Ishveer FF: Destiny can't be changed - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 Great!
I loved it...
Update soon plz :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshnipillai

😊 Great!

I loved it...
Update soon plz :)

thanx a lot dear 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The chapter is beautiful.
glad that finally the truth is revealed atleast in ur FF.
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dear

I am so sorry for being late to comment 😭

But I have read both parts and they were really good 👏 😃 I am glad that Ranveer found out the truth 😃 But I hate child deaths 😭 😭

I can 't wait to read more 😊

With love and best wishes
MM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MM123456

Hi dear

I am so sorry for being late to comment 😭

But I have read both parts and they were really good 👏 😃 I am glad that Ranveer found out the truth 😃 But I hate child deaths 😭 😭

I can 't wait to read more 😊

With love and best wishes
MM

thanx a lot MM dear🤗
what can i do friend , i made that miscarriage happen only because of the cvs dna test ,& as i wanted to continue with the actual story plot , if that dna test din't happened then i would've shown a pillow instead of baby 😔 so so sorry if u felt bad about that 😭 plz. forgive me 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katniss07


thanx a lot MM dear🤗
what can i do friend , i made that miscarriage happen only because of the cvs dna test ,& as i wanted to continue with the actual story plot , if that dna test din't happened then i would've shown a pillow instead of baby😔so so sorry if u felt bad about that😭plz. forgive me😭



Dear , I am so sorry I did not mean to make you feel bad 😭
I just hate miscarriage and all 😭 😭 😭

Hope you understand , arrey don't ask for forgiveness and like I said I look forward to read more ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys idk why but now i just can't resist writing it , i wanna pour my heart out , so i'm writing another chapter , ps: chapters r flooding because it's sunday 😆

CHAPTER-2

Ishani asked ranveer - " what happened ranveer , tell me why r u crying ??? did you registered the F.I.R ????"

ranveer-" ishani just go to sleep i don' t want to talk anymore " saying this he went to his room.

At 12:00pm , ranveer was lying on his bed trying to recollect whatever happened from that day till now , to collect clues .

He thought about what happened today , he came to know ishani's truth , he pondered over each & every word of the jailer , she told him the truth , she also have told ritika the truth ...YES! if jailer di told everything to ritika , why din't she told me , also it flashed in his mind that ritika accused ishani of her miscarriage , then why ritika lied , there is something really really wrong going over here , i don't know why i'm suspecting ritika but i have to ...thinking this , he dozed off.

The next morning , amba din't allowed ishani to sit on the dining table , she was again scolding her , suddenly ranveer comes there

Ranveer - " maa , plz. Don't scold ishani like that "

Amba -" ranveer , dikra par kyun , isse toh police ke hawale kar dena chahiye"

Ranveer -" maa please , police bina subuth ke ishani ko nahi le ja sakti"

There , shikhar was on his way to rv mansion , he was thinking - mujhe ishani ko apne sath le jana chahiye, wahan ranveer aur uski ma , sach jaan ne ke baad aur ishani par itna bada ilzaam lagne par usse chain se nahi rehne denge.

At rv mansion ,

Shikhar - " ishani mai tumhe lene aaya hun , please come along with me "

Ranveer- "nahi ishani kahi nahi jayegi"

Shikhar -"par-"

Ranveer-" shikhar I want to talk with u, alone "

Outside the house

Ranveer-" dekho shikar, I know ishani's truth , she's not at fault"

Shikhar was listening carefully

Ranveer continued -" but there is someone else behind all this mess , and I'm suspecting ritika "

Shikhar was shocked , but din't said anything

Ranveer-" see , I'm aware that u love ishani a lot , but I just want to keep her infront of my eyes till I clean up his mess , then I'll make sure that ishani returns to u, as my love has always given her pain , but it's your love which will give her happiness "

Shikhar - " rv , ishani & I know who is the culprit , it's ritika only , the only thing is we don't have any evidence , ritika is the one who murdered falguni aunty , n she ...n she "

Ranveer- " n she what shikhar " ranveer was boiling with anger , this could be clearly seen in his eyes

Shikhar -" and she stabbed ishani on your wedding day, she hired contract killers n tried to push ishani from the hill tied in the fake police van , but ishani somehow managed to rescue herself, then she confronted ritika after some struggle , but after ritika blurted out the truth she took an iron rod and ..."

Ranveer-" stop ! enough , enough " ranveer was totally hyped , his eyes were reddened with anger constant flow of tears , he was sweating badly.

Ranveer -" okay , now please dont' let ishani or anyone else to know about our conversation , just try to stop ishani from making plans , and don't worry i'll not do anything which will hurt u , ishani will return back to u"

Saying this ranveer departs for his office

Ranveer to himself-" ritika your countdown starts , NOW! "

Shikhar was totally confused ,then suddenly ishani appears over there

ishani-" what was going on between you two?"

shikhar-" no no nothing at all , he was just saying how much he loves u , that's it"

ishani-" n that's what i'm here to talk about , see shikhar i'm sorry but i can't keep my promise , i love ranveer , i know that i'm gonna hurt u & your family , but i'm not able to stay away from him , ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena"

Saying this ishani also left the place

Shikhar was thinking - " what r these 2 made of ? sometimes the one agrees , the other moment , the other 1 disagrees , but i believe on ranveer , he'll surly let me take u with me "

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Another chapter done ! hope u all like it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice chapter update soon and pm me when u update it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please continue ur ff dear!!!nd update ur next chapter soon!!
Edited by VC288 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice one... waiting for next one

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