TS: Enroute (Part 2: Destination updated on page 3) - Page 4

Raghav Rao and calm?!?.... that's a nice surprise from Raghav.....I more expected him to enter with blazing guns fury eyes n burning words....but he handled the situation more authoritative calmly n maturely.... especially the Pallavi part....the emotional support he provided with just his presence. He claimed Pallavi to be his....well 1 step of complete claim achieved.

Finally Pallavi breakthrough from the so called family n their restrictions. Now she can live for herself n do what she desires. No more bending n begging for ungrateful family.

An entertaining piece 👏🏻👏🏻

Pallavi ee rojunundi naadhi

It was definitely my favorite.

The two parts were so beautiful to read. Loved the his emotions in the first part and his actions in the second one. I really didn't expect him to take her away but I'm happy.

I know that feeling of being uncomfortable with the dialogue, whenever I try to write some dialogues I feel that they are getting so mechanical. 😆But you have done a good job here with the dialogue.

Keep writing. 🤗

This was sooo... good..and the little dialogue at the end by Raghav to Desmukh family and saying Pallavi is mine was mindblowing.

I seriously feel if all these plots with all the emotions you guys write is included in the serial...no one and I mean no one can stop Mehendi hai rachnewali from reaching the highest trp.

Your effort is appreciated and thank you for bringing in such a beautiful story. How you included the telugu dialogues was awesome. It was awwing to see Raghav taking care of Pallavi with such delicacy and Pallavi considering him as the only person standing for her.

I hope to see more writings from you❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Read both the parts in one go and totally loved them🤩🤩🤩🤩

Please do write more on them❤❤❤❤❤

Thankyou for reading! Our forum is filled with so many talented writers! I would love to write some more about these two.... hopefully some inspiration strikes soon :)

Originally posted by: K_keechu

Pallavi ee rojunundi naadhi

It was definitely my favorite.

The two parts were so beautiful to read. Loved the his emotions in the first part and his actions in the second one. I really didn't expect him to take her away but I'm happy.

I know that feeling of being uncomfortable with the dialogue, whenever I try to write some dialogues I feel that they are getting so mechanical. 😆But you have done a good job here with the dialogue.

Keep writing. 🤗

Thankyou so much for your lovely words on Shattered, Enroute and Destination!

Spot on with the problem with dialogues. I find them becoming mechanical as you say and a volley of words that don't necessarily convey what I'm trying to say.

Re Raghav taking her away ....haha, definitely overstretched imagination...but I was thinking yeh itna self restrained tha in the story, he needed to say something whistle worthy :P but in my head he'll never say it to Pallavi...not yet anyway.

Thankyou for reading!

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was sooo... good..and the little dialogue at the end by Raghav to Desmukh family and saying Pallavi is mine was mindblowing.

I seriously feel if all these plots with all the emotions you guys write is included in the serial...no one and I mean no one can stop Mehendi hai rachnewali from reaching the highest trp.

Your effort is appreciated and thank you for bringing in such a beautiful story. How you included the telugu dialogues was awesome. It was awwing to see Raghav taking care of Pallavi with such delicacy and Pallavi considering him as the only person standing for her.

I hope to see more writings from you❤️

Thankyou so much for your lovely feedback. Agree 100% on the potential of the serial!

Including Telugu dialogues is easy for me (I'm part Telugu and maharashtrian...this story is made for me lol)...Raghav and Pallavi are a pure dream together and I hope I can also write more to justify their wonderful chemistry!

Maza aaya.

Nijanga, early episodes lo Telugu in murder chesinattu undi. Hyderabadi Hindi kuda anta baga Ledu. Utti ARDHAMAYINDA was correct 😁

Please continue writing