RAGHVI DRABBLES.. (DRABBLE 10 ON PAGE 25) ( 15 November ) - Page 17

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sama my girl 😭😭

Tumko idea bhi hai how happy you made me with this story. How I wish we could have seen this in the serial.

This is fabulous Fantastic and awesome❤️❤️❤️

Raghav not caring about Esha, his whole concentration on Pallavi, them being pregnant, Pals wanting to celebrate even his smallest of victories. This is our RaghVi. Bohot dino baad kuch aacha pada aur man ko sukoon aayi. Not the crap they showed. Thanks for this 🤩🤩❤️❤️

Rula diya tumne toh mujhe 😭🤗🤗

I love you and this story❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

A possibility on continuation of this??? Plz ❤️ Itz superb

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sigh! Kaash show mein aisa dikhate...

Lovely shot! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Samaaaa🤗🤗

This is awsome

From start to finish 👏👏

I don't know why but this made me emotional 😭😭 Raghvi announcing their pregnancy news did something to me🥺🥺

I just remembered what we are being robbed of 😭😭

Best part was Raghav giving no Fs to Esha🥳🥳

Atleast we can enjoy through your amazing writing whatever we missed in the show.

Thank you so much for writing this 🤗

Love you my favorite writer 💕💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago

Are you going to continue your Raghvi stories?


I hope y do!


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

You are such a life savior Sama. Thank you so much once again for giving me an alternative to another of wasted track.

This is how MHRW ends for me. No Warangal, no ONS and no emotional infidelity. Just Raghvi and their chota sa duniya

Amnaa 🤗🤗

Idhar kuch nahin hua, sab bhool bhool

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Sama my girl 😭😭

Tumko idea bhi hai how happy you made me with this story. How I wish we could have seen this in the serial.

This is fabulous Fantastic and awesome❤️❤️❤️

Raghav not caring about Esha, his whole concentration on Pallavi, them being pregnant, Pals wanting to celebrate even his smallest of victories. This is our RaghVi. Bohot dino baad kuch aacha pada aur man ko sukoon aayi. Not the crap they showed. Thanks for this 🤩🤩❤️❤️

Rula diya tumne toh mujhe 😭🤗🤗

I love you and this story❤️❤️❤️

Awwww veru .

I love you more. always here to fulfill your wishes.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

Samaaaa🤗🤗

This is awsome

From start to finish 👏👏

I don't know why but this made me emotional 😭😭 Raghvi announcing their pregnancy news did something to me🥺🥺

I just remembered what we are being robbed of 😭😭

Best part was Raghav giving no Fs to Esha🥳🥳

Atleast we can enjoy through your amazing writing whatever we missed in the show.

Thank you so much for writing this 🤗

Love you my favorite writer 💕💕💕

Neelu we've been robbed of so much that i've stopped feeling anything.

This is how i wanted Raghav to tackle Esha in the show but alas.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Milalal27

Are you going to continue your Raghvi stories?


I hope y do!


❤️

I haven't planned on anything but i'll surely post my drafts.

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Posted: 3 years ago

PLOT : This one's set during the Mandaar track when Pallavi and Raghav are now aware of Mandaar's truth and are secretly meeting to hatch a plan against him.


DRABBLE 10 : A DATE?


"Pallavi tumhe lagta hai yeh plan work karega?" Amrutha asked as both the women got inside an auto rikshaw towards their desired destination.

"Ofcourse kaam krega. Hamare paas aur koi option nahin hai. Yeh kaam hum open main sabkse saamne toh ab bilkul bhi nahin kar sakte hai." Pallavi assured her sister.

"Agar tum kehti ho toh main maan leti hoon but i just hope ki koi problem na ho ab." Amrutha smiled silently praying for the accomplishment of their plan.


Pallavi and amrutha reached the mall moving through security and onto the top floor where the PVR was located. Amrutha bought two tickets for the afternoon show as the girls walked into an almost empty movie hall. It was supposed to be some new romantic bollywood movie with vacant seats since it was too early for the audiences to arrive. Looking around they tried finding their seat location when a worker helped them out. The hall had min occupied seats with a couple sitting at the end of the aisle, another one ; probably some college kids sitting at the centre while theirs was the second last row with two hoodied people behind them.

"Amrutha eyes the creeps as she settled Pallavi in, both of them turning their phones on silent after sending a quick picture according to their rules and regulations with Mandaar Deshmukh. A few minutes later, the lights got dimmed as the screen illuminated with some advertisements leading to a commotion beside Pallavi as she smiled taking in the familiar cologne.

"Akela ladki movie dekhne aaye toh log uspar shaq karta hai." came a voice by the side.

"Aap bhi toh akele aaye hai." she replied back with a smile.

"Akela aaya nahin tha ho gaya hai. Waise toh mera biwi aane wala tha magar lagta hai ki woh apna ex ke saath busy hai. Uska ex kaafi chipku jo hai." came a snarky reply.

"Samajh sakti hoon. Mere husband ne bhi mujhe ditch kardiya. Kaha tha ki ayenge lekin lagta hai apne pehle pyaar, i mean apni whiskey ke saath busy ho gaye honge." Pallavi smirked turning around to face the man.

"Ab kya karoon Saree Ka Dukaan. I love You but i love my whiskey more." Raghav pulled down his hoodie cap smiling at his beautiful wife as he moved closer to her.

"Achcha toh usse yahan apne saath kyun nahin laaye." Pallavi raised her brows with a mischieveous glint in her eyes.

"Kyunki main idhar apna biwi ke saath date parr aya hai." Raghav replied eyeing her with his innocent doe eyes making Pallavi smile a little wider.

When they had met 2 days back in that park during her salon lie, Sunny had come up to spoil their plan along with Mandaar. Hence, they decided to meet at someplace away from the eyes of those hawks and the best idea was a movie theatre. Pallavi had to butter Mandaar up in order to let her go along with Amrutha for some shopping where instead of buying around, they would meet the FaRag boys inside the movie hall. So, as son as the lights dimmed, Raghav and Amrutha exchanged places as both the couples started their first official date.

"Yeh dono kuch zyada nahin sharma raha hai." Raghav taunted eyeing the new couple aka AmHad behind him.

"Raghav!! Ghurna band kro unhe. Itni mushkil se toh dono date ke liye maane hai." Pallavi scolded him , making him face her back.

"Are han usse yaad aaya ki tumne uss Bina Adress Ke Envelope ko kaise manaya?" Raghav asked.

"Bahut chipku hai woh par maan gaya. Tumhe pata hai maine aur Amrutha ne kal sabzi mandi ke bahane same outfits main aakar pictures click krliye yahan kyunki rules ke according hume har aadhe ghante main Mandaar ko pictures bhejni hai, jiska stock ab hamare paas hai, woh bhi proper time zones main." Pallavi scooted closer to him.

"Achcha merese milne ke liye itna planning, bahut miss kar raha tha kya mereko." raghav teased her.

'Tum nahin kar rahe the. Theek hai main chali jaati hoon woh aage ladka hai na uske saath hi movie dekh lungi." Pallavi got up to leave only for Raghav to pull her back onto his lap as he held her tughtly.

"Kidhar bhi nahin jaa raha hai tum waise bhi tumse itna din dur rehkar mera jaan jaa chuka hai aur abhi bhi humko aise chhup chhup kar milna padh raha hai." Raghav complained like a kid nuzzling into her neck.

"Janti hoon raghav lekin Aai aur sab ghar walon ko Mandaar ke saath chhodh bhi toh nhin sakti. Amma aur Kirti bhi danger main aa jayengi lekin i promise hum jaldi yeh sab se bahar aa jayenge." Pallavi stroked his beard kissing his forehead.

"Aur uske liye mera paas ek plan hai jisse main 24 ghanta tumhaare paas reh sakta hai." Raghav smirked.

"Kya?" Pallavi asked.

"Woh main tumko baad main batayega.Ab no more Mandaar talk, uske liye humne 1 hr save kara hai na tab karenge baat abhi mereko mera biwi ke saath hamara first date enjoy karne do." Raghav rubbed their noses to which Pallavi blushed both watching the movie together when the hero removed his shirt making Raghav stiff in jealousy as he tried hiding Pallavi's eyes while she giggled under his hold. Maybe Mandaar wasn't bad after all, it was him that made some wierd first things possible for them.


A short one. hope everyone liked it.

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