Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour
The badge is attractive, thank you, x.titli.x. Congratulations to the winners!
Thank you, organizers, I enjoyed the challenge of writing stories that revolve around phobias. You pretended that AubodroKhargosh's 15-word explanatory note for a 20-word story was its own story - that's a savage sense of humour!
So-So, I like how you created a sense of haphephobia with simple but effective sentences in this story. I especially like how the "washed" ... "wash" repetition brings out the "urgently" feeling.
2. He touched her hand lovingly. Disgust washed over her. She urgently needed to wash her hands!
So-So, this story effectively takes the reader into the claustrophobic space. Nicely written!
8. The door slammed shut! No escape! The thick walls seemed to be getting closer. Horror constricted my throat.
Sudharies, you managed to present several characters in a few words with this story.
8. Handsome man... Locked eyes...
Drew closer....
"Dance...?
Perceived shirt..
"Nope...."
His face fell
Friends scowled... "He's Hot"
"Excessive Buttons"....Nausea!
m4manju, this story nicely details the life of someone with anuptaphobia.
1. She dreaded her 30th birthday. No boyfriends yet! She spends sleepless nights thinking what if she can’t find one?
vaidharbhi95, the contrast between the principal character and others in this story effectively conveys how overwhelming ablutophobia is.
5. How people go on swashbuckling water adventures was beyond her. Akshita could hardly bathe without hallucinating about drowning to death.
HereAsMyself, when I looked up this story's reference (as I am unworthy of membership in the Bengali Literary Characters private forum), I chuckled at your sly humour.
5. 'Had your culprit been an ornithophobe, my pseudonym would have frightened him off.'
Prodosh Mitra smiles at the remark.
HereAsMyself, I am amazed by your creativity in this story!
6. Teaching in a school with a resident Basilisk isn’t easy, especially when your boggart is a mirror.
DelusionsOfNeha, this character's use of humour to cope with elevator phobia is refreshing.
1. Elevator door opens.
"I'll take the stairs."
"For 17th floor?"
"See you up there."
"How-"
"Rock climbing." She winked.
Aquabutterfly, the visual details in this story make it so convincing.
5. She felt them watching her at all times, their human-like eyes and wide smiles haunting her existence. Was this normal?
SoniRita, the abnormal reaction to something expected in this story is imaginative.
2. Snakes phobia so extreme that he had a heart attack when he saw snake on Lord Shiva's temple.
NINALOGY, I like your choice to arrange this story in this sequence to bring out how irrational the fear of solitude is.
6. The loneliness within him, silence of every moment he felt everyday, still remained, in spite of having 700 facebook friends.
Physics_girl, this story makes me want to know more.
5. She would have a room filled with trophies for her talent, but she never participated, in case she fails
Bee222, this is an intriguing situation.
2. Mortals have fears. Lord Phobos enjoys toying with them.
Until He falls for Harry, who only dreads fear itself — Him.
tournesol, this story puts a clever twist on phasmophobia, and the character's name is apt.
2. Swarup took a deep breath and smiled at the scary apparition in the dark. His therapist will be very happy.
https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/2790
I have added seven of my ten stories to this book, using the "microphobia" tag.
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