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Posted: 14 years ago
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Preeeee 🤗 OMG missss u :( !
kay when eva u have time 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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btw mana... what does fidato really means?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pree Fidato is an italian word !
which means -some1 trustworthy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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manaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!
kamini 🤗 kaise hai? swwie for not being 'round.. india mei bauth busy hoon mei aaj kal !! ufff ithi saare hotshots kaise handle karoon ?🤣
😲😲 !!
^^ why do my comments always start with shocks?😆 so weird😆
anyways you started a FF !? *double shock* Damn gurl .. U are one talented girl !! <3 u make OS's, siggies, VM's and now FF's !!<3 I can't even handle one FF 🤣
anywasy i love this FF <3 looks very interesting=D
first chapter was verryyy good !! amazing start <3
hehe .. the precap was cutee ... chavani chaap saw his chori 😳
loving it ... continue soon
muahhhhhhhhhhhhh
love you loadsss :D
your biatch:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol... fidato sounds so urdu!!

anyway awesome choice for the title... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update Time !!
Well u decide how this part is ! as i didnt enjoy writtin it :/

CHapter 2 -AdiYa Meeting

In the Collage:

First day back after 2 months holidays, Adi and his friends as usual surrounded in the parking area before they head towards their 1st lecture. 'Oye Aditya bata how was your holiday? Dude u r a busy man !! Ek call ka bhi answer nahin diya! Where were you man ?" asked Karan, one of aditya's class mates. "dude its nothing like that !! its just I decided to visit ma aunt in London, so she asked me to stay with her for sometimes.. wait didn't bro tell ya?" said Aditya. "Gaurav? Who janab toh khud gayab hogaye the.." said Karan. "Gayab? But Bro was in India… and he didn't even tell me he was goin some where…" said Aditya in a confused way, "and Bro would tell me if he will go some where…" he continued. "Chal Chor mein toh bus aise hi pooch raha tha! Anywyz Lets go or…." "Or…. Or What" Asked Aditya, "or you gona wait for your girlfriend ;)" said Karan to tease Aditya, "Ohh Vidya…. 1st she is NOT my girlfriend !! but my closest friend and 2nd yaar im sure it's not her 1st day in collage and she knws the way in… so lets go" said Aditya and Started to go in the collage until he remembered he forgot his book on Karans bike, "obbbs ! yaar tum log chalo I'll be right back ! as I forgot ma book on your bike" said Aditya to Karan.

After taking the book Aditya was about to go in until his phone rang "dude… where are you? Are you even planning to come today or…" said Aditya on phone, "chill chill one question @ once" said Chinu, Aditya's closest friend. "actually adi My sister Priya! Its' her 1st day in collage so I thaught she might come with me ! but she madam left me awready and I guess she is awready in collage" continued Chinu. "Well Well your sister hmmm ! anywyz how long you gona take?" asked Adiyta, "hmmm Im on ma way in 10 mins I'll be there" said Chinu. "Oh kay…" while he was talking to chinu, and turns arounds and sees a car which was almost gona hit him "Oye ankhein Hain Ya Button !! ? Dekhe Nahin Chala Sakti?" shouts Aditya, "Dude Wats rong? Everything alright?" asks Chinu in concern, "Dude talk to you once you in collage bye" and he shuts the phone. "Sorry ! sorry ! Srry , wo mein…" she says while cumin out of the car. " Sorry...?" says Aditya but stops once he saw her, he completely forgot his anger on the person who almost drove the car over him, he was just so lost in her beauty, those innocent eyes and that sweet voice. "I'm really really really sorry wo app samne aagaye so I lost control" apologize Priya but Notice that he is not even listenin to her and is completely lost "Hello!!" she shouts to get him back to his sense, "Ohh !! girl !! why am I not shocked !!! yaar tum logo ko license kaun deta hai? Driving aati nahin aur show off karne nikal gaye car leke…" says Aditya in awkward-ness so she doesn't think bad of him checkin her out. " WHAT?" shouts Priya "Hello what a sexes comment tht was" continue's Priya in anger. "sexes? Huh Hello facts always hurts!" replied Aditya. "Sorrry saab!! Yeh saab meri galti hai, baby toh" says Priya's kaka. "Kaka Aap iske jaise Loser se Mafi kyun maang rahe hain? He doesn't deserve it" says Priya "Oh hello! Loser? Im not the one who was driving with CLOSED eyes !" said Aditya "wait cant blame you ;) !! im too hot so thts the reason you lost control haan ;)" says Aditya in a mischievous tone. " HOT? ! huh Hello Hot and you ? My FOOT ! wait galatfemi kissi ko bhi ho sakti hai ;) so say anyfin that makes you happy! But for me you r clearly NOT HOT' said Priya. The argument kept goin until Gaurav and chinu arrived.

"WOA WOA Aditya yeh kya horaha hai?" asked Gaurav by controlling Aditya. "Adi dude Wats rong man?" asked Chinu until he saw Priya. "Priya tum ? Seriously wats the matter here?" asked chinu, "dude you knw this crazy chic…" asked Aditya in an astonished tone. "Bro seriously Aap Aise logo ke saath gumte hain Jisse Baat karne ki bhi tameez nahin hain" "Bro!!?" shouted Aditya "Tum Ek Pagal ke Bhai ho? Woow how do u even live with her man?" Said Aditya. "Pagal?" shouted Priya "Bro Seriously ! n you standing there laughin :O" said Priya in Shock Argh!! "hahahah Priya Seriously woow wat an entry in collage @ your 1st day" laughs Chinu "And Adi You? ! hhaha and I was gona tell you on fone to check if ma Sis is there and help her on her 1st day until I come and here you both already…" continued Chinu. "Dude yeh toh shuruwat hai ! ab toh Maza Ane Wala hai tumhare Bahen Ke Saath" Said Aditya mischievously. "Yes you are right Ab toh baut maza aane wala hai" continued Priya lookin fiercely @ Aditya. While chinu here is trying to control the situation, there Gaurav was so lost in Priya's beauty. "Dude" said Chinu snapping his fingers infront of Gaurav. "Instead of helping me! your lost in somewhere else" continued Chinu. "Sorrry woh mein…" Gaurav tried to defend, "anywyz Hey Priya! Im Gaurav! Adi's bro and Chinu's friend!! Other thn this start ofcourse ! Hope you enjoy your 1st day in collage: D" said Gaurav while smiling @ Priya, "hey Gaurav J ! thanks !! yaa hope so warna kuch logo ne toh…" says Priya while giving the angry look to Adi, "And Mujhe toh Aap Jante hi haan ;)" said Aditya with his playfill tone. "Nahin !! aur Janna bhi nahin hai mujhe" continued Priya! "hahahhaha Seriously guys Wow wat a meeting ! anywyz Agar tum logo ka fight katam ! can we go to classs ! as we already late." Said Chinu, to stop their fight. "Kaka Aap ghar chale jai ye! Priya mere saath chali ayegi" said chinu handing the key to Kaka.

Finally Priya and Aditya decided to stop their fight and go to class, while they walking towards their class, someone shouts "Aur Mujhe Bhul gaye tum sab?" "Vidya!!" says Aditya and hugs her, "dude I was waiting for you until some1 decided to ruin ma day" and looks at Priya, who glares back @ him "Aditya…" says Gaurav "Hey Vidya! Good to see you back" says Gaurav huggin her, "Vidzi" shouts Chinue huggin Vidya, "Oh missed you guyz, and… You…?" asked Vidya looking Priya, "Hey Im Priya…" "My Sister" continued Chinu, "Ohh Hey Priyaaa Good to see you here" Says Vidya hugging Priya, "woow seems like I missed a lot haan ;)!! Wat happened here?" Asks Vidya looking @ Priya and Aditya, "Yaar Not again! Please don't start! Will tell u later Vidya, now let's go! We already late" said Chinu, dragging Vidya towards their class. Everyone follows Chinu and Vidya while laughing.

Precap: "Love is not the story of one or a few individuals, it is a universal story because, and there is hardly anyone in the world that has not passed through this experience. Love is god and God is love" – (from Khuda aur mohabbat)


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Sorry for Delay Guys :( ! Got Xams :( !!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey manal🤗,

Very nice update👍🏼, OMG both brothers lost for priya's beauty😳 very interesting. adi and priya's 1st meeting was very cute 😳and fight was very interesting. i'm eagerly waiting for this triangular love story😍 .

Edited by divyakeerhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
finally Mana... chal anyway maaf kiya, exams the!

loved it, amazing strong characters each one of them!

Luv,
Pree
Edited by Sheherzade - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good story but where is Adi's Sis?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Manal 🤗 Sorry for late reply. Anyway loved the part. Adi and Gaurav have both fallen for Priya. Looking forward for the next part.
Best of luck for your exams. How are they going?

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