TS: Enroute (Part 2: Destination updated on page 3) - Page 3

‘Pallavi ee rojunundi naadhi’ was just 🥺😍🥰🥰🥰😍🥺

Originally posted by: bones123

Thankyou Tannu! As for writing, I will try to keep it up. As you know from past experience when the serial gets unbearable, the mood to write also disappears. I hope MHRW doesn't go down that route for a while because I really like the chemistry potential of these leads.

I echo these sentiments and I completely understand what you mean. Still hoping to get the opportunity to read your work here as much as possible 🤗

Loved the second part tooo!! 💫💫💫

Beautifully expressed!! 👏👏👏

Thank you for such wonderful pieces 💕

okk... so... Fin...

Out of all three this was my favourite.... And you write so well... I’m a fan and will be looking out for more stories from you...

Raghav was really composed here... I expected him to go in all guns blazing but It was a surprise.... him acting all mature but still managed to deliver a subtle threat/warning.

Pallavi’s reply to Rambo was so apt... Really wanted to know how Pallavi fares after this... But it was a satisfying read... no less....

Your dialogues are good... Specially the ones you wrote in telgu😆

Such an enjoyable read... 👏👏

Wow! You do write superb dialogues. They were hella impactful👍🏼.

The way Raghav shot down Vijay, I really would want to see that in some future tracks. Till then, I'll keep reading the apt ones from here

The fact that you took the handkerchief part from the serial & kinda reversed it, was fabulous👏. Ohh! How I wish the tracks were going this way instead of where they're headed thanks to TRP-Aunties🥺. But no issues, we have proficient writers like you & so we gain in the end❤️.

I also understand what you mean when u say writing becomes difficult when the serial loses its charm. But, I believe, it is in these times, that writers like you Priya, have the potential to come up with new directions the serial could take & collectively save us by giving us good pieces & we also reciprocate our love cos that's how we all breathe in those torturous days when we see our leads & scripts all going down the drain.

So I think you already understood what I mean to say for this TS👏

Priyaaaaaa

I don't mind a bad episode if I get these amazing back to back

it was honey coated sweet. And I loved those telugu dialogues, buddha one was my favourite🤣

I just hope they could show something like this, Raghav and rambo's banter, Raghav will trash him out in no time 🤣

I loved how Pallavi got out of her jagat maata mode and realised she was better off this toxic family🤢 loved their little interaction. ☺️

Please keep writing more. I will be waiting to read more of your stories 🤗

Originally posted by: __VIHU

okk... so... Fin...

Out of all three this was my favourite.... And you write so well... I’m a fan and will be looking out for more stories from you...

Raghav was really composed here... I expected him to go in all guns blazing but It was a surprise.... him acting all mature but still managed to deliver a subtle threat/warning.

Pallavi’s reply to Rambo was so apt... Really wanted to know how Pallavi fares after this... But it was a satisfying read... no less....

Your dialogues are good... Specially the ones you wrote in telgu😆

Such an enjoyable read... 👏👏

Thankyou! You are very kind 🐱

Little secret...I did intend to write Raghav all guns blazing but it didn't seem organic and seemed forced with my writing. I felt this flip flowed a bit more naturally! I adore Raghav's sarcasm and basically thought it'd be wonderful to turn his angry young man dhaam dhoom to be way more subtle and restrained...cos Pallavi!

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! You do write superb dialogues. They were hella impactful👍🏼.

The way Raghav shot down Vijay, I really would want to see that in some future tracks. Till then, I'll keep reading the apt ones from here

The fact that you took the handkerchief part from the serial & kinda reversed it, was fabulous👏. Ohh! How I wish the tracks were going this way instead of where they're headed thanks to TRP-Aunties🥺. But no issues, we have proficient writers like you & so we gain in the end❤️.

I also understand what you mean when u say writing becomes difficult when the serial loses its charm. But, I believe, it is in these times, that writers like you Priya, have the potential to come up with new directions the serial could take & collectively save us by giving us good pieces & we also reciprocate our love cos that's how we all breathe in those torturous days when we see our leads & scripts all going down the drain.

So I think you already understood what I mean to say for this TS👏

Thankyou Sonia! You leave the nicest comments. Tracks Ka there is no bharosa, it goes the way commercial needs go...sigh! I wish there was a rule ki until 100 episodes serials went the way they bad originally planned to. I vicariously live through others stories as well so totally get what you are saying!

Hopefully I can write more and do justice to our lovely leads :) for now totally going to ignore the on-screen track because it is making less than zero percent sense 😂

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Priyaaaaaa

I don't mind a bad episode if I get these amazing back to back

it was honey coated sweet. And I loved those telugu dialogues, buddha one was my favourite🤣

I just hope they could show something like this, Raghav and rambo's banter, Raghav will trash him out in no time 🤣

I loved how Pallavi got out of her jagat maata mode and realised she was better off this toxic family🤢 loved their little interaction. ☺️

Please keep writing more. I will be waiting to read more of your stories 🤗

Aah thankyou Sneha! Right back at you on the stories. In my Raghavi verse, Deshmukhs will always get trashed so don't worry...serial ki kasar idhar puri kardenge!

And ditto for Pallavi! I really do not associate with her sacrificial lamb persona. She could be so much more powerful as a fierce independent daughter-in-law who not just protected her family but also showed them the mirror when required! Sigh. Anyway...we shall persevere!

Thanks for reading and commenting 😊 Happy Saturday!

Originally posted by: bones123

Thankyou Sonia! You leave the nicest comments. Tracks Ka there is no bharosa, it goes the way commercial needs go...sigh! I wish there was a rule ki until 100 episodes serials went the way they bad originally planned to. I vicariously live through others stories as well so totally get what you are saying!

Hopefully I can write more and do justice to our lovely leads :) for now totally going to ignore the on-screen track because it is making less than zero percent sense 😂

Haaye, Shukriya Shukriya for saying that I can give good comments.

Sahi mein, I think the rule is highly required in the ITV world. We'll have our basic plot & leads characters established atleast.

Even I think I won't be able to watch the crap they're gonna pull up in the next 2 weeks cos it does make -1 sense🤣. Either I'll be here on the forums rereading old pieces or reading the new ones but nope can't do that to myself😭

Read both the parts in one go and totally loved them🤩🤩🤩🤩

Please do write more on them❤❤❤❤❤