Maryada FF: Fidato :Chapter#3 Pg#9 - Page 4

RES. gonna read it tonight!<3

Originally posted by: Iram..x

Hey Twinny
Just finished readin the intro and the first part....and it was absloutely amazing👏, im really lookin forward to adi n priya's first meetin😍
Lol Gaurav's gettin more love by the family then Adi... lol thts a change😆
Priya's charcacter seems really bubbly unlike how she was at the begining of the show
and lastly, i love the title of the fic, really unique😃

Waiting for the next update

Good Luck 🤗

Iru 🤗 !!

Hola beta Hola 😛 here are my short n sweet commentwa, hope u like them 😳

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

Jakkar mansion is a Big, beautiful and one of the best and the biggest mansions in India. Where lives SSP Barmanand Jakkar with his family. Jakkar's are known for having the best and the most loving family in Mumbai' but is this true or this is just what people think? Kay why don't we first lets meet and know this family'

most loving? SRK ki family se bhi zyada? 😲 😛

Devyani Jakkar, SSP Barmanands wife. She is the one looking after the Jakkar industries. She does not just look after her family businesses but she is always there for her family. "Raghu Kaka!Raghu Kaka!! Yeh Flowers ab tak yahan hai ? Meine apko kya kaha' Subha hote hi mujhe fresh flowers yahan par chaiye! Samjhe ap ? ! '." Devyani Wants everything perfect and on time. " Aap Ab tak yahan Kare hain ? Jaiye!.." " Ji Madam Ji".

Raghu thinks, 'I'll bring in fresh cactus flowers for you 😡' 😆

While devyani is busy shouting at the irresponsible servants, we see a tall, fit guy rushing through the stairs, putting his raybons on.

ok, at first I read, putting his 'ribbons' on 🤣

" Adi'. Adi !!" "Chill Gaurav Beta!! Tum har waqt aise Hurry mein kyun hote ho" " Mom Im getting late!

"10:30 ho gaya hai, Pratigyaaaa ka time ho gaya hai..." 😛

Aur yeh Adi' He doesn't Care !! har waqt ki tarha late!" Hahahhahaaha! Tumhi Ne Bigara hai isse !! toh ab isse sambalo !!" " Mom ap fir se shuru hogaye'" "Ok !! Jab Tak who sahib zade Taiyar hote hain, tum nashta karlo !! as Mujhe kuch dair ke bad nikal na hai!" Hearin this Gaurav gets sad and says " toh Aap Jaiye Mom !! Dai Jan Humien Breakfast karwa denge! You don't waste your time with us.."

and my time also 😃

" Gaurav beta' Im really sorry !! ke mein tum logo ko enough time nahin de ti !! par yeh meri majboori hai '" " its awright mom !! mujhe Aadat ho chuki hai Apke aur dad ke bagair !! Ap logo ke liye apka Business zyada maiyne rakta hai" says Gaurav. "BOOOO!" shouts Aditya Behind Gaurav.

ye booo per to Aaliyaah ka copyright tha na, Manal 😕 😆

" Adi! Toh Tum finally neeche Agaye !!! I was about to leave u and go'" "Sorry Bhai'" says Aditya holding his ears. "Tum Agaye Beta !! Ao Nashta Karlo" says devyani to Aditya but Aditya gives her a stern looks and shouts " Dai Jan !!! Dai JAN! Mera Nasta Kahan Hai?" " Beta Yeh Raha Aaj Meine Breakfast banaya hai tum dono ke liye" Says devyani to seeks Aditya's attention. "Wow !!! Thnks A LOT !! Par mujhe apki Mehrbani ki zaroorat nahin hai !!... DAI JAN !!! DAIJan!" Shouts Aditya and makes devyani sad.

She bursts into a song n dance routine 🤣

" Lagta Hai Aaj Collage mein hi Breakfast karna hoga' lets go bro" "Bye Mom" hugs Gaurav. Aditya walks away without greetin Devyani, which left devyani really hurt. "Kya Galat kar rahi hoon Mein? Kiske liye mein kaam kar rahi hooon ? inn Bacho ke liye aur yahi bache Aaj Mere shaqal bhi nahin dekna Chahte" cries Devyani. "Lekhin Mein kya karoon? Business ko meri zarooorat hai!" It's like she cares about her kids ! but still businesss comes between them.

Pradan house:

"Priya Beta !!! Aaj Tumhara Pehla din hai aur Tum Itne Nakre Kar rahe ho!" shouts Mr Pradan, a rich industrial. "Priya!! Tumhare Waje se Aa Mein late hojaonga!! Neeche Ao !!! Jaldi !" shouts Gaurav.

Oi! ye gaurav Priya ka dad hai kya? 😕

Priya, sitting next to a large mirror. Putting her eye liner, thn puts her blush and thn the lip gloss. Brushes her short silky hair. Priya walks toward her large closet and choose her pink& Yellow Indian designed long skirt and the pink top and changes. 'Uff ! seriously I need to go for shopping '' she tells her self lookin @ the mirror. " Dad !! Dad! '" shouts Priya while Goin downstairs ! from her round classic stairs. "kyun chila rahe ho tum beta !! waise bhi Aap baut late hain'' !! 'Pehle Aap Mujhe Paise de' Says Priya. 'Paise? Kis liye'Ohh ! shopping'!' Replies Mr Pradan. " Priya Hugs him and the way of butterin "Mere Pyaare Papa !! u know me sooo well!!!! Chaliye Paise nikaliye na' !! "Priya tum nahin sudroge !! last week hi toh tum shoppin mein gaye.." "I know Papa !! But do u expect me go to Collage !! to my new Collage with These clothes !!" " Okay Beta ! !take !! ufff tum nahin sudroge" !! he hands her his credit card.

and thinks that he'll take bk the card once she gets married... 😛

"OMG thank You Papa ! Love Love Love u So much" Priya Says While Hugging him. "I know u do beta !! now come and lets do break fast '" !! "Okay Papa Lekhin Aunty ' Uttara aunty kahan hai'" she Asks. "Tum ne Pukara Aur Hum chalein aye" sings Uttara Behind Priya. "Aunty!!" Priya hugs her. "Kahan te Aap ? Anywyz Aaj Uni Ke Baad ! we'll Go shopping Okay :D <3" says Priya . " Tum ne kaha aur hum taiyar ;) !! Lekin Aik Shart'" Uttara says. "Aap Jo Kahain gi Mujhe Manzoor hai'" Agrees Priya. " "Great!! Thn Aaj Tum yeh Long Skirts ! or Salwar kamees nahin karido ge'" " Kyun ! Kyun ! Kyun !!" protest Priya. "App Ko Pata hai na mujhe yahi Acha Lagta hai'" Priya says Wid a cute sad face. "OMG Priya Seriously !! Beta Learn Some fashion from me !! Yaar Naya university hai ! you should dress nice !!..." "NICE 😲 !!!?" Priya shouts! "Aunty !! u tryin to say Meri Achi Taste Nahin hai?" She continues.. "maine Toh yeh kaha hi nahin ' Haan Agar tumhe lagta hai toh' 🤣 " she teases Priya. " Aunty!" she sighs! "hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahah Idiot I was joking !! 🤣 ! as I know ke Tum toh Apna Style Change nahin Karoge .-. !!" Uttara says. " Aunty ! Apko PAta hai I love this ! so ya :)" Says Priya !! "Anywyz Mein Late ho rahe hoon ! Bye Bye Bye !! .." "Oyeee Taiyar Kitne BAje hoon mein?" shouts Uttara seeing Priya rush Out but Too Late Priya Left Already, "Pagal Ladki Hai yeh Bhaiya!" laughs Uttara. "Tum Jano Aur Yeh ! I can never understand u both" Says Mr Pradhan while reading his daily newspaper.

He discovers that he is reading the paper upside down, bada talented banda hai yar! 😎

IN THE GARAGE:

Priya Standing next to her Black Lexis "Kaka Aaj Please mein Drive Karoon Please" Requests Priya. "Priya baby! Baba Naraz hojayenge !!" he replies. " Kaka Im not saying Kay Mein Khud Akeli Jaongi !! Aap Mere Side Wale Seat mein betiye Please" she says, "Lekhin Priya Baby'" "KAKA Please ! Please ! Please" Priya Begs wid a cute cat face, "Priya baby aap jante hain ke mein apko mana nahin karsakta" he says , "Aacha Teekhe ! Lekhin Sambalke!" he agrees "YESSSS!" Priya says in xcitement. "Chaliye Aaj Mein Apko Drive karke Dikati hoon" Priya Says.

They Sit in the Car And Leave.

The driver starts praying and thanks his lucky stars tht he is insured 😆

Recap: "Oye ankhein Hain Ya Button !! ? Dekhe Nahin Chala Sakti?" shouts Aditya, "Sorry ! sorry ! Srry , wo mein'" she says while cumin out of the car.

Button jaisi aankhein.. where have I heard this before *thinks thinks thinks* remembers Pooooooooooo 🤣

[Sorry for a short start ! but this was my 1st try of writtin FF so please Bare with me :)]

Loved it Manalwa! Keep it up 😊

Originally posted by: FIZK6

A very good start Manal. Priyas all hyper, i like her. Precap is interesting, Aditya Priya meet. Please update soon.

thnks Fiz <3 !! Glad u liked it ^^ will sure update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: dkmystery

Hola beta Hola 😛 here are my short n sweet commentwa, hope u like them 😳

Loved it Manalwa! Keep it up 😊

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Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

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Oye-hoye manal..awesum beigning swthrt...it ws dhamakedaar..I was imagining d whole story,characters in mah mind while reading d story...
Devyani geting ignorance of child..aww felt a bit sad 4 her coz wtevr she's doing s 4 her house n childrens,aadi's anger s rgt in his place..
Waiting 4 d next part anxiously,doo update soon..next part wud b chora-chori's meeting 1..dhinchak..
Fab wrk mana..keep up d gud wrk
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