RaghVi OS: Love in the Rain - Page 2

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

I loved it! The entire descriptiveness of their escapades seemed like right out of a book and what do you know? It was indeed his dream. A dream so vivid, you’d not want it to end and a dream so real, it furthers your life by offering answers the mind cannot fathom.

I loved the end- confessing to himself after the phone call ends.

Loved it !

Thank you so much...I am really glad you loved it❤️

Raghav has a bit of dramaticism in his day dreams...especially they way he shows his expressions and actions...since writing their expressions is something I cannot achieve...I rather relied on his actions and surroundings 😅

Originally posted by: BlueJayFire

Nice..was trying to imagine the situation and then realize its a day dream..Ofcourse, gonna become more reality now..

Thank you ❤️

The surroundings' description was written quite over the top hence you might be having a difficulty in imagining the situation

Eagerly waiting for the day when this turns into a reality

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Beautiful! ❤️

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Woahhh i almost felt it real until the end part where it was just his daydream!!

Loved reading it Reem!!

Kudos to your awesome writing!!!

Please keep writing!!

I hope it turning to a daydream didn't upset you😊

Your comment means a lot to me and

Thank you so much

If you don't mind me asking what's your name?

Originally posted by: hapc

Wow.

Firstly, this was so well written. The writing seems like it has come from a published book.

Secondly, love the story. Raghav’s daydreams are indeed a huge influence on his decisions and are instrumental to the plot. I hope this daydream changed their lives.

Hope you write more such pieces soon.

Seeing this @bold comment is such an honour for me...although I have been actually able to write it by reading a few books and taking inspiration fron it.

Raghav is someone who would definitely act upon this realisation...so surely changed their lives😆

Thank you so much and glad that you loved it❤️

Originally posted by: Avneel07

This was lovely❤😊. Keep writing more.

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I hope it turning to a daydream didn't upset you😊

Your comment means a lot to me and

Thank you so much

If you don't mind me asking what's your name?

Oh i loved it!

And i am Dishi!🤗

It was a beautiful story from start which ended with a surprise of being his daydream! What a vivid dream, felt like real! Who wouldn't want it to be true?

I liked How you depicted the whole situation!

Good Job Reem❤️

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

It was a beautiful story from start which ended with a surprise of being his daydream! What a vivid dream, felt like real! Who wouldn't want it to be true?

I liked How you depicted the whole situation!

Good Job Reem❤️

Everyone would want it to be true---as much as we love slight banters between RaghVi we somehow would also love romantic scenes between them

Thank you so much❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Oh i loved it!

And i am Dishi!🤗

Glad to know that and thank you Dishi🤗