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Posted: 10 years ago

Disclaimer : I am sorry if this chapter is a bad one , but tried my best I rewrote this five time 😆 Before I just decided to go with this . Sorry for any typos and do please let me know what you think ? Please don't throw tomatoes and chappals on me 😊

Chapter 46

A partner 's promise

Ranveer and Shikhar stood outside Arjun's office, shikhar was about to knock on his door when Ranveer stopped him.

" when sir called me I thought it would be a brief about my undercover operation , but when he mentioned bringing you with me I am having feeling this is about something else " Ranveer shared with his partner.

Shikhar nodded, understanding what his partner said.
"Whatever it is, I have your back partner " Shikhar promised and Ranveer smiled kindly at his partner
"Back at ya partner "

The partners went in , both feeling nervous on what was coming their way . Arjun looked up from the file and nodded to the young officer and told them to take a seat.
" How is the arm ? " asked Arjun and looked at Ranveer , Ranveer gave Arjun a small smile and said :

" It's good , sir " he answered , before he added : " But sir , I am sure that 's not why you called us " Ranveer said straight on the point as usual and Arjun smiled witnessing that .
" It is like looking at the young version of my partner " Arjun remarked and Ranveer nodded and answered :

" I will take that as compliment " Ranveer answered and waited for Arjun to go on .
"Talking about Harshad , as you know he is taking leave because of Disha 's treatments " Ranveer and Shikhar nodded , but did not understand were this were going.

" Emm sir , what does this have to do with why we are here ?" asked Shikhar confused .
"Everything "answered Arjun and looked at their confused face and sighed knowing what he was going to tell them will change their life especially Ranveer Vaghela 's.

" You did an amazing job undercover Ranveer , too good job you could fooled anywhere to believe what you want them to believe . You are a true undercover operative "

" Thank you sir, but you still have not told me why we are here " Ranveer answere bluntly , tired that Arjun was pushing around the bush.

Arjun took a file and opened it front of the partners , there they saw a picture of a man they could recognize everywhere .
" How far does your loyalty to this man go ?" asked Arjun .
" As far as it takes me " Ranveer answered honestly , before he added :

" What the hell is going on ?" Ranveer said demanding an answer .
" You are not going to like it , Ranveer " said Arjun and told Ranveer everything.

" No way , my partner is not doing this " Shikhar answered and looked at Ranveer , when he saw that his partner did not reply .
" You can't be considering this , Ranveer " said Shikhar angrily .
Ranveer did not respond to Shikhar 's comments and neither did he look at his Partner .
" I will do it " he answered Arjun and Arjun nodded before asking :

" Are you sure Ranveer , because once you do this there won't be a way out " Arjun said , asking the young detective.
" This is what we do " Ranveer answered
" This is not what we do , Ranveer " Shikhar said trying to make his partner to understand.
" Think about Ishani " he said and Ranveer looked at his partner for the first time after the conversation.

" That's what I am doing , I am thinking about Ishani , Disha and Harshad Uncle "
" There has to be another way to protect them " Shikhar said hopefully and Ranveer smiled at his partner :

" It has been an honor to serve this city beside you , partner " Ranveer said and saw something he never thought he would see a small teardrop falling from his partner 's left eye.
" Don't " he begged him and Ranveer took a hand on his shoulder and asked :

" Do I have your back on this last assignment " he asked .
" bas***d "
" One last time, partner " Ranveer asked and Shikhar still refused :

" You promised partner " Ranveer reminded him and Shikhar sighed :

" Fine , but I am not liking this " shikhar answered and prayed for some miracle.

Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
MM
good chapter but again it's SHORT but very very suspenseful .. 😉 i just hope nth bad happens to ish or ranveer.. :'(
Edited by xx_MATSH_xx - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xx_MATSH_xx

MM
good chapter but again it's SHORT but very very suspenseful .. 😉 i just hope nth bad happens to ish or ranveer.. :'(



Thank you so much dear 🤗 🤗 sorry 😭 😭 Well something bad happened 😭
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Originally posted by: MM123456



Thank you so much dear 🤗 🤗 sorry 😭 😭 Well something bad happened 😭


WHAT! MM then make sure u update soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon, MM. I'm kind of feeling bad for Ranveer and... realizing he was sacrificing himself? Don't know but this is what this chapter suggested. And I like Shikhar here. Also, remember one thing, MM, that when you are writing please avoid repetition of the words. For an example, here, you used the word 'partner' various times whereas it could have been better without it as well. Take care, and update soon! :)


EDIT : You write your stories various times??? Oh, my. Lazy me. I only do this once and edit few parts. XD
Edited by Elvish_Hobbit - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
MM, please reveal the secret. I am dying to know the truth 😕. I am having goosebumps in my stomach.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Continue soon, MM. I'm kind of feeling bad for Ranveer and... realizing he was sacrificing himself? Don't know but this is what this chapter suggested. And I like Shikhar here. Also, remember one thing, MM, that when you are writing please avoid repetition of the words. For an example, here, you used the word 'partner' various times whereas it could have been better without it as well. Take care, and update soon! :)


EDIT : You write your stories various times??? Oh, my. Lazy me. I only do this once and edit few parts. XD



I will try to update ASAP dear 🤗 🤗 I am feeling bad for Ranveer as well , but this is the kind of person he is 😳 😳 Yes Ranveer does sacrifice himself 😲 😲 I am so glad you are liking Shikhar here 😉 😉

I will try to remember that EH 😉 😉 Thank you for letting me know
🤗


Only when I am really confused if I should post it or not and this one was one of them 😛 EH you are such a talented writer that you don't need to rewrite things like me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: strings123

MM, please reveal the secret. I am dying to know the truth😕. I am having goosebumps in my stomach.



It will be up by next chapter 😉 😉 I hope that is a good thing 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
MM, short chapter! 😭😭 And you are making more suspense than solving it! No fair! 😡🤣/
Never mind me, I'm just a little cranky today. 😆😆 This was such an informative chapter. So far, my theory is working out pretty well, the one I didn't tell you about. 😉😉 But what I like best over here is that Shikhar is such an adorable character unlike the pompous ass in the show. 🤢
MM, you need to disclose the full thing soon, or else I won't have hair remaining (courtesy of yanking them in anxiety 😉😉). As usual, your dedication in getting things done so passionately really makes me adore you more. ❤️❤️
Keep doing the brilliant job that you've been doing and update soon! 😃😃 #4MoreToGo ⭐️⭐️
Ps. Welcome to the re-writing club. 😆😆 Reminds me of the time when I wrote the 9th and the14th chapter atleast more than a dozen times before I got it right. 🤣 Cheers! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

MM, short chapter! 😭😭And you are making more suspense than solving it! No fair! 😡🤣/



Never mind me, I'm just a little cranky today. 😆😆This was such an informative chapter. So far, my theory is working out pretty well, the one I didn't tell you about. 😉😉But what I like best over here is that Shikhar is such an adorable character unlike the pompous ass in the show. 🤢





MM, you need to disclose the full thing soon, or else I won't have hair remaining (courtesy of yanking them in anxiety 😉😉). As usual, your dedication ingetting things done so passionately really makes me adore you more. ❤️❤️




Keep doing the brilliant job that you've been doing and update soon! 😃😃#4MoreToGo ⭐️⭐️





Ps. Welcome to the re-writing club. 😆😆Reminds me of the time when I wrote the 9th and the14th chapter atleast more than a dozentimes before I got it right. 🤣Cheers! 😉



Hi LM 🤗

Missed you , hope your studies are doing okey 😃

About the short chapters , I am really sorry yaar I am not able to write long chapters lik you 😆 😳

Yaar , you are torturing me more than I torture you all 😆 I mean need to know what your theory is 😉 But I have a feeling that your theory is right 😉 😉

The secret will be up by next update , pakka wala promise 😳 Sweetheart you all are the reason that I am so dedicated to this story 😳 😳

About Shikhar , I like this Shikhar better . It makes me all happy that you all liked him as well😉 😉

Thank you so much dear

🤗 🤗

OMG I did not think about that before you mentioned it , wow what a journey it has been so far and it would never came this far without your love and support 😳 😳

That is one club I don't want to join , because it made me crazy 😆 😉

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