Originally posted by: Physics_girl
I think although unka romanace feeka tha we didn't complain not because we were biased but because we never signed up for a love story. We were in for the story of an unconventional girl who lost herself and her dreams with her father's death but still stood strong to support her family and how she finds her way back to fulfill her dreams and find her dad's murderer.And for MA, he was to stand by and support her in her journey and was slowly becoming the bargad ka ped as told by MH. Just like MH did many things for MA, MA also was starting to do the same. First he sent her to college, then he help get back Hooda house from Manushi, helped Anubha to start her business, helped MH to become a police officer. Their love story was always a side track just like love is just a part of everyone's life journey.
Although their were some disappointments, the main story was still on track. Only after the police training Leap with this new writer everything became a mess. It turned worse than a typical drama with no love story, no story about journey of MH, no changing of reet , nothing.
As initially we did not sign up for romance but the story and theme which was progressive we were somehow content with complains here and there. But when the main track no longer exists, the only thing that still kept people were the leads due to which hum at least acche romance dhundne lage but ye v nahi rahe ab toh. So initial less romance was not the problem .
Theek h yaar … ab jo b dikhaye …. have you ever read Madhushala by Harivansh rai Bachchan.. ? usme 4 lines h …
“ Apne yug me sbko anupam gyaat hui apni haala,
Apne yug me sbko adbhut gyaat hua apna pyaala,
fir b vriddho se jb pucha ek yhi uttar paya,
ab na rahe wo peene wale ab na ri wo madhushaala”
Its a beautiful rendition… kabhi time lge to padhna …
https://kaavyaalaya.org/mdhshla
anyways isko modify krte h for Mrityu Bhagya
“ek waqt me sbko pyara lgta ta ye rishta jinka,
ek waqt me sb ek ta , naam, bharosa aur sukh dukh jinka,
pr ab samay aya h aisa, k sochte h kya se kya h kr dala,
pr ab na re wo Meets hmare, kyuki toot chuki h ab us rishte ki maala….”
I am not as good as him but this is the only thought that stuck in my mind k
“kya hi fark pdta h ab… jb na wo Meets rhe … na kuch b phle jaisa rha … to kyu yaad krna h beete waqt ko …pyaar ta ni ta … ab to rishte ki raakh b ni h…. “