RaghVi OS Part III: Our Happily Ever After - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: gata

loved ,could feel their happiness.

Thank you so much for reading and your feedback❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Thank you so much Kavita and I'm glad you liked it❤

Reading RaghVi always makes us smile like an idiot😆

so true. Iske pwhle kisi itv couple k lie ese feel nahi kie na aage kar paugi. Saishi as raghvi ❤️
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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Read all three parts. So beautiful. A Raghvi dreamland


And that was hot, all the subtle details ☺️


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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

I always wonder when a story ends in happily ever after on how their future life will be. Iam glad when I see an epilogue in any of the books that I read because it gives a sneak peak into their future. This was that and much much more. Really loved the detailing and the fact that they have one of each with their qualities and one of a mix🤗 And ofcourse sparks still fly even after a decade when its Raghvi. Loved loved loved it.😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Thank you so much Hemangi❤️❤️

I'm sorry this piece made you cry even if it was with happiness and but I am so happy that you loved this os😊

The little Raos are my favourite too--the sequence of their traits is a must in this order--because Rayaan just balances everyone out😉

I am overwhelmed with the fact you consider this one of the best pieces you have read---and this compliment coming from you is a huge thing in itself❤️🤗

I am so glad you love it❤️❤️

Loads of hugs and love to you❤️❤️🤗🤗

love love and more love to you babe❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ just can’t stop loving this piece and your beautiful craft 👏👏.

You put JAAN in this really❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: DivyaaaV

this was amazing thank you for the tag ❤️
I love that you have a child who’s like both of them 😊


Thank you so much and I'm glad you loved it❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Milalal27

IT was awesome 👏🏽 mind blowing good💯


♥️🌹🥰

Thank you so much for reading and giving feedback❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Mihika

Why do I feel Ryaan is us...IF people🤣

This was one super hot sensual cute and funny OS part🤣

Amazing Reem🤗

I actually realized this too when you had pointed it out--i think it is mainly because of the popcorn thing

Thank you so much Mihika🤗❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

This was such a cute, feel good and amazing story! Let me start:-

1. The kids - Ahhh, can they have these kids already? SO UTTERLY BUTTERLY CUTE. Ru is always lecturing everyone, even Pallu is tired of her 😆Serves her right. Ishaan and Raghav Rao - You drew a very nice comparison in the second paragraph; the one where he's circling the mug rim. So like RR. Then Rayaan, this dude is next level savage!!! Both blessing and a good lesson for RR and Pallu. Really loved how the character of the kids shaped up. I loved their banter with each other but they're close too! So sibling like!

2. D's missing- Awesome. Keep it up!

3. Raghav's and Pallu's romance - It's cold where I am but I think the temperature just went up a notch ☺️☺️

4. FARHAD AND KRISHNA - YES YES YES!!! Thank you for getting them married!

5. Another thing that stood out is how Ishaan came to RR's office to get him to the party, and it's exactly how pallu had come to his office just before she announced her pregnancy (carrying Ishaan). I loved this!

6. Raghav is always in a romantic mood 😆No wonder they have three kids 😆At this rate, they'll have 5 in no time 🤣Let's hope RU always interrupts them 😆They should have their kids sleep between them. Best family planning tool 😆

7. Pallavi taunting him for the first cake - YES, THIS NEEDS TO DRAG FOR THEIR ENTIRE LIFETIME 🤣


Thank you for writing this detailed story. It was so much fun to read, light hearted and so cute. Love reading cute stories 🤗

Thank you so much Kiara. I'm glad you loved it.❤s

the Rao kids are similar yet quite different in their own ways. I don't want D-family's evil presence in such a cute story hence evicted from. Raghav will live his whole life hearing Pallavi's taunt.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

This was sooo heart warming Reem ! ❤️

I loved the Rao family. 😳

I loved how you integrated your before two OS so nicely in this story.

Just perfect ! 🤗

Thank you so much Tanya--I wanted to link all 3OS wiht each other hence that.❤

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