OS : A HEARTFELT CONVERSATION - Page 2

Thank you for writing this! I wish the show's creative team had done justice to the characters as you have. Your Pallavi is a person with ambition, motivated by her own life experience, which she was on the show before she became just Raghav's wife, motivated only to be with him.

I applaud that you narrated the logistics of how Siddhesh raised Pallavi, and her memories of indignities like eviction and frustrations like being unemployable. The real Pallavi knows the value of money (perhaps better than Raghav who has enough to spend extravagantly and still can never have enough), because Pallavi identifies what she needs and works to earn enough money for specific goals. Just as your young Pallavi wanted a job so that she could be self-sufficient, Pallavi in the early episodes was shown making calculated sacrifices: "I can sell this gold thread for enough money to buy new stock ... I can take time off from the shop today to earn enough money to avoid eviction." Pallavi's ideals aren't naïve; they are the result of her confidence in her abilities and knowing how to be happy.

I love that your Raghav has the same impulses as on the show, but in your story he is capable of thinking and choosing. Unlike Pallavi and Jaya who got drunk together for fun, Raghav drinks compulsively when he's lonely. Heavy drinking isn't part of Raghav's character; it's a situational obstacle that needs to be tackled and overcome for Raghav's goal of a happy family. Instead of using Raghav's drunkenness to create episodic drama like crying outside Jaya's graffiti-defaced house or saying "I love you!" outside the Deshmukh house, the show needs to do what you've done, let him want to get drunk, but gradually get in the habit of choosing to be sober and listening to his wife. I find the progression in your story more dramatically satisfying than the repetitive show.

I never wanted to see Pallavi waiting helplessly for Raghav to prove his love with his gun, or else she'll prove her love with fire. I prefer to see love on both sides by their listening to each other, as in your story. Your Pallavi loves Raghav as he revealed himself to her on the show: he treasures the music and dance that his parents gave him, and just wants to live with dignity - and that Raghav is more real to me than any Don stereotype. Pallavi would be as happy in Raghav's childhood treehouse as in a mansion ...

Has anyone written a treehouse fan fiction?

Please mail this piece to the PH. Pronto!

I love the way you addressed both their perspectives with the underlying message that they're both ultimately working towards the same end goal. They just have different means to their ends but at least end toh ek hi hai dono ka. I've been harping about this for ages but both Raghav and Pallavi simply need to talk. Daily. Their communication has dropped significantly and it's taking a massive toll on their relationship!

Very well written! Hope to read more from you! ❤️

Something I badly needed.

Thanks a ton for making this happen, even if on paper only, I needed them to have this conversation so bad❤️

Sama i love you you know right

What a heartfelt conversation between our beloved Raghvi

Whatever we don't get in the show you always serve us with that

And Yes let's love them together and let them solve their conflicts ❤️

You have a fan in me and i will tell you this all the time 🤗

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

The makers can give everything but heart to heart conversations

We had some of it in HYD episodes and when it is much needed rn, they omitted it

Thank you thank you sooo much for writing this

You wrote it so beautifully

None of them were out of character...it is exactly the way they would have behaved

I miss those Hyd days soo much and the pool conversations. I wish they had a peaceful place here as well.

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭

This is exactly the kind of conversation I want them to have. A very well written piece as usual.❤️

I liked you mentioned Pallavi’s childhood and how she can relate to Raghav’s struggle with poverty. This is probs the first time I felt for Siddhesh Dada thanks to you.

This 🙌🙌🙌
“Let's love them together and let them fight for each other.”

Thanks for the tag🤗😳

I am still waiting for them to have it.

In another delusional world. I don't care. I just want them to open up and confess the truth that is hidden under those sharp pieces of rocks called guilt, society, pain and anger. I wanna know Pallavi's story.

Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour

Thank you for writing this! I wish the show's creative team had done justice to the characters as you have. Your Pallavi is a person with ambition, motivated by her own life experience, which she was on the show before she became just Raghav's wife, motivated only to be with him.

I applaud that you narrated the logistics of how Siddhesh raised Pallavi, and her memories of indignities like eviction and frustrations like being unemployable. The real Pallavi knows the value of money (perhaps better than Raghav who has enough to spend extravagantly and still can never have enough), because Pallavi identifies what she needs and works to earn enough money for specific goals. Just as your young Pallavi wanted a job so that she could be self-sufficient, Pallavi in the early episodes was shown making calculated sacrifices: "I can sell this gold thread for enough money to buy new stock ... I can take time off from the shop today to earn enough money to avoid eviction." Pallavi's ideals aren't naïve; they are the result of her confidence in her abilities and knowing how to be happy.

I love that your Raghav has the same impulses as on the show, but in your story he is capable of thinking and choosing. Unlike Pallavi and Jaya who got drunk together for fun, Raghav drinks compulsively when he's lonely. Heavy drinking isn't part of Raghav's character; it's a situational obstacle that needs to be tackled and overcome for Raghav's goal of a happy family. Instead of using Raghav's drunkenness to create episodic drama like crying outside Jaya's graffiti-defaced house or saying "I love you!" outside the Deshmukh house, the show needs to do what you've done, let him want to get drunk, but gradually get in the habit of choosing to be sober and listening to his wife. I find the progression in your story more dramatically satisfying than the repetitive show.

I never wanted to see Pallavi waiting helplessly for Raghav to prove his love with his gun, or else she'll prove her love with fire. I prefer to see love on both sides by their listening to each other, as in your story. Your Pallavi loves Raghav as he revealed himself to her on the show: he treasures the music and dance that his parents gave him, and just wants to live with dignity - and that Raghav is more real to me than any Don stereotype. Pallavi would be as happy in Raghav's childhood treehouse as in a mansion ...

Has anyone written a treehouse fan fiction?

Thank You.

This means alot to me. In my opinion Raghav and Pallavi individually in respect to their characters have alot to explore rather than just fights, drinking and trauma.

Also for Raghav drrinking shouldn't be an escape rather a choice because if it can mend his heart from pain then it can also break down his relationships.

Originally posted by: masin

Please mail this piece to the PH. Pronto!

I love the way you addressed both their perspectives with the underlying message that they're both ultimately working towards the same end goal. They just have different means to their ends but at least end toh ek hi hai dono ka. I've been harping about this for ages but both Raghav and Pallavi simply need to talk. Daily. Their communication has dropped significantly and it's taking a massive toll on their relationship!

Very well written! Hope to read more from you! ❤️

@bold : If only i could Masin. I hope i can call you that?

Communication is the key to any relationship even if it is one with your own self.

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

Sama i love you you know right

What a heartfelt conversation between our beloved Raghvi

Whatever we don't get in the show you always serve us with that

And Yes let's love them together and let them solve their conflicts ❤️

You have a fan in me and i will tell you this all the time 🤗

Ofcourse i know that. You can't love someone else. I'll get jealous.

Whatever the writers fail at, i am always there to give you because i won't let them rip off our peace.

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

I am still waiting for them to have it.

In another delusional world. I don't care. I just want them to open up and confess the truth that is hidden under those sharp pieces of rocks called guilt, society, pain and anger. I wanna know Pallavi's story.

B: Me too. But I have little hope so I'll think of something for myself and be happy with it.