Ishveer FF - Unconditional Love (Chapter 9 on page 22)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful
Hi dear i'm new forum member. Awesooom...chapt yaar i alwy read your all update... yo all chapt amazing yaar
update soon...

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Hello Dearie 🤗

Welcome to the forum! Thankyou so much sweatie! I am really happy that you liked my chapter. Thankyou so much again!

With love,

Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Yesterday I read ur all chapters.Well done dear 😊 U beautifully describe the ishveer chemistry. I loved it. Please pm me whenever u update new chapter.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Superb chapter ... Waiting for next one to know what will happen . ..thanks for pm

Hey Zenab 🤗 Thankyou so much for liking it and I am glad that you liked it. And no need to thanks for pm 😊 😳

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Erasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Greetings isha

First of all after long time ,i am going to review your chapter .my sincierec appoligies for late review .

Can not catch up with the review and nor i update the ff of mine ,stuck up on my own work &i know its a lame excuse but i can only say sorry for the lame excuse .

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Now coming to your chapter

I must say you are completing your master degree on romance genere very soon .aah such a blissfully chapter ,ishani posseviness over ranveer is such a hurt raising element you have made in this chapter .

Ranveer here is stick between the duty and love ,poor soul he accutlly wants to choose one things but faith played a game with ranveer .

Aah i can imagine those puppy eyes of ranveer when he feels guilty or stuck between hurt and mind game .now ranveer has to be fight with his inner self to completely win his love

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Ishani is angry with ranveer ,i know pour soul going though what kind of trauma is he going though but it's oblivious fact that anyone became angry if you share something personal .

I liked the part most when you revealed the part where she mentioned that she is angry because of the personal things share with rittila but she angry because ranveer promise rittika within a week

The things are changed for ishani its her a lot and over the fact you mentioned that ranveer removed all his memory and she only found rittika memory.

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Again you gave masterstroke and its hit out of boundary .

I am going give you ten out of ten for the party sequence .

You write it so well there flaws and emotions and there current state of mind ,its beautifully described on the party sequence .

Cherry on the cake is the surprze element that going to add the suspense level to the next level .

I loved the stair scene where ranveer is only gazing at ishani ,ishani with heavy hurt attend the party and at the same time she feels jrlous seeing rittika too close with ranveer .

Again you make us surprise with dance number of ishNi and ranveer and how romantically ranveer say sorry to ishani and its melt ishani hurt little bit and ranveer have a sigh of relief .

Rittika is a useless fellow and i am not bother about his planned at all .

I have full faith on you and writing skill ability that improve a lot in those days.

Again jealous ishani could not take off the stress of ranveer and rittika and got drank .

Now revealed the suspense early and can not wait to read the next update .

Lots of love

Saumik

P:s-i think first time i given you this long review on your chapter .

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
So finally we have an update from you! This was really good! I liked Ranveer's pain and his feelings for her (Ishani). It reminds me of those old days which were bitter. Those Ri days and stuff -_-

Now there's a new character, Parth and he's trying to have Ishani :@ Hope everything's gonna be fine with her and he saves her from Parth. I really hope!

Sorry for the late reply yaar, stuck up between exams. Sorry. :/

I loved their dance part <3 <3

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Hey Aarushi 🤗

Don't apologize dear! I understand! Even I completed my exams and btw, how were your exams?

Sorry for taking so long to update it 😭 Thankyou so much for liking it! I am glad that you loved Ranveer's part. And I am sorry that it reminds you of those Ri's day 😭

Yaa there is new character, Parth..but only for while. Don't worry, Ranveer is there for his Ishu 😉 Don't worry dear!

I am glad that you loved dance part.

With Love,

Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ayeshamukhtar
Its the awesome chapter...
Ishaani in anger and drunk...
Let see how can rv saves his Ishaani from ritika trapetraps

Hey my Angel 🤗

Thankyou so much for your review yaar! I will soon pm you the next part 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: VC288
The chapter is beautiful dear! Specially the dance part, ishani showing that Ranveer is her's only! That possessiveness is something you would always love to see!

Good work on the chapter!

Update soon!!

VC

Hey Vaishali 🤗

Thankyou so much yaara! I am really glad that you found the dance part beautiful. Yaa even I love to write this types of scenes between Ishveer <3

Thankyou once again!

I will update it soon!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: naush2015
Cant wait for the next honey.great update.

Hey dearie 🤗

Thankyou so much! I am really happy that you found it great! Thankyou! I will update it soon 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: sakshi5050
rocked dear👏👏👏

it was really amazing to read each and every scenes of the chapter 😛
ishani expressing her feelings and her anger all are acceptable the way she talked about trust is something priceless in your chapter
on the whole i loved it the extreme 😛😛😛
hate rithika a cunning lady😡😡😡

update soon yaar😛

Hey Buddy 🤗

Thankyou so much yaar!! Yaa, even I found the same you found about Ishani. After what Ranveer did with her, she needs to burst out the anger. Thankyou so much!

I will soon update the next chapter!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py
Hey hi dear its been long tym u updated.
Cmng to chapter it WS very nice I jst loved ishveer confrontatn
Very well written
Ishani in gown is treat to watch bt what's with parth thing u left a cliffhanger
Plz update soon
Thnx fr pm

Hii dearie 🤗

I know it's really been long...sholly 😭
I am really glad that you loved the chapter and Ishveer's part.

Thankyou so much my dear!

To know about Parth, you need to wait for next chapter 😉 which I will update it soon!

No need to thanks for pm!

Thankyou once again 🤗