TS: Impasse - Page 2

Finally somewhere we get to see them open up....

Much awaited conversation between the two

It is beautifully penned and expressed.

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I totally love this. What a wonderful story - now I'm eagerly waiting for the next part, to see how Raghav reacts to hearing about Pallavi and Mandaar. Please post it soon.😃

You made me think about what these two would be like if they calmed their thoughts and just had time to talk one-to-one like companions, not even lovers. They both have a lot of depth of character and it could make for some fascinating conversations about not just their painful pasts, but their present, and a combined future. They would learn about each other's dreams, about supporting one another, and helping themselves make a fresh start in life. Sigh.. I sincerely hope we see those on the show. Come to think of it, your impasse scenario and radio silence of several months could be an interesting twist to the post-marriage life of this couple. Everyone thinks there would be lots of tashan but what if they each withdraw to their corners and live as housemates as opposed to spouses?

So emotional and beautiful ❤️ The way Raghav expressed all his pain and suffering all these years was just 🥺I am glad this conversation happened when they both were sober, hopefully it will bridge the gap between them and bring them closer than ever before Want to see something like on the show also - them being honest and open and connecting with each other because they are two souls who have done everything for family and are actually quite similar in certain aspects.

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Awesome. They don’t judge each other.

when I was reading this, there was a constant flow..and it broke me from my trance when Pallavi said “Raghav….maine tumhe kabhi Mandar ke baare mein bataya?” You left us like that eager to know what would happen next.

This was so intense and deep and how Raghav showed his vunerable side to Pallavi...all under the effect of dark, rainy night

this was so good, and how they talked to each other after seven months and I was expecting an angered Raghav not the calm and caring one..and it was so expressive too

how Raghav knew Pallavi was hovering around him was adorable

Don't keep us waiting a lot for the next update

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Beautufully written! 👏👏👏

Love how you have made Raghav ponder about his past and present, the way she gives him that chance, and then ended it with a cliffhanger of Pallavi talking about Mandar. Would love to hear about what their story was and how a simple Kolhapur girl landed up with a Hyderabadi boy. Raghav and his vulnerabilities are well espressed 👌

Thankyou Tannu! Glad you liked it.

Actually I haven't really thought of what Pallavi is going to say...LOL...cliff hanger is to save myself :)

Originally posted by: NESRIA

Oh wow that was amazing❤️

I could actually visualise them ,great writing

Raghav is in real pain 😔

Plz continue soon i would love to see pallu opening up to him 😭

Thankyou for comment, glad I could showcase a bit of his pain through this story. Will update soonish

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

This is intense girl, balanced with the angst and tranquility. You have weaved such a beautiful start, I can't wait for the next one, quite a voracious reader lol. 😆 you make RaghVi more tempting. ❤️ thank you for treating us with this🤗 update sooooooon!!!

Thankyou so much Sneha. Your writing se thoda less intense :) Glad you enjoyed this....working on the next update...filhaal toh it is bakwas...but will fine tune and get it across :P

Originally posted by: __VIHU

whoa... why, I feel like a guest of honor reading this... Your minute details crates a mood...

I’m an Edgar Allan Poe fan...Just by reading the poems I often get transported to the hero’s world... the words of the man hold an uncanny power over me... I felt the same reading this...

How beautiful is it to see something so interesting going on between them without the misunderstandings and OTT villains... Their story has a self sustaining potential and you utilized it fully.

I loved how Raghav spoke his heart to her instead of blurting it in a fit of rage or under the spell of alcohol... it seemed so natural. Pallavi’s realisation that she’d been unwittingly cruel with her words to a man who’d been deprived of kindness for a large part of his life was beautifully written.

I’m dying to read Pallavi’s part... Please provide us with the next part soon...

Thankyou Vihu! Your story was really the inspiration for this. You are so right, there is no need for Lion, bindi wali aunties or anything OTT for these two. There is SO much emotional baggage they can unpack...this is why limited series are such a pleasure. The story can focus on consistency and builds rather than slap dash tracks to serve a certain commercial need. Sigh.

Lol, all my Raghav's are a slight tangent to on-screen Raghav. Andar se soft spoken, sober, ability to control his rage when required..>...Maybe I'm writing about Mandar who knows....BAHAHA (but in my head Mandar is a total dweeb).

Poe....*blush*...you are tooooo generous with your praise. Aise kuch bhi nahi hai....but glad that I could evoke some of the imagery. I was listening to this song called Chup tum raho, from Iss raat ki subah nahi....and was wondering what if they were in that sort of scenario....where they have a silence and night of darkness ahead of them.

Originally posted by: cozy_vibes

wow this is something really different and amazing. Emotions are so raw and real. please update soon. keep writing stuff like this...

Thankyou for your comments.

Originally posted by: Chubu

Okk.... Plzzz update soon i cant take it out of my head.. its so engaging... Wanna read more that too right now ...

I always wanted to know how would a man react tl love of his love .. specially some one like raghav

...update soon waiting...

Thankyou for liking the story :) Raghav is a complex character that is such a delight to explore.