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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow..the two of you have put together something that remained neglected (at least in my mind)...the reason why Manushi's exposure has to be stalled.

.I loved this OS..the diction, the subtlety of Meet^2's emotions, how easy it is to misunderstand emotions when they're not explicitly put into words and above all, Meety baby's purity..the two of you have captured it all so well...

Sahi kehte hain..it takes two to tango..and that's what this 2-part OS was to me, a tango of angst and comfort...wish ITV had this much logic..

I look forward to reading more from the two of you❤️ Kudos for the good work!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Precap ke baad i have no hope but anyway..

MeetA catching Manushi and breaking her fall is a big thing. MeetA has been doing this with MeetH from the cricket Match, when they weren't even friends. It has been their thing. At any given chance he lifts her and during that time neither are conscious or awkward. Manushi intruding that thing sacred to them is bound to get him flustered. Did he cheat on MeetH by catching Manushi is something he is bound to ask? Did he destroy something that is theirs?


I am hoping he feels something. If not the thought of - "did I cheat" then at least - "wish I hadn't done that...it feels all wrong." I know many might think "wish I hadn't done that" is not good enough. It doesn't convey that intensity. But from MeetA POV... the guy who doesn't blink or think before picking up MeetH... him not feeling comfortable when it comes to Manushi conveys a lot about the direction of his mind and heart.


A number of you feel, Manushi should be exposed or her wedding truth or Kunal should come back and I mentioned now is not the time. Let me explain.


MeetH feels she is not a choice, Babita and MeetA have said that in so many words so many times and so loudly.. MeetH has borne it all with a smile and why she does that

A note on Meet Hooda explains that very clearly. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/meet/5263329/a-note-on-meet-hooda - By Sujz..


Hey I missed reading this post. Thank you for sharing it here. Beautifully put.


For MeetH acceptance is important. Also explains why she continues to cry in today's episode trying to help her mother. She has had to give something every time to get accepted.


She had to get married to get accepted by Dadi.

She saved Babita's life after Mua dikahyi for MeetA to agree to see her face.

She had to save MeetA from drug charges to get accepted in his room.

She had to save MeetA from the gunda's to get her place in the house , to get his friendship.

She had to take him out for Tej's mannat to get MeetA to take a stand for her.

She had to take on Manushi's role to get accepted as MeetA's patni.

She had to save Isha to get accepted for them to talk about the honeymoon

She had to get Tej back to get accepted as being MeetA's life partner.

She knows nothing else, unless she keeps giving a part of herself, her soul no one around her is going to accept her.

What she needs now is complete acceptance. Which MeetA had slowly started doing in the show.

Manushi getting exposed, it would again be like MeetA is with MeetH because he had no choice, because he compromised and their relationship will be that - of compromise.

However if MeetA ever tells MeetH he loves her she will never believe it as it will be - he had no choice so he is forced to be with her and he is a very good man. Remember what she thought when MeetA was hiding Manushi's picture, he is hiding because I shouldn't feel bad.. and that will continue.

To break that it is important for MeetH to know that MeetA had a choice and yet he chose her for herself over Manushi.

MeetA has liked both the sisters for what they have to offer ( as crude as it may sound) Manushi for her beauty and MeetH for her soul. He needs to choose between the two what he values more. So there cannot be any external influences here. It has to come from within him. Once he decides which route to take then, Manushi's exposure will bring the essence to the story.


Par woh sab dekhne keliye hume kaafi drama jhelni padegi which I am sure is going to have more than a few kitchen politics scenes. The writers / makers are trying to cater to all audiences. People like us who want depth and thought from both MeetA and MeetH and the ones who look forward for the drama / melodrama / OTT scenes. The balance is not going to be perfect. So this OS is us ditching the melodrama and clearing up the mess. Because for me, all this doesn't matter. if this is a show that is - Meet - badlegi duniya ki reet - then I would like to see that begin sooner than later. Up until now, I don't see the reet badalna as yet. She is still finding herself. And MeetA has JUST started helping her.

That aside, what you said MeetH... nailed it.


MeetH herself had used these words for Sunaina - " Kisi ko bhi yehi lagega ki woh shaayad galat kar rahi hain. Par kisi ko yeh nahi dikh raha ki unke dil par kya beet rahi hai " When MeetA said the similar words she interpreted it the only way she could. MeetA is struggling with his thoughts.

Babita's blind devotion is for all to see. Babita doesn't really care for the daughters-in-law as long as her sons are happy. If MeetA says I want to be with MeetH , she will agree if he says Manushi she will agree. Tomorrow Tej with get better and if he says Sunaina , Babita will happily welcome Sunaina in their house. For her outside that realm nothing exists.

Adding the desk was a nice touch. I was thinking about this, we could get such a beautiful scene when he gets the desk in his room. But at the end of the day in the serial he has not yet asked her about her studies, her comfort.. Glad you brought that out.


See... MeetH is the kind of girl who finds joy in others' joy. It came out once again when he tried to find out what she liked. She said she loved delivering flowers. He asked if she liked flowers. She said - nah. but the one who got them loved them and I loved that. Same with the laptop. So he needs to think different. Something that would tell her there is someone with her who finds joy in HER joy.


All in all what is here is MeetA's conflict , he anyway loved a mirage a lot of the things that he was told about Manushi were not true. He needs to decide his path ..hopefully he does that before his character is butchered.

Fingers crossed.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

Wow this is so well written. I loved everything except sucking finger part 🙈


please complete it and post the next part soon.


Trust me I know what you mean... I typed off that part as fast as I could just to get it over and done with. Didn't even go back to check the typos 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

ha mai jb padh ri ti tumara hi khyaal aya... maine bola ta na maine b kuch same socha h... jisme MH leaves MA... mai actually scenario ni soch pa ri ti k kya hoga k MH is sure about MA-Manushi... uska baad ka pura conversation dimag me h.. but starting point ni mil ra ta.... or Suvika ne kya likha h.... everything fell in place... if she permits.. I will borrow some plotlines from her and write my OS too...


You plan on writing an OS?? Cool. Good luck!! 😃👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanktlk

Finally part 2 is here.


Thanks for bumping up the thread da!! I posted the second part and crashed. Two days - two parts - it was like putting myself through an emotional wringer despite all our discussions and most of the points being on Whatsapp. And I never realized how much of MeetH's accent has stuck with me until I started typing this OS.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Read Part 2.. It's awesome.. Didi ki mast chop hui.. 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: reginalsecret

Wow..the two of you have put together something that remained neglected (at least in my mind)...the reason why Manushi's exposure has to be stalled.

.I loved this OS..the diction, the subtlety of Meet^2's emotions, how easy it is to misunderstand emotions when they're not explicitly put into words and above all, Meety baby's purity..the two of you have captured it all so well...

Sahi kehte hain..it takes two to tango..and that's what this 2-part OS was to me, a tango of angst and comfort...wish ITV had this much logic..

I look forward to reading more from the two of you❤️ Kudos for the good work!

Thank you. Divya has been my partner for a very long time now. And once I started writing Crime / thrillers, she became my - partner-in-crime. Feels good knowing that we have not lost touch with the love stories and the emotional side of the characters.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

Yeah the progression they showed is down to zero if he is impacted and what is this impact..the guy knows her intentions, knows she is manipulating, even has doubts but is still attracted..they are making it a very shallow character. This is not love but physical attraction and then all his attention to meet is pointless.

They should just give the guy his lust called love and get meet to move on from this toxic family where no one uses common sense or has morals right now ☹️


That is what i have trouble with.. the progression that they showed even with Manushi being in the house was in the right direction. He didn't need anyone to tell him, it came naturally to him. The Pizza date, the bike service are not huge gestures but they have so much meaning.. and suddenly... now he has no idea what to gift MeetH and has to depend on Manushi..


And at the end of the day he is more impacted by mere physical proximity... What stops the ML in iTV just saying apni maryada mein raho.. touchy feely hone ki jaroorat nahi hai.. Why the abla nari syndrome?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you. Divya has been my partner for a very long time now. And once I started writing Crime / thrillers, she became my - partner-in-crime. Feels good knowing that we have not lost touch with the love stories and the emotional side of the characters.



Yes emotional story was after such a long time.. Glad we could do justice..

Yesterday's episode .. just robbed me of the impact the the Tum gift ho scene and Meri Meet scene. I am glad we completed the OS, after the precap and see him slide back 10 steps, we wouldn't have been able to complete it.. I would have lost patience.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanktlk


That is what i have trouble with.. the progression that they showed even with Manushi being in the house was in the right direction. He didn't need anyone to tell him, it came naturally to him. The Pizza date, the bike service are not huge gestures but they have so much meaning.. and suddenly... now he has no idea what to gist MeetH and has to depend on Manushi..


And at the end of the day he is more impacted by mere physical proximity... What stops the ML in iTV just saying apni maryada mein raho.. touchy feely hone ki jaroorat nahi hai.. Why the abla nari syndrome?

@ red... do you really want me to quote that cricket wala thing here?? 🤣 Sahi bheja kaam karta toh yeh naubat kyu aati? 😆

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