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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: angel011

Oye-hoye manal..awesum beigning swthrt...it ws dhamakedaar..I was imagining d whole story,characters in mah mind while reading d story...
Devyani geting ignorance of child..aww felt a bit sad 4 her coz wtevr she's doing s 4 her house n childrens,aadi's anger s rgt in his place..
Waiting 4 d next part anxiously,doo update soon..next part wud b chora-chori's meeting 1..dhinchak..
Fab wrk mana..keep up d gud wrk
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Thnks 🤗 !! Aww it means Alot to me 🤗 !!
Well I have seen moms like Devyani n Kids like Adi who actually hate their parents n r more wid their Maids !!
so i think parents should give time to their kids ! which Devyani is lackin
Keep Reading 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: divyakeerhi

Hey Manal big hug to u🤗,


It was a fantastic update👍🏼

I can imagine priya looking gorgeous in that pink dress😍 and i m eagerly waiting to know about the triangular love story.

I m waiting for ur next update.

Precap seems very interesting.

LOVE U

Divya 🤗 Jhappiz Back 🤗 !!
I really wanted to See Pri in such Get up 😍
Will Update sooon inshallah 🤗
n Thnks <3
Mwahx <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Hey Mano..... great work hun👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it......
Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Edited my posts on page 3 and 5!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Good work manal.....Have a big 🤗 from me and AdiYa

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: amnaM

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Biatch i'm not requesting you to decrease the font size, I'm ordering you to do so!😈 Really hard to read it that way, plus we are not old, we don't need magnified version of updates🤣!! 🤣 !! I dunno wat to do 🤣 ! b4 ma Actually size use to be '1' 🤣 ! n people asked me to increase 🤣 n now when i did 🤣 !! I think i would love to go Back 🤣 !



Coming back to your update, i should start with one thing that i need you to correct😆. In the very first para under the heading of pradhan house, you wrote "gaurav shouted". It's not gaurav right?! It's priya's dad!
😆 🤣 !!! yaa i noticed afta Divya noticed it 🤣 ! god Nothin hides frm tht blunder officer 🤣 im too lazy to change 🤣 !

I'm really impressed by your urdu/hindi *seriously*!! I thought you know a few bits! But seems like you just don't know how to read them, otherwise all's good!! *hat's off for learning the HARD language* 🤣 well i can write those things kinda easily ! buh way too hard if i try to speak it 😕 🤣 !! n i sound Wierd if i even try 🤣

The first chapter was short, but i enjoyed reading a lot, gaurav sound's fun in your FF! Can't imagine him in such a way🤣!! 🤣 Aagey Aagey Dekhiye Hota hai kya 🤣

Aditya is always late, kahin pyaar mein bhe late na hojaye as gaurav is also lined up🤣!! 🤣 !! I wont make a big difference in this Adi n Series Adi character 😉 !!

Precap is awesome<3 Can't wait for the first fight, first sight...<3<3<3<3 will try to do full justice 🤗

Update soon, one or two more part's before gcse's, as i'm sure you'll go away from IF too *saying because i will leave* Maybe 1 😕 !! as on 4th May its ma cuzins weddin too so i might have to leave b4 tht :( !!


Thanks Amu 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: aleena1

Hey Mano..... great work hun⭐️

Loved it......
Keep it up👍🏼

Thnks Alee Baba 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
thnks Jana 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: coolsabs

Good work manal.....Have a big 🤗 from me and AdiYa

Sabs 🤗 Thnks Alot <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
the story is amazing Mana!!!

sorry got awfully less time at hand... college entrance in less than three weeks... as soon as this entrance stuff is off my head... i'll give page long replies!!!

love you behoodi!

luv,
Pree

p.s. still keep PMing... i'll keep track! 😉

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