Raghvi FF: On the Edge (7/?) - Updated Pg 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I loved this--I would further love to know how each person felt by that encounter and I am quite sure neither Farhad nor Harish must have seen Raghav helping a person he was just furious at few seconds ago

loved the fierce Pallavi

excited for your next update


Thank you - I so hope you enjoy it! ❤️

They are both disappointed at reality I think. It did not go as either of them expected.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Should i start finding a new name for Raghav cause they're never gonna walk seperate ways 😂😂.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Absolutely loved it

She’s amazing and loved their meeting


Thank you so much! ❤️

Yes she was pretty cool 😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Should i start finding a new name for Raghav cause they're never gonna walk seperate ways 😂😂.


Suggestions always welcome 😆


Though Pallavi might have a few in mind 🤬😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chalo Ji, I guess we need to find a new name for Raghav Rao soon🤣


Ohh! But we have one. Ghamandi, Right😆


Yay! Yay! 🤗🤗 I get another update so soon....I really hope I get another one also since this just got so much better with their dialogues.


Gosh! There're so many scenes playing in my head for the both of them now


I loved how you explained about their loneliness & wants of what could have been when they are alone. That small interaction with these 2 individuals was bound to leave an indelible mark on their souls.


Absolutely Love the way you're taking this forward😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: shah10

Woah! Awesome update!

Loved fiercely Pallavi

If goons weren’t Raghav’s men then who were they

Interesting

Do continue please


Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! ❤️

They were his men, he just didn't make the connection until Harish explained - plus he was not very sober 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Chalo Ji, I guess we need to find a new name for Raghav Rao soon🤣


Ohh! But we have one. Ghamandi, Right😆


Yay! Yay! 🤗🤗 I get another update so soon....I really hope I get another one also since this just got so much better with their dialogues.


Gosh! There're so many scenes playing in my head for the both of them now


I loved how you explained about their loneliness & wants of what could have been when they are alone. That small interaction with these 2 individuals was bound to leave an indelible mark on their souls.


Absolutely Love the way you're taking this forward😎


Thank you so so much ❤️🤗

I would love to hear your thoughts, they are so much better than my own 😳

Like your idea of going through their lives in the two years they were apart - it was fantastic but I couldn't do justice to it. But now I want a MHRW prequel that shows us their journey.


Yes they are in the end just two lonely people who don't yet recognize each other 😒


Thanks so much for the kind words - and yes RR will need to start the paperwork for his name change soon 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneel07

This is beautiful. Please continue


Thank you and thanks for reading - hope you continue to enjoy ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Milalal27

loving it, very different they met before... ❤️


Thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad


Thank you so so much ❤️🤗

I would love to hear your thoughts, they are so much better than my own 😳

Like your idea of going through their lives in the two years they were apart - it was fantastic but I couldn't do justice to it. But now I want a MHRW prequel that shows us their journey.


Yes they are in the end just two lonely people who don't yet recognize each other 😒


Thanks so much for the kind words - and yes RR will need to start the paperwork for his name change soon 😆


Kuchh Bhi. You're an awesome writer so you more cool gal


Some scenes - Someone's shaming Pallavi for not following an ideal widow life when Raghav's in the shop & that's when he realizes that she doesn't have a husband (he will realise way later maybe that she wasn't with her ex even for few mins). And he shuts them down like - How dare you speak to Her(realizes & backtracks with)....Any woman like that in my presence. Gives them a befitting reply.


Some angst-filled scenes in DSE & RR Mansion where the other can't understand what's going on with the other person's life exactly.


Probably towards the end, them breaking down together - on how things would have been so much better sooner if they hadn't gone different ways from their 1st meet itself. Raghav wouldn't have to stay a loner while Pallavi would have been saved all the grief.


Filter all of this hawa mein if it doesn't fit the plot anywhere cos I am here to read your take on the show😎

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