TS: Impasse - Page 3

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

It was beautiful!!!

Loved your way of explanation and Raghav's truth🤧🙌🏻

Do continue soonish❤😍😋

Thankyou! Sometime this week for sure :)

Originally posted by: mindumplingss

i really got into this , this is so intense and beautiful written ... felt like a heart to heart convo .. wish to see something like this in show

do continue soon🥰

I wish we get something like this in the show as well. So much potential between these leads. Thankyou for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

what an expressive piece it was👏🏻👏🏻 brilliantly described raghav’s breakdown 😭😭😭 ohh got literally cried yr .. powerful writing

I rest here

Thankyou for this lovely comment! Didn't mean to make you cry...it was just supposed to be two people finally opening up :)

Originally posted by: inlieu

I totally love this. What a wonderful story - now I'm eagerly waiting for the next part, to see how Raghav reacts to hearing about Pallavi and Mandaar. Please post it soon.😃

You made me think about what these two would be like if they calmed their thoughts and just had time to talk one-to-one like companions, not even lovers. They both have a lot of depth of character and it could make for some fascinating conversations about not just their painful pasts, but their present, and a combined future. They would learn about each other's dreams, about supporting one another, and helping themselves make a fresh start in life. Sigh.. I sincerely hope we see those on the show. Come to think of it, your impasse scenario and radio silence of several months could be an interesting twist to the post-marriage life of this couple. Everyone thinks there would be lots of tashan but what if they each withdraw to their corners and live as housemates as opposed to spouses?

Aah, this is such a lovely comment. Makes me want to immediately go back and write some more :P

I would LOVE to see if they just both simmered down and considered each other as kindred spirits. Two souls who've been through so much in life, and possibly find the one other person who is capable of understanding them.

Radio silence is probably not an option for a high drama show, but i would love for them to just talk to each other.

Thankyou for leaving a lovely comment.

Originally posted by: Mihika

Finally somewhere we get to see them open up....

Much awaited conversation between the two

It is beautifully penned and expressed.

Waiting for your update.

Continue soon

Stories are probably where they will open up, screen pe maybe some 200 episodes later...MAYBE...

Thankyou for your comment :) Will update soonish.

Originally posted by: bones123

Thankyou so much Sneha. Your writing se thoda less intense :) Glad you enjoyed this....working on the next update...filhaal toh it is bakwas...but will fine tune and get it across :P

It's gonna be so good I can tell. *Waiting waiting*

U write so well. Keep writing.more.continue soon.

Really loved this.. raghav's past was very emotional 😨

Wow!!! Very engaging ... waiting for your next update. Please update soon.

wow waitign for next update

please do continue

bye sumi