Bst part is HP didn't forced her fr calng dad d nly sensible person in d show whm I alwys admire 👏 👏
Thnx fr pm
Nw Waitng to see hw it goes 👏 👏

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Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so thrilled that you loved it! ⭐️⭐️ And this compliment is something that always makes my day.
Yes, unfortunately Baa will remain the same moronic one like she always was till before he sudden change of heart. (I wonder whose heart she stole? 😆😆) And HP was always a very sensible person, it's why I loved him so much. 😭😭Embarrassed And strangely enough, this is entirely a game of perspective that's going to be the most interesting. 😃😃
And seriously, this is another thing that makes me go all ☺️☺️☺️☺️ And I'm honoured that you've been giving our recommendations and that your sis and friends have been liking my work. ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much once again, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'll try to update soon enough. 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very beautifully written. .. the emotions of the characters come across so well. You are really a v good writer. .. keep up the good work. ... eager to read more from ur end...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pppworld1

Very very beautifully written. .. the emotions of the characters come across so well. You are really a v good writer. .. keep up the good work. ... eager to read more from ur end...

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Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
LM,🤗
Firstly...Are you feeling better now?? Secondly...sorry for the late reply...Held up with my exams now...First,Accounts and today it was Maths...🥱 I have English tomorrow...So, I thought I'd come online and take rest..😛

Coming back to your update...OMG!!!☺️☺️ Such a cute update LM...Ishani helping Ranveer...😳😳
choo chweet👏👏... Ranveer's breakdown made me feel very bad🥺...And they way you described Baa😆😆- "scarecrow"🤣...But on a serious note, that was true...She was one🤢...You gave her the perfect name...And the way you said about Mota Bapuji, I'm now missing him...🤔...I simply adore your writing LM...Lovely words...⭐️...Did you describe something about Falguni?? I want to read even her description now...😳😳

Waiting for your next update...

PS: Do you wanna hear the review of my friend??😉😉
Edited by ishveer4eva - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456


Dear LM


You know this chapter was the it chapter for me in this FF , at least so far 😳 😳 It is just something about this chapter that just makes you relate to both the charackters whom we fell in love it. It 's so beautiful, innocent and see how there friendship begun and they finding a companion releating with the unjustic and cruelty from world 😭 😭

It 's painfully beautiful chapter , Ranveer 's breakdown made me cry , the thought of a small kid being wronged this way just breaks my heart into pieces , I hate violation towards kid so much and the way you wrote Ishani 's and Ranveer feelings were just to brilliant dearie ⭐️ ⭐️

Ishani wanting to help and the feeling of helpnessless were so releatable , LM I have said it before and I say it again you writion emontiones so beautifullly that it look effortless and just wow to your briliant and beautiful skills ❤️ ❤️

It 's a masterpiece my dear , remember when I predicted that this FF would be a superhit , but yaar with this chapter it turned into a blockbuster , superduper hit and a masterpiece that left me hungry to read more and more 😳 😳 😳

Beautiful job with this one LM , my personal favourite part to now 😳 😳

Hope you are feeling better , and exam is going good 😳 😳 Sending loads of hugs and best wishes to my favourite author 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love you loads ❤️ ❤️

With love
#yoursNr.1fan

MM

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Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm really thrilled that you liked this chapter so much! StarStar
This chapter is equally special for me as well, because this chpter helps us explore both Ranveer's and Ishaani's characters even though the diary entry is from the latter's POV. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Both of them are innocent souls who have been thrown towards the harsh realities of life, and they have found each other in the dark. 😛😛
The world is a cruel place certainly, but these two are among those who are meant to survive it by sailing through with their friendship and a bond that is more of a companionship. 😃😃 Ranveer's breakdown is something that pained me to write as well because even I'm dead against child violence. But I'm glad that you liked the way I portrayed IshVeer's emotions over here. Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Your praises never fail to make me blush now, do they? ☺️☺️
I'm perfectly fine now and thank you so much sweetie! 🤗🤗 Loads of hugs and best wishes and love from me too! ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishveer4eva

LM,🤗

Firstly...Are you feeling better now?? Secondly...sorry for the late reply...Held up with my exams now...First,Accounts and today it was Maths...🥱 I have English tomorrow...So, I thought I'd come online and take rest..😛

Coming back to your update...OMG!!!☺️☺️ Such a cute update LM...Ishani helping Ranveer...😳😳
choo chweet👏👏... Ranveer's breakdown made me feel very bad🥺...And they way you described Baa😆😆- "scarecrow"🤣...But on a serious note, that was true...She was one🤢...You gave her the perfect name...And the way you said about Mota Bapuji, I'm now missing him...🤔...I simply adore your writing LM...Lovely words...⭐️...Did you describe something about Falguni?? I want to read even her description now...😳😳

Waiting for your next update...

PS: Do you wanna hear the review of my friend??😉😉

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. StarStar And yes, I'm perfectly fit and fine right now. 😃😃 And don't apologize, I can understand. Focus on your exams first. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed And all the very best for them. 👍🏼👍🏼 Btw, are you giving your 12th Boards this year?
Yes, that breakdown scene was very sad for me to write as well. Broken HeartBroken Heart Baa was a scarecrow only before she got all that goodness from her heart transplant. ROFLROFL Even I miss HP so much! 😭😭 Why did they have to kill him so soon? OuchOuch
I think I gave a bit of a description about Falguni in the second epistle. TongueTongue (Which reminds me that I have to make a correction over there. 😕😕)
I'll try to update soon enough, and love you! ❤️❤️
I definitely want to hear her review. 😉😉

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