Ishveer FF: Destiny can't be changed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone ! I'm in a very very serious dilemma guys help me out ! I'm just not able to decide whether to write an ff or not ,as I'm slow at typing & somedays I get really busy ( believe me or not but yes😛 ), so I may not be able to write frequently or to reply on time & to be honest I'm very bad at writing but still I'll try to , so tell me your opinion 😉

CAUTION=I may discontinue in the middle or may update late so please tolerate

PROLOGUE

One fine day at Vaghela mansion - ishani was getting ready , she was really depressed by the thought that ranveer came to know about her & shikhar's plan of ML , but was curious as how come ranveer didn't threw her out of the house , she was really tensed . In rv's room , he was thinking -" why is ishani doing this , what does she wants , money can't be the reason as she had shikhar with her , then what must be the reason , I must find out before everyone comes to know about her drama". He was really angry with ishani but still somewhere in his heart he still was not able to believe what ishani said before going to jail and after confrontation ,as her eyes were saying something else but he was not able to catch it because of ishani's stubbornness of hiding the truth and her harsh words which blindfolded him . Suddenly they heard ritika screaming , everybody rushed to her room to find that she was suffering from labor pain ...

The vaghela family barged into the hospital and admitted ritika , shikhar also came along with them . When the delivery was over the docs found out that baby chirkut was dead , they informed ritika , she was shocked , the doctors said that this must have happened if she didn't took proper rest & walked a lot ( in reality she was doing belly dance all over . lol.), but ritika denied , she asked the docs to inform her family about this , doctors did the same , ranveer & ishani were shocked , amba was on a verge of having heart attack ( hopefully , she lost her voice initially in shock ) kailash asked the docs to let them meet ritika , they allowed , when they went in the ward ritika was flowing her crocodile tears like niagara falls , they were all giving sympathy to her , ishani also felt bad , when laxmi questioned how this must have happened , ritika said - the cause of this is their bahu , ishani ...Everybody stared at ishani wide eyed.

PS: sorry if I turned a little bit funny in the end , I can't stand out to be serious for long . This was the beginning , if u all want me to continue , then I'll try my best to continue , but u all have to bear my stupid funny touches then :P

Double PS : sorry for the irrelevant title too , i'm really bad at that

All kinds of furniture & crockery are welcome 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written k
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, I think this will b th possible story line for this show as well since I am very sure baby chirkut will nvr be born alive...
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Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Beautifully written k

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really ???? i thought every1 will try to stop me for writing this ,as ffs r not my cup of tea😛
well thanx for appreciation btw😃
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Originally posted by: fan.matsh

Hey, I think this will b th possible story line for this show as well since I am very sure baby chirkut will nvr be born alive...

fan.matsh dear, tumhare muh main julab jamun 😆 if all u said will become true na then seriously i'll throw a lavish party in the forum , thanx 4 ur words 😊
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Dear, it beautifully written, i like the last part the most .
Continue soon :)
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Originally posted by: xx_MATSH_xx

Dear, it beautifully written, i like the last part the most .
Continue soon :)

thank goodness , i thought u all will throw chappals at me for the last part only , cuz i messed it up 😛
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It was very nice dear!
do update soon plzz..😊
Edited by roshnipillai - 10 years ago
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here comes the 1st chapter , flying...zooo...

CHAPTER -1
Ishani was blown by the declaration , she didn't knew what to say , ranveer was confused , there was a sudden silence in the ward , but then amba started badmouthing ishani , all insisted ranveer to go & register a complain in the police , rv felt helpless infornt of everyone , so he went to the police station , everybody else took ritika home , parekhs were shocked hearing the incident , shikhar convinced ishani not to feel bad , they'll soon find a solution to this .

At the police stn. , rv was a lil bit hesitant to complain but when he was about to , jailer didi comesinbetween , she asked what happened , rv told her the whole incident , but determined jailer didi opposed him.
.she said- " mr.rv your wife loves u so much , she had done so much for you , don't u know , she was about to sacrifice her life &..." she was interrupted by ranveer .
ranveer- " wait ...what r u saying , i don't know anything"
jailer- " what??? let me clarify " n so jailer tells ranveer the whole story from d day of sangeet , how ishani followed him, how she erased the proofs, how she made rv hate her , how badly she missed ranveer etc. etc.
Ranveer's mind went blank in shock...
jailer-" but mr.rv how come u were unaware of this , i even narrated this to ur friend ritika too...mr.rv are you listening???"
Without uttering a single word , ranveer departed from the police stn...
on his way back, jailer's words were ranging in his mind , he broke down in the mid-way & started crying badly , it started raining heavily , as though god was also crying with him ...

Ranveer's monologue - " Why ishani, why ? what was the need to do this , why did u do it , why did you suffered so much for ME ?? , I always tried to keep you away from all pain & miseries , i wanted you to be happy, form the day i started loving you , i knew that my love was not going to be that simple , i'll have to face a lot , but still i accepted my cruel fate just for YOU , i wanted to keep all the agony in my part & wanted happiness and mirth to be in your part . Motabapuji , i'm so sorry , i failed miserably in doing my job , you gave me the job of taking care of ishani & and see what i did , falguni ma , i'm really ashamed that i let you down , you trusted me so much , you happily gave ishani's hand in mine , and see that result of this . I loved ishani so much , but was not able to protect her . After marriage , i was logging to her all the happiness , but always the opposite of it happened . Wish you din't loved me ishani , as all i wanted was your happiness not you , i din't expected you to love me , when you did , i thought that my life was complete , i felt that now i can shower all of my love without hiding it , but see you always got pain in return of loving me ...i failed ishani, i failed "
Ranveer was totally heart broken , he was heading towards the sea to end up his life as he was not able to accept the truth , he was not able to imagine how much ishani have suffered in those 6 months .But it was as if , the destiny din't wanted him to die so soon .
But suddenly something sparked in his mind -" If ishani din't murdered chirag then who did it ?? ishani wanted me to marry ritika but then she stopped the wedding , there is definitely something which i don't know , maybe the person who murdered chirag is after ishani too , so how can i leave ishani like that in such a danger , i must find out , so this will be my last task of life , to save my love..."
So ranveer went home burried in deep thoughts , there he saw ishani walking to & fro in the corridor waiting anxiously for ranveer , watching ishani , ranveer eyes became numb, he said to himself-" ishani mere pyar ki vajha se hi tum iss musibat main ho , ab mera pyar hi tumhe iss musibat se bahar nikalega , kyunki meri aashiqui tum se hi..."

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So the frist chapter is done , hope it was not boring , sorry for a small update , but soon will become used too of writing big ones 😊

Edited by Katniss07 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katniss07


thank goodness , i thought u all will throw chappals at me for the last part only , cuz i messed it up😛


😆 chappals?? No dear i would throw roses at u, the last part is beautiful

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