plz help

ok, i wrote these two poems, i need to know which one i shud turn in for my homework. lol


Freedom is a dolphin swimming in the ocean

Freedom is a dolphin swimming in the ocean
Free to do as he pleases
Swimming through the salt water
And coming up for air

Feeling the sun's hot rays
And the salt sticking to his skin
Doing flips and tricks
As he pleases

The sun rises
And the horizon increases
A new day comes
For him to be free again

Dolphin

Entrapped in a tangle of rope
Trying to find a way out
Searching, looking for a light of guidance
But to no avail

Tears of anger and frustration
Taking over his calm physique
Trying to escape from the cage
Feeling like a prisoner

Running out of breath
As he tries to live
To come up for air
From the salty death

Pushing and shoving
He is finally free
He dances in joy
As he swims through the ocean

i think first one is better 👏

I agree with Mehak... I also prefer the first one!!

Very well written!! 👏

the first one everyone should be free alwys
choose freedom and good luck

The first one is better.🙂

ii liike teh first one,