Originally posted by: Erasa
Greetings isha
First of all after long time ,i am going to review your chapter .my sincierec appoligies for late review .
Can not catch up with the review and nor i update the ff of mine ,stuck up on my own work &i know its a lame excuse but i can only say sorry for the lame excuse .
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Now coming to your chapter
I must say you are completing your master degree on romance genere very soon .aah such a blissfully chapter ,ishani posseviness over ranveer is such a hurt raising element you have made in this chapter .
Ranveer here is stick between the duty and love ,poor soul he accutlly wants to choose one things but faith played a game with ranveer .
Aah i can imagine those puppy eyes of ranveer when he feels guilty or stuck between hurt and mind game .now ranveer has to be fight with his inner self to completely win his love
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Ishani is angry with ranveer ,i know pour soul going though what kind of trauma is he going though but it's oblivious fact that anyone became angry if you share something personal .
I liked the part most when you revealed the part where she mentioned that she is angry because of the personal things share with rittila but she angry because ranveer promise rittika within a week
The things are changed for ishani its her a lot and over the fact you mentioned that ranveer removed all his memory and she only found rittika memory.
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Again you gave masterstroke and its hit out of boundary .
I am going give you ten out of ten for the party sequence .
You write it so well there flaws and emotions and there current state of mind ,its beautifully described on the party sequence .
Cherry on the cake is the surprze element that going to add the suspense level to the next level .
I loved the stair scene where ranveer is only gazing at ishani ,ishani with heavy hurt attend the party and at the same time she feels jrlous seeing rittika too close with ranveer .
Again you make us surprise with dance number of ishNi and ranveer and how romantically ranveer say sorry to ishani and its melt ishani hurt little bit and ranveer have a sigh of relief .
Rittika is a useless fellow and i am not bother about his planned at all .
I have full faith on you and writing skill ability that improve a lot in those days.
Again jealous ishani could not take off the stress of ranveer and rittika and got drank .
Now revealed the suspense early and can not wait to read the next update .
Lots of love
Saumik
P:s-i think first time i given you this long review on your chapter .
