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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CoolBeans86

@Naaz

Hey mate, thanks! 😛
Well I may very well write one then hehe I'll see. However, i think any romance story needs a bit of sexy time- so mine would be racy. Dont know if that would be permitted in this forum lol If any couple on the planet needs a bit of bump and grind its these two bores. Honestly- in their case the saying is totally apt- they need to get laid, im sure itll help LOL! 😆


I agree you know cv's also making it a drama show but its time we got some more romance from Shivya side seriously tooo much drama makes it monotonous and sad... please do write a raunchy ff m going to make mine naughty as well heheh <3 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CoolBeans86

@Naaz

Hey mate, thanks! 😛
Well I may very well write one then hehe I'll see. However, i think any romance story needs a bit of sexy time- so mine would be racy. Dont know if that would be permitted in this forum lol If any couple on the planet needs a bit of bump and grind its these two bores. Honestly- in their case the saying is totally apt- they need to get laid, im sure itll help LOL! 😆

yeah sure...plzz go ahead 😆 that will be great if u add some romance in to it...we r dying to watch it on the show but as we know that is next to impossible in this stupid drama... So its only possible in a fan fiction or a VM...vms I've already made many now it's ur turn 😉 & make it as naughty as u can...😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Sheena 2nd part was fab...👏
The story is getting Intresting wid each part...loving it the way raghav & khusiya r giving back to shanti don't know will we ever to get to see it in the show it not 😭 Waiting for the next part shivam enters riya's house 😛
Plzz update by 2morrow if possible...😳 I'll be waiting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naaz695

yeah sure...plzz go ahead 😆 that will be great if u add some romance in to it...we r dying to watch it on the show but as we know that is next to impossible in this stupid drama... So its only possible in a fan fiction or a VM...vms I've already made many now it's ur turn 😉 & make it as naughty as u can...😈




@Naaz
Hi love 😊 well lol maybe... I'll play around with something and if it turns out into something i like, I'll post it, but I'll put a warning for adults only hehe I dont see the point of writing or watching romance stories if there is no physical stuff in it... I mean its an integral part of life and what makes the icing on the cake. Its exciting and makes your belly flutter so I dont know why some people shy away from it... I mean those who are denying that side of themselves in the name of "morals" or whatever, dont know what theyre missing. Life flashes by in a moment and by then its too late, so I say bring on the dirty! haha! Im sure people would hiss at me for that, but whatever 😉
I know what you mean about it being impossible in this drama- I mean also lol it is an indian soap so they can only so much "intimacy", even something as innocent as kissing isnt aired. Its a shame, they are actors so I dont know what the big deal is. You have women in bollywood movies gyrating practically like po*n stars and they cant show some tongue action? Strange... Theres no way Id watch a bollywood movie with my parents in the room, yikes lol so I dont see why they cant just bridge the gap into the physical. Dont know what they are trying to protect society from, attraction and sex is human!
Anyways love, not promising anything with the FF...but you'll know it if i have written it cuz Ill just post it one day 😊 I like to write so its not something completely alien to me.


@princesssheena
Just read your second chapter... i like where its headed! Wonderful imagination you have, keep going. Theres nothing like creating something yourself 😊 I totally unequivocally hate ShivYa and i hope they crash and burn the way things are... but that doesnt mean I cant appreciate some good FF. Im so bored of the show Id rather read something a fan made up than the actual story 😆



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CoolBeans86




@Naaz
Hi love 😊 well lol maybe... I'll play around with something and if it turns out into something i like, I'll post it, but I'll put a warning for adults only hehe I dont see the point of writing or watching romance stories if there is no physical stuff in it... I mean its an integral part of life and what makes the icing on the cake. Its exciting and makes your belly flutter so I dont know why some people shy away from it... I mean those who are denying that side of themselves in the name of "morals" or whatever, dont know what theyre missing. Life flashes by in a moment and by then its too late, so I say bring on the dirty! haha! Im sure people would hiss at me for that, but whatever 😉
I know what you mean about it being impossible in this drama- I mean also lol it is an indian soap so they can only so much "intimacy", even something as innocent as kissing isnt aired. Its a shame, they are actors so I dont know what the big deal is. You have women in bollywood movies gyrating practically like po*n stars and they cant show some tongue action? Strange... Theres no way Id watch a bollywood movie with my parents in the room, yikes lol so I dont see why they cant just bridge the gap into the physical. Dont know what they are trying to protect society from, attraction and sex is human!
Anyways love, not promising anything with the FF...but you'll know it if i have written it cuz Ill just post it one day 😊 I like to write so its not something completely alien to me.


@princesssheena
Just read your second chapter... i like where its headed! Wonderful imagination you have, keep going. Theres nothing like creating something yourself 😊 I totally unequivocally hate ShivYa and i hope they crash and burn the way things are... but that doesnt mean I cant appreciate some good FF. Im so bored of the show Id rather read something a fan made up than the actual story 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ff...update the next part soon...i have been watching the show since the beginning but a late comer in this forum..read ur ff and loved it..update soon.. :) best wishes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Princesssheena, where'd you go girl? Am looking forward to your next chapter 😊 I really liked how you brought all the characters into the mix and you really kept true to how they are in the show, it's not easy! :) please keep going!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Authors Note
Hi Guys sorry i havent been able to update I am unwell will be updating soon, I have been watching though Chanda coming on Riyas side is a good sign i hope this all works out for the better its high time this show picks up some pace... But on the other hand I am still a bit sick so i cant write... hang in guys i will be back soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princesssheena

<font size="3">Authors Note</font>

<font size="3">Hi Guys sorry i havent been able to update I am unwell will be updating soon, I have been watching though Chanda coming on Riyas side is a good sign i hope this all works out for the better its high time this show picks up some pace... But on the other hand I am still a bit sick so i cant write... hang in guys i will be back soon :)</font>

Get well soon dear. I really enjoyed ur fanfic Excited to know what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

Shivam stood outside Riyas house he could see her working from the kitchen. She was wearing a simple yellow salwar her hair tied in a bun and dough all over face. She looked adorable as she tried her level best to roll a chapatti,

Shivam took a deep breath and sighed preparing himself for what came next

Shivam: This is it Shivam win your wife back

He walked into the house the door was open, and snuck into the window. Quietly walking into the kitchen he placed his arms around her petit waist, her hair smelled of ebony jasmine as he inhaled the scent. Her heart started beating she knew it was him, she shut her eyes for a brief second taking him in and slowly placed her hands over his and realized he was not a dream but was indeed true, it was him her eyes open and her heart sank slowly having the courage to turn around she faced him but her leg had to slip at that time only and she fell straight into his arms.

Kabhi Jo... Played in the background

There was an intense eye lock, they saw each others soul, and suddenly she came into her sense when she heard the mobile ring. Shivam made her stand straight and then he picked up the phone

Shivam: Yes I reached, Thanks Papa, Yes I will convince your daughter

RIya's eyebrows crossed as she heard him speak and then when he placed the phone down she asked him in an angry tone of voice

Riya: What are you doing here and what have to come here for

Shivam: I know your upset but I have come to win you back I am sorry Riya I misjudged you for so long

Riya: Sorry doesn't change anything Sorry its so easy to say sorry... you were going to marry another girl how could you

Shivam: Your wrong I would never marry Chanda I love you

Riya: You don't and what right have you come here to claim me

Shivam: I am your husband and your love I am not going to leave this house till I win you back

Riya: I will call the police Shivam stop it

Shivam: Call who you want in the eyes of god and the court I am your husband if you can stay in my house under the pretext of being my wife I can stay here under the pretext of being your husband. (he holds her hand and says) I love you

Riya: Find then do what you want but you go sleep in the guest room.

Shivam: absolutely not I am sleeping with my wife

Riya: (she holds a knife up and says in an angry mood) Listen Shivam I am upset don't upset me more

SHivam: (scared) wow Daadi was right about one thing.

Riya: What

Shivam: you are such a lioness... (he chuckled) Fine I will sleep in the guess oom, but listen if you need me you know where I am

He walked into the room and Riya mumbled in anger to herself.

Precap: First Kiss ;)

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