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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viewpoint

The way you’ve described his tiredness - I feel it. Everything. No responsibilities, no expectations- This Raghav hits home!! And how 💔

From the beginning of this show, I’ve been saying that these two will have a tragic story. His life spells tragic, his love is so deep, it will drown everyone around him, including himself. Her righteousness is so great, it won’t bend. Her love for him is so pure, he won’t be able to handle it, not because he doesn’t love her, but he doesn’t understand how someone can love him so.

Heartbreakingly beautiful


Yes! Raghav is a person who would essentially self destruct. He has a connotations of problems, emotional vulnerability, suicidal nature, past trauma peppered with an unhealthy dose of self loathing. He is a bag of explosives ready to explode.


Pallavi is calm steady and smooth like the ocean. Her effect on him is soothing. A balm to his constantly burning soul. Yet he knows, there is a fair chance that he might burn her along with him. So he desists and resists... however much he hurts. He will face any wound and amount of fatigue to keep his Angel safe.


Be it separation.


Thats my take.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This makes me love RR even more. His heart is an ocean of love.

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA


Yes! Raghav is a person who would essentially self destruct. He has a connotations of problems, emotional vulnerability, suicidal nature, past trauma peppered with an unhealthy dose of self loathing. He is a bag of explosives ready to explode.


Pallavi is calm steady and smooth like the ocean. Her effect on him is soothing. A balm to his constantly burning soul. Yet he knows, there is a fair chance that he might burn her along with him. So he desists and resists... however much he hurts. He will face any wound and amount of fatigue to keep his Angel safe.


Be it separation.


Thats my take.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was hauntingly beautiful👏


A Stunning Piece which ofcourse was sad enough to break my heart. The way you have described Raghav's all-consuming nature - be it when he loves or when he's finally drowning in his pain - finally his mental strength giving up - so that he finds some solace - is downright sorrowful.


Although I agree with what many of the writers saying that there's going to be a tragic lovestory since there're too many variables to be calculated,

I believe it's precisely this that makes them pretty strong individuals and will make for a pretty interesting & a stronger love story than any others - they have borne dark pasts - their ideologies have been different owing to their circumstances - but once they realise how important they're to each other - and it's not like they don't have loved ones around who don't want to see them together.

This is not some stupid-AnuragPrerna story where they meet only in heaven finally🤪 .... they're young & they just need to figure out more about life than they know right now.


Some lines I find that suit them are:


Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan

Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan


Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hai

Khushiya Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hai

Khoya Hai Khudko Ya

Sab Kuch Paaya Hai


Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho

Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Usse Rakhna Ho

Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho



Yes, it'll take time...but I'll not for one second be okay with theirs being a tragic lovestory. Anyways, these're my opinions - I have felt strongly only about one couple this way before🤗 & RaghVi come pretty close to them now or are already surpassing them for me

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA441

This was hauntingly beautiful👏


A Stunning Piece which ofcourse was sad enough to break my heart. The way you have described Raghav's all-consuming nature - be it when he loves or when he's finally drowning in his pain - finally his mental strength giving up - so that he finds some solace - is downright sorrowful.


Although I agree with what many of the writers saying that there's going to be a tragic lovestory since there're too many variables to be calculated,

I believe it's precisely this that makes them pretty strong individuals and will make for a pretty interesting & a stronger love story than any others - they have borne dark pasts - their ideologies have been different owing to their circumstances - but once they realise how important they're to each other - and it's not like they don't have loved ones around who don't want to see them together.

This is not some stupid-AnuragPrerna story where they meet only in heaven finally🤪 .... they're young & they just need to figure out more about life than they know right now.


Some lines I find that suit them are:


Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan

Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan


Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hai

Khushiya Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hai

Khoya Hai Khudko Ya

Sab Kuch Paaya Hai


Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho

Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Usse Rakhna Ho

Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho



Yes, it'll take time...but I'll not for one second be okay with theirs being a tragic lovestory. Anyways, these're my opinions - I have felt strongly only about one couple this way before🤗 & RaghVi come pretty close to them now or are already surpassing them for me


Loved the song! Apt for Raghav and Pallavi. Thanks for reviewing. I know many people donot agree with me about the tragic part but that's fine. I would ideally want theirs to be a happy ending as well.. just realistically speaking I feel that it wont be.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging Adu & Kiara too for the above post -

Just wanted to share my views since we were having this discussion here 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This has got so much depth. Loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was heartbreaking💔 The pain and the emotional weight could literally be felt through my screen. 😭


Wonderfully written as always. Thanks for the tag🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA441

This was hauntingly beautiful👏


A Stunning Piece which ofcourse was sad enough to break my heart. The way you have described Raghav's all-consuming nature - be it when he loves or when he's finally drowning in his pain - finally his mental strength giving up - so that he finds some solace - is downright sorrowful.


Although I agree with what many of the writers saying that there's going to be a tragic lovestory since there're too many variables to be calculated,

I believe it's precisely this that makes them pretty strong individuals and will make for a pretty interesting & a stronger love story than any others - they have borne dark pasts - their ideologies have been different owing to their circumstances - but once they realise how important they're to each other - and it's not like they don't have loved ones around who don't want to see them together.

This is not some stupid-AnuragPrerna story where they meet only in heaven finally🤪 .... they're young & they just need to figure out more about life than they know right now.


Some lines I find that suit them are:


Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan

Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan


Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hai

Khushiya Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hai

Khoya Hai Khudko Ya

Sab Kuch Paaya Hai


Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho

Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Usse Rakhna Ho

Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho



Yes, it'll take time...but I'll not for one second be okay with theirs being a tragic lovestory. Anyways, these're my opinions - I have felt strongly only about one couple this way before🤗 & RaghVi come pretty close to them now or are already surpassing them for me

Ahh ok. The way I see Pallavi's character is someone who is firm on her ethics and for such a person I doubt they could support a person who is doing something they think is immoral. She could still love him but choose to turn him over to the police like in BrhannadaArmour's ff. They probably won't show that onscreen because the fandom will go berserk but it is how I see things happening. I don't see Pallavi as a person for whom love is above everything especially in these matters. She values other things like family, responsibility as well.

Coming to Raghav, I feel like nothing would matter more than love. It was evident when he agreed to leaving everything for Jaya. I do feel like Raghav is in deeper because of how he sees love.

Also this isn't a criticism of Pallavi because I would personally be like her and I find it normal.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ahh ok. The way I see Pallavi's character is someone who is firm on her ethics and for such a person I doubt they could support a person who is doing something they think is immoral. She could still love him but choose to turn him over to the police like in BrhannadaArmour's ff. They probably won't show that onscreen because the fandom will go berserk but it is how I see things happening. I don't see Pallavi as a person for whom love is above everything especially in these matters. She values other things like family, responsibility as well.

Coming to Raghav, I feel like nothing would matter more than love. It was evident when he agreed to leaving everything for Jaya. I do feel like Raghav is in deeper because of how he sees love.

Also this isn't a criticism of Pallavi because I would personally be like her. Love(more specifically only romantic love) isn't the beginning and end of my world. I do value other things just as much.


See all this looks good in stories and everything. But in real life, money matters the most. I'll be brutally honest here. It does. Your moral values and ethics could go for a toss. Nothing will happen.


See, the SSR case.. kya hua? Kuch hua? The CBI had all the proofs necessary.. arre cctv mein chehra direct capture ho gaya tha... arrest hona toh dur ki baat, case tak file nhi hua. SSR did an amazing job, he was brave to have taken on these heavyweights on his own. He had a tight moral compass he didn't budge from. What did that serve him? His life was taken in a brutal way and not even the luxury of justice.


Note that I am not saying that what happened with him was right. It's just the reality. Prudently and practically thinking what he did was courageous but incredibly foolish. I followed the entire case. But I knew the perpetrators will never be punished. And that's exactly what happened. Its ruthless, twisted, unfair and wrong in so many ways that I have lost count.


And in real life this is what happens. Agreed, I don't believe love is all you require to sustain a relationship. You need money. 🤣


Money maynot buy you happiness, but it buys you enough to lessen your sadness.


I might come out to look like an extremely money minded and selfish person but, cannot help it. I have seen many situations which could have just been avoided and improved if we had money.


Ethics, moral values are obviously needed. You must have a moral compass. However selective it is (note Raghav does have it). But this Satya Yug level morality or righteousness in kaliyug doesn't work. Its worthless and useless. Specifically where materialistic goods are concerned.


And if you are talking about that ff where Pallavi turns him over to the police, it was a very illogical response at Raghav's behalf. If I were Raghav I would've come out of the Police's hold easily (thats what happens in reality) and never want to see Pallavi's face again. He has gone through a lot, done a lot (even if some was illegal and immoral) for earning that amount of money. He has some fundamentals he doesn't cross and that's more than fine because other people donot even have that much.


Not a dig, but telling your child that his father is like Shivaji Maharaj while his intestines are dissolving due to hunger, his friends leering at his tattered uniform, his college fees unpaid, looks very unpleasant to be fair. Again, not a dig.


Agreed, because of him honestly working merchants would be at a loss. Its unfair but that's life. If you donot have the balls to take a few hits in the gut you donot deserve your due. That's completely my take. I have seen people wiping the floor with other people to rise in the ladder of success. And I for one wouldn't be sitting still holding up to my unbendable moral values waiting for karma to strike them and me getting my due because I'm honest.


It doesn't happen that way. It really doesn't. Speaking from experience.


So essentially I have no problem with how Raghav does his business. He has the guts, the balls, the brains and a fairly good moral compass relative to most businessmen. I just know it's impossible in real life for two people like Raghav and Pallavi staying together. They might be in love and might never fall in love with anyone else but a marriage between them will be a potential disaster.


These are all my opinions. No offence to anyone.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA


See all this looks good in stories and everything. But in real life, money matters the most. I'll be brutally honest here. It does. Your moral values and ethics could go for a toss. Nothing will happen.


See, the SSR case.. kya hua? Kuch hua? The CBI had all the proofs necessary.. arre cctv mein chehra direct capture ho gaya tha... arrest hona toh dur ki baat, case tak file nhi hua. SSR did an amazing job, he was brave to have taken on these heavyweights on his own. He had a tight moral compass he didn't budge from. What did that serve him? His life was taken in a brutal way and not even the luxury of justice.


Note that I am not saying that what happened with him was right. It's just the reality. Prudently and practically thinking what he did was courageous but incredibly foolish. I followed the entire case. But I knew the perpetrators will never be punished. And that's exactly what happened. Its ruthless, twisted, unfair and wrong in so many ways that I have lost count.


And in real life this is what happens. Agreed, I don't believe love is all you require to sustain a relationship. You need money. 🤣


Money maynot buy you happiness, but it buys you enough to lessen your sadness.


I might come out to look like an extremely money minded and selfish person but, cannot help it. I have seen many situations which could have just been avoided and improved if we had money.


Ethics, moral values are obviously needed. You must have a moral compass. However selective it is (note Raghav does have it). But this Satya Yug level morality or righteousness in kaliyug doesn't work. Its worthless and useless. Specifically where materialistic goods are concerned.


And if you are talking about that ff where Pallavi turns him over to the police, it was a very illogical response at Raghav's behalf. If I were Raghav I would've come out of the Police's hold easily (thats what happens in reality) and never want to see Pallavi's face again. He has gone through a lot, done a lot (even if some was illegal and immoral) for earning that amount of money. He has some fundamentals he doesn't cross and that's more than fine because other people donot even have that much.


Not a dig, but telling your child that his father is like Shivaji Maharaj while his intestines are dissolving due to hunger, his friends leering at his tattered uniform, his college fees unpaid, looks very unpleasant to be fair. Again, not a dig.


Agreed, because of him honestly working merchants would be at a loss. Its unfair but that's life. If you donot have the balls to take a few hits in the gut you donot deserve your due. That's completely my take. I have seen people wiping the floor with other people to rise in the ladder of success. And I for one wouldn't be sitting still holding up to my unbendable moral values waiting for karma to strike them and me getting my due because I'm honest.


It doesn't happen that way. It really doesn't. Speaking from experience.


So essentially I have no problem with how Raghav does his business. He has the guts, the balls, the brains and a fairly good moral compass relative to most businessmen. I just know it's impossible in real life for two people like Raghav and Pallavi staying together. They might be in love and might never fall in love with anyone else but a marriage between them will be a potential disaster.


These are all my opinions. No offence to anyone.

Of course. Your moral compass is similar to Raghav's in this case and Pallavi's isn't.

I believe that a world without any morality is a dark world. I don't think ethics only sound good in books, neither do I think it is worthless. If someone doesn't want to live a life where they will have money but will cannot look in the mirror and be happy that makes sense. What constitutes a right way or earning and what is wrong is a line everyone draws for themselves. Raghav too doesn't dabble in drugs because that for him is taking things too far. So most people have ethics, however twisted it might seem. Now Pallavi's moral code might seem too strict to you but I feel like if it is something she believes then sure. Ved thinks of Raghav's moral code as strict, so there is no definition of too strict. Who is a monster and who is trying too hard to be a saint?

Coming to Raghav, love is above everything. He has said jo pyaar ko jaan le, pyaar uski jaan le. He offered to give everything up for Amma so I definitely see him doing it for Pallavi too. Why would it be illogical to not want to once again be left alone because the odds are that if Pallavi left him, Amma and Keerthi would go to? What would he do with all the money? Raghav wants money to keep him and more specifically his loved ones safe. It would do no good to him if he didn't have those people with him in the first place.

I don't think it is cowardly or foolish to have ethics. Crazy? A little. It is a brave choice to give and do right even when there is no guarantee that you will get what you deserve and it definitely requires a little madness. Maybe they don't need success, maybe they need a clear conscience. I don't think justice is eventually meted out in this world. Those with power who are guilty often get away and the innocent suffer. Just like the case you mentioned, it is the most common outcome. I don't consider those that do right anyways fools though.

Also money for necessities or money for luxuries makes a difference. I would probably react very differently to earn money that I feel like I need instead of what I want.

I don't really have a problem with how Raghav conducts his business. I just don't have a problem with Pallavi objecting to his methods.

Edited by hapc - 3 years ago

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