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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Junoon"

Part 2

Next day:

The door to the room in the cottage opens again as the person enters it.Priya who was asleep till then opens her eyes with a jerk only to see darkness beneath her blind-folds n adjusts herself.She can feel the person coming near her through footsteps..its gets close..very close..very very close to her as the person hovers over her.She thinks to scream n protest back but she is lost in the proximity for a minute..the person's scent..somewhere familiar to her … or was it her imagination.She comes out of her thoughts only to realize that the person was trying to open her blind-fold.Reality kicks n she think at last she can see the face of the person who has kidnapped her..who would it be?And why did anyone kidnap her?As the blind-folds gets removed she adjusts her blurry eyes to focus on the one person who is near her..he was a man and was bended removing her ropes from legs n she couldn't see him in this position.Her eyes move around the room.. "Eww.." was the first thought that occurred seeing it messy..she saw the black sofa she was lying on all the day before.A damaged door..closed window..old furniture spread randomly..very messy red carpet..n smell of something very tasty..it was like she was getting all her lost senses back to her again.It was then she saw him who was removing ropes from her hands..who was he?n why the hell did he kidnapped me?She looked into his face but couldn't recognize him..he was wearing a black mask which almost covered his face,,except eyes..before she can look into those eyes he moved back.But she still was looking at him..he was wearing a black jacket n a blue trousers and his face was covered with mask..does she find him familiar.. "Haan" was her first answer.. "Nehi..yeh main kya soch rahi hoon..yeh yeh toh koi anjana hi hain"..was her second thought.

"Kaun ho tum?".she asked slowly ..wanting to know him.. more than wanting to know why he kidnapped her.He didn't answer her as usual..this made her come back from her thoughts.

"Maine poocha kaun ho tum aur mujhe yahan kyun leke aaye ho..bhehra ho..sunayi nehi deta..ya phir googne ho..(now getting irritated) dekho mujhe yahan nehi rehna hain..main jaa rahi hoo,,"

Now that she is free from binds..she tried to get up from her place but even before she could properly get up..he caught her shoulders n pinned her to sofa n looked into her eyes.

"Chodo mujhe ..arrgh..chodo.." seeing his eyes looking at her.. she stops protesting..he notices this n moves back a bit n lowers his eyes..priya tries to protest again.."Chodo mujhe..nehi toh..nehi toh..main chillungi..main chillaungi..chodo mujhe(loudly)"

"Chillao.."(screaming at top),, This makes priya scared n she gets quite.,,"Jitna chillana hain chilaao..yahan door door tak koi nehi hain tumhari cheek sunne ko..naa koi hain jo tumhari madad kare."(coming close to her again) "jitni marzi chillana hain chillao..".Another strange feeling of similarity hits priya listening to his dusky voice.. "Bas karo priya" she thought to herself.

He leaves her with a jerk n moves back to lift a parcel from a chair near by n keeps near to her on sofa.

"Bhook lagi hogi ..khalo.."(ordering her).He opened the parcel with food and kept near her..

She didn't answer his question nor saw the food .. she was in rage.How dare he touch her?

"Aur wahan bathroom hain..(pointing to the door to the right of her sofa)aur yeh kuch kapde ..pehnlo.."(throwing a cover on her face)

"Mujhe nehi khana.."(adamantly n not even seeing him)

"Chup Chap Khalo warna.."(loudly)

"Warna kya..haan..kya karloge..(pointing finger to him n speaking more loudly)tumhari dhamkiyon se mein darne wali nehi hoon samjhe..aur waise bhi yeh khana ..yeh khana mujhe nehi chahiye"

"(Coming close to her n seeing into her eyes warningly)Yahan main jo kehtha hoon..wahin hoga..samjhe..yeh hi khana milega aur tumhe yehi khana khana padega"(pushing the food more near to her n moving back from her)

"Aloo ke parathe…..wowo…"(Seeing the food)..It was her favourite n feels tasty as she inhales it n she was famished at most of it but still her ego beat her "ahem..(loudly)nehi.. mujhe nehi khana..yeh ganda khana.."(trying to control her urge to get tempted for food)

"Aloo ke parathe?Aur gandha khana?hmm.."(folding both hands n seeing her)

"Haan..tumhe pata hain…main yeh sab nehi khati..(showing her hands over food)main toh..main toh..(thinking trying to cover up n making faces)chinese..mexican.. italian.."

"Oh.. (Coming near n shouting in her ears) Yeh koi restaurant nehi hain jo tum order karo wooh main leke aau..khana hain toh khao warna bhooke raho..(moving back again n warningly)main thode deer main aaunga..tab tak tayaar hoke raho..samjhi"

Priya doesn't even see him n looks at other side,,

"Samajh hi gayi hogi..(Moving to door)Aur koi chalaki karne ki koshish bhi mat karna..(Just before closing the door he warns again)warna.."

He leaves the word hanging n closes the door loudly n goes away..Priya sees the door thinking about the guy..

"Yeh toh bol saktha hain yaar..hmmf..stupid"(Irriratedly)


At priya's place:

Gaurav comes near bhramanand who is sitting infront of T.V but not seeing it n lost in thoughts.He off the T.V n comes n sits beside his father.

"Papa.. (Seeing him)inspector se abhi maine baat kiya..wooh log abhi bhi dhoondh rahe hain..par priya ka kuch pata nehi lag paye.."(sadly)

"Hmm.."(nods)

"Papa aap chinta mat keejiye hum un kidnappers ko pakad lenge aur.."Brahmnanad cuts in n gets up from his place..he was thinking something n there were no answers to his questions..

"Ek baat hmare samjah mein naa aarahi gaurav..agar wooh kidnapper hi hain toh abhi tak wooh logon ne hume fone kyun nehi kiya..(seeing gaurav)agar unka maksat sirf paisa (stressing the word)hi hain toh abhi tak toh fone aana hi aana chahiye..(thinking again n saying after a pause)hmare ko lage hain ki koi humse bahut badi khel khel rahe hain.."

"Kya matlab hain papa aapka..main..kuch..samjha nehi.."(confused)

"Gaurav..thare ko pata hain priya hamare liye kya hain..(gaurav nods slowly) uska kissi bhi haal mein yahan pohunchna hoga wooh bhi waqt se pehle..(Gaurav nods again thinking)Nehi toh.." (worried n leaves the sentence)

"Par papa police aur hamare log dono ki mumbai ke chappa.chappa chaan rahe hain.."

"Sirf Mumbai na…agar hmara shak sahi hain toh..(a idea strikes him)ek kaam kar tu ..apne logon ko bol Mumbai chod ..mumbai ke aas paas aur bahar dhoondhe....jitna chahe utne logon ko bhej..(garurav looks confused)samjhe kee nehi..(loudly)"

"Jee papa..samajh gaya..main abhi batato hoon.."(still not convinced n thinking)

"Toh khade kayko hain..ja..jaa yahan se aur bol unhe..aur chod hamare ko akela.."(ordering now)

"Jee..jee..papa.."(Scared a bit seeing him like that n leaves fastly dialing a number on his cellphone)

Brahmanand thinks to himself..

"Kahin bhi chupake rakhlo priya ko tum..main usse dhoondh kar hi rahoonga.."(closing his fist n banging on wall in rage)



Cottage:

After a while..when priya's so called ego got vanished due to her hunger..she eats the food ("Kitna tasty hain yaar..ummm") n gets fresh n wears the new clothes (patiala n kurtha)bought to her("Kuch toh pehna hoga..issi se chala lete hain").

"Samjhta kya hain wooh apne aap ko..(Sitting on the sofa folding both her legs up n talking to herself)mujhe …mujhe dhamki deta hain..stupid..idiot ..moron.."(making faces)

"Aur yeh jagah dekho (seeing around)kitna gandha hain..eww..(getting up n dusting herself)main yahan nehi reh sakhti ..mujhe kissi bhi halath main yahan se nikalna hi hoga.."

She walks back n forth thinking deeply..after a minute or two..

"Par yahan toh koi rasta hi nehi hain..(seeing around n stops walking)nikloo toh kahan se..saare doors aur kidki bhi bandh hain?"

She sees around again for a way out..its a closed room n even the big window is locked n even some nails are stuck to it inside..no way out?Suddenly she sees sunlight coming from the small window above the window..its big enough for her to escape..

"Arre yeh toh ventilation window hain..yahan se toh maine easily nikal sakthi hoon..(smiling to herself) par yeh itna uncha hain..wahan tak kaise pahunch paungi.." She was afraid of heights..n she knows it very well..but..

"Par..(thinking n regaining her strength)nehi priya jo bhi ho main yahan nehi rakhne wali..especially uss stupid khadoos insaan ke saath toh bilkul nehi.."

She decides to get away fastly n that too far away from that stupid person..but how ? was the question..she looks at the old furniture n finds a ladder ..

"Ladder..isse kuch fayda ho .."She confirms that the door of the room is locked from outside n hears for any noises..but hearing nothing she thinks he has gone out..perfect timing she smiles to herself.

She tries to remove it slowly from bunch of other stuff not making noise..its old one ofcourse..n broken here n there ..she keeps is straight to the ventilation window n starts climbing slowly..

"Ok..bas aur kuch door..aur kuch door..tum kar sakthi ho priya.."not seeing down n closing eyes in between n taking heavy breathes.At last she reaches the top n tries to remove the window..its closed tightly..and also its stuck because of not using it for long time..

"Lagtha hain yeh stuck ho gaya..ab kya karu..(tries to push it with force but in vain)thoda dhaaka lagao priya..uff "

The step of the ladder she is on cracks little as it's a old one ..she doesn't notice it n tries to push the ventilation window with more force n the step she is on breaks with her force n she falls backwards losing her balance ……..

"Aahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"

"Priya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"(someone screams her name)

She closes her eyes in anticipation to hit the ground but instead lands on two arms which catches her closely n protectively..

She opens her eyes atlast still shaken a bit but what she sees makes her more shocked.

"Priya ………. tum ..tum..theek toh hona ,,tumhe kuch hua toh nehi..kuch chot aayi hain kya..kuch bolo priay..priya tum theek hona..(she nods numbly)thank god..(Helds her closely n hugs)Tum..tum pagal ho gayi ho kya..(Seeing the ladder n scolding her)kya soch rahi thi..tum gir jati toh..agar..agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh ..tum..priya.."

"Adi…Aditya..?"(extremely shocked seeing his face)

"Huh!"he realizes he hasn't wore his mask on..how the hell did he forget it ? n sees a shocked priya.She tries to break his hold n moves back stumbling until she her back is to wall n sees's aditya with a shocked face.

"Aditya..??"Unbelievable ,,this is her dream ..she closely her eyes anticipating it as dream when she opens her eyes she still finds him with his arms open in the same position he left her.This is..this is Real!

"Kyun?"(In slow n feeble voice)Tears form from her beautiful eyes n she gets lost in her thoughts of past.

Flashes:

** " Miss.Nakhchadi.."

"Mujhse bhaag ke kahan jaougi…"

"I love you ……..priyaaaaaaaaa.."

"Priya ek baar meri baat suno..please..priyaaaaaaaaaaa…"

"Tum sirf meri ho priya ..sirf meri….aur main tumhe kissi aur ka kabhi hone na doonga.,chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ..kuch bhi.." **

Her tears doesn't stop..she leans back to the wall n slowly sits down numbly..it was like hell broke out loose on her..,,why ..why should he come back again in her life..after what all he did..how dare he?n why now?what does he want?So many questions ……?

Aditya tries to come near her n talk.

"Nehi..mat aao mere pass..(Stopping him with her hand)kyun aaye ho meri zindagi mein phir se aditya..(crying)itna sab kuch hone ke baad…kyun aaye ho..kyun..(screaming n crying more loudly).Kyun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She closes her eyes floating into the memories of her past..her heart-broken past………


Precap:

*Few months earlier*

Sorry for the delay...was a bit busy..

Please do comment..😃

Criticism /Appreciation both are welcomed..😊

Good wishes..

Sri:-)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Wowwwwwwwwww sri.......
its great...read it 2 times....
cannt wait for the next one...👍🏼
keep it up....amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Finalllly !! Res**
*Edited*
OhEmJee Phinally Madam decided to Update 😡 😆 !!
Oh Em Jee !! girl u sucha gr8 Writter 👏 !! I could just imagine the whole scene !!
OhEm Jee ! I knew this !! barmanad is barmanad 😡 !! he wants priya not cuz he is her daughter buh for somethin else 😡 ! n eeven gaurav is wid him 😡 ! OMG im jst lovin it !!
n Oh EM Jee ! Even tho im suppose to hate Aditya afta wah he did ! by kidnappin her ! buh Damn tht Hug jst killled it ❤️ !! Oh Em Jee ! its like we cant hate damon in VD n here in ur OS i cant hate Adi !!
Oh EMJee ! cant wait to knw wah happened few months bk 😲 !!
Omg Update fast re !!
me waitin ! n plus me too wrote an OS 😆
Edited by -Cwezy_Manoola- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyyyyy! Woo Hoo!!
Res

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Awesome awesome awesome Sri! I loved this update.. OmGee the precap souns interesting... I wonder what priyaz past is..😲please please please sri.. update soon I am dying os suspense!!! awesome ff
xx
Edited by mrs.luvjaysean - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow just read it today...it is awesome
hope u write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Beautifull FF <3 read the both parts 1 and 2 they are totally well written Do pm when u update it<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamekaa

Wowwwwwwwwww sri.......

its great...read it 2 times....
cannt wait for the next one...👍🏼
keep it up....amazing



Thanks a lot anamekaa..u read it 2 times😲..wow..thanku..😃

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

OMG Finalllly !! Res**

*Edited*
OhEmJee Phinally Madam decided to Update 😡 😆 !!
Oh Em Jee !! girl u sucha gr8 Writter 👏 !! I could just imagine the whole scene !!
OhEm Jee ! I knew this !! barmanad is barmanad 😡 !! he wants priya not cuz he is her daughter buh for somethin else 😡 ! n eeven gaurav is wid him 😡 ! OMG im jst lovin it !!
n Oh EM Jee ! Even tho im suppose to hate Aditya afta wah he did ! by kidnappin her ! buh Damn tht Hug jst killled it ❤️ !! Oh Em Jee ! its like we cant hate damon in VD n here in ur OS i cant hate Adi !!
Oh EMJee ! cant wait to knw wah happened few months bk 😲 !!
Omg Update fast re !!
me waitin ! n plus me too wrote an OS 😆


Manal..Thanks a lot..for liking..well i am not that a great writer..as u think..though i wrote 1 before this on AR...
Glad u liked adi..wait for more twist's dear..
😃

Originally posted by: mrs.luvjaysean

Yayyyyyy! Woo Hoo!!

Res

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Awesome awesome awesome Sri! I loved this update.. OmGee the precap souns interesting... I wonder what priyaz past is..😲please please please sri.. update soon I am dying os suspense!!! awesome ff
xx


Shilpa..thanks a lot..updating in few..😳

Originally posted by: humna77

wow just read it today...it is awesome

hope u write more


Thanks a ton..humna..😃

Originally posted by: -Arjunlicious-

OMG Beautifull FF <3 read the both parts 1 and 2 they are totally well written Do pm when u update it<3


Thanks a lot..sure will Pm u..😃

Good wishes..
Sri:-)




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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Junoon"

Part 3

*Few months earlier*

Pradhan Mansion:

A large mansion with a beautiful garden at the entrance filled with flowers all over.A very big living hall welcomes all..it seems to be quite busy with people trying to do decorations.A spiral staircase leading to the first floor..as we pass the corridor everyone are roaming here n there arranging flowers,curtains,lights etc.While everyone are busy with work..in the bedroom lays a beautiful girl on bed still trying to get up with pillows on her face to obstruct the light.Suddenly she remembers something n wakes with a jerk..see's the time which is past 9 now..

"Oh god!!Main late ho gayi" trying to straight her messy hair..

She rushes to bathroom n comes out after a while getting fresh n sits infront of the large 3 full size mirror's..we see her eyes while she does her mascara..n lips while shes applying lipstick n her hair flowing while she tries to dry it,,She takes the duppatta from the chair n wears in her neck flowing with wind while she rushes out of her room..when we see her ..beautiful than an angel..!!Priya..priya pradhan'the only daughter of the famous businessmen Prabhat Pradhan.

She rushes to a study room n halts at the entrance n takes a heavy breathe n enters it silently..

"Good..Goodmorning papa..(scared a bit)Ok baba mujhe pata hain..main late ho gayi sorry..(holding her ears)pata hain pata hain aap kya kahenge..ghar main shaadi hain aur itna saara kaam..aur main itni deer tak soti rahi..par kya karu papa..wooh main raat ko na late se soyi thi wooh misha hain na..uska birthday party tha aur atee late ho gaya..(roaming here n there)acha baba aap kuch mat kaho..i am very very sorry aur aage se aisa nehi hoga..promise...pakka promise..(coming near)I love you papaa.."

We see whom priya is talking to a..very large photo of Late Prabhat Pradhan..a garland is on it..priya comes n lits the diya infront of it as tears escape from her eyes remembering what happened 2 months ago when she came completing her MBA from abroad..she was very happy thinking to meet his father after a long time.But when she entered the house she could see it filled with sadness..his father has got a massive heartstroke last night n couldn't survive it.It was the saddest day of her life..the only person whom she was living for after her mother died of cancer when she was 5 years old..was her father..n he was no more.She couldn't even see a last sight of her father.What else was there for her in this world..she was alone..all alone..no relatives to support her.And left with the responsibilities of their large businesses ..everything was left for her in the will of Prabhat Pradhan,but what was it's use.She was shattered,broken until someone supported her n brought her out of the tragedy..devyani jhakkar n her family..wife of brahmanand jhakkar who was a partner in Promod Industries n also a very good friend of Promod from a very long time.

"Pata hain papaa..agar devyani aunty aur unke parivaar ne uss waqt mera saath nehi diya hota toh ..main poori tarah tooth jati thi..(remembering how difficult was it for her)par..uncle aur gaurav bhaiya ne poora business sambhala aur aunty ne mujhe..unhe kitna bhi shukriya ada karu kam hi hoga..wooh toh mujhe apni beti ki tarah dekhthi hain..mamma ki yaad toh mujhe nehi hain papaa..par aunty mere liye maa se kum nehi hain.."

She comes near her fathers photo n strokes her hand over his photo..

"Par..i miss you papa..i really miss you..kaash aap mere saath hote.." More tears come from her eyes when she remembers her moments with her father when she was young..how she used to play with her father in garden..n even if she gets a little scratch ..her father used to make a big chaos n bring 10 doctors for her treatment..how he was afraid when she was first riding her cycle..which continued when she rode her first scooter n car..how he literally cried when she said she want to go to abroad for studying MBA n leaving him.All those moments were her memories now..

She comes out from her chain of thoughts when devyani calls her entering the room..devyani jhaakar..sweet,simple n loving house-wife..n loves priya more than anything.

"Priya..beta..priya beta..tum yahan ho..(coming near her)kitni pyaari lag rahi ho(stroking her hair)achcha neeche wooh tumhare dost aa chuke hain.."

"Jee aunty..main abhi dekhthi hoon.."(Trying to hide her tears)Devyani notices this..

"Priya..meri taraf dekho(she turns unwantedly towards her)tum ro rahi hoo..kya baat hain..kisine kuch kahan"(getting worried)

"Nehi aunty aisi koi baat nehi hain..wooh bas'"(unable to say)

"Papaa..ki yaad aa rahi thi..(seeing his photo..priya nods),,hum sab ko bhi bhaisahab ki bahut yaad aati hain beta..wooh itne achche aadmi jo hain..unki kami toh hum sab ko rahegi..(seeing priya n making her understand)par hume unki yaadon ke saath aage badna hain..hain na..(Priya nods)aur issi mein unki khushi hogi'(Trying to cheer her up)ghar mein itni khushi ka mauka hain..aur tum ro rahi hoo..yeh kya baat hain..tumhe rona nehi hain..samjhi.."

"Jee aunty..thank you aunty..thank you very much..pata nehi agar aap nehi hote toh.."

"Arre..thankyou toh tumhe kehna chahiye beta..jo tumne hum sabko tumhare ghar mein rehne diya..nehi toh aaj yeh shaadi aur sab tayariya toh.."(getting emotional)

"Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain aunty..yeh bhi toh aap hi ka ghar hain..(catching her hands)aur papaa ke jaane ke baad toh main iss ghar mein akeli nehi rehna chahthi..aur aap sabne meri baat maan kar..issi ghar mein rehne ke liye maan gaye..woohi mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hain.."Devyani nods..n changes the topic..

"Ab neeche chalo tumhare saheliye intezaar kar rahi hain..mujhe bahut saari kaam karni hain..kal sagayi hain aur ek hafte mein shaadi..samjah mein nehi aa raha hain itna sab kuch kaise ho payega..ab bhi itni tayarirya baaki hain"(Now getting worried)

"Aunty..aap toh ladki walon se bhi zyaada pareshaan ho rahe hain..aap chinta mat keejiye'main hoon na..main sab kuch sambhaloongi..aur gaurav bhaiya ki shaadi mein koi kami nehi rehne doongi..ab main neeche chalthi hoon..bye!!"Priya goes down..while devyani sees her with a smile n prays..

"Hey bhagwaaan priya beti ka hamesha saath dena..aur usse har musibat se bachana"

Some where near Mumbai main road.

We see back of someguy with a black back-pack on the side of pavement..hitting the car irriatedly which has been punctured..he asks life from some person on the motorcycle coming..when the motor cycle person stops n gives lift..he turns to driver of car who's trying to repair it..

"Driver..tum saman ghar le chalo'main isse chala jata hoon.."Driver nods n we see person from back going on the motorcycle fastly..

Downstairs of Pradhan mansion:

We see brahmanand jhakkar..tall,dark..business partner of promod industries who have taken up now after Prabhat Pradhan's death scolding servants for not doing work nicely.

"Ramu..ek kaam dhang se naa hota thare se..abhi tak phool na lagaya..light na lagaya..kya kaam karthe ho..ek ghante mein saare kaam ho jaana chahiye ..samjhe"(warning)

"Jee..jee mallik.."(scared n moving away)

When priya comes from his back with a big smile..

"Uncle..aap chinta kyun karthe hain..main hoon na.."(showing off)

"Priya beta..haan haan hmare ko chinta karne ki kya zaroorat hain..tum ho na.."(with a smile)

"Waise dulhe raja ji kahan hain,,,(seeing around n sees gaurav)mil gaya..main abhi aati hoon..bye uncle.."

Brahmanand sees her with a smile n gets back on his phone..calling someone..

She meets her friends on the way n all as usual tries to tease gaurav..first son of brahmanand n devyani jhakkar..who also helps brahmanand in pradhan industries.Tall,handsome but of course the to-be married soon,so no-entry..

"Gaurav jeejaji.."(rounding up)

"Jeejaji?(stopping n seeing priya with scowl)Yeh kaun sa naya shararat hain priya.."

"Shararat..main aur shararat..dekho gaurav bhaiya..i mean ab se jeejaaji.."(teasing)

"Priya,,"(angrily)

"Aree,,sunoo toh..(keeping a hand around his shoulder)aapki aur vidya deedi ki shaadi ho rahi hain..aur main vidya deedi ko aapse pehle jaanti hoon..u know bachpan se..iss hisaab se agar wooh meri deedi hui toh aap mere jeeja-ji hue na..(coming near n says slowly)aur pata hain ladki walon ki taraf se hone mein bada mazaa hain..kitni saari cheese kar sakte hain.."(thinking what all she can do n have fun)

"Mujhe pata hain .. (Removing her hand)yeh sab na tum sirf mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye kar rahi hoo.."

"Gaurav jee-ja-jee..(stressing on each word)main aur aapko pareshaan..bilkul nehi.."(innocently n then laughs with all girls)

"Udao..udao..jitna marzi hain meri mazak udalo..tumhare drama ko full-stop karne wala jab aayega na..tab tumhe samajh aayega"

"Oh please..mujhse takrane wala abhi tak nehi paida hua hain..(with attitude)samjhe aap..aap apna kaam kayiye Jee-Jaa-Jee..chalo girls.."(goes away from there laughing)

"Dekhlena priya..(talking to himself)tumhe aisa insaan zarror milega..jo sari shaaraat ko takkar zaroor dega.."

Outside pradhan mansion:

"Thanks for the lift dude.."We see the person entering the big mansion..with his ruck-sack..

Inside:

Devyani is ordering all to do their work.."Imli..kya kar rahi hoo..yeh shagun ka saaman hain hume ladki walon ko bhejna hain..isse tum upar wale kamre mein rakho.."

"Jee memsahib"(goes away to keep)

"Aur..ramu..abhi tak yeh phool nehi lagaya..kab lagaoge tum log..jaldi haath chalao.."

Priya comes near devyani seeing her busy

"Aunty..mujhe bhi kuch kaam deejiye na.."

"Nehi beta,,sab log toh hain na.." (sweetly)

"Please aunty..main bhi kuch karna chahthi hoon.."

"Achcha chalo yeh phool darwaze ke upar laga do'(priya smiles widely)par sambhal ke upar chadte waqt,,samjhi.."

"Jee aunty"(smiling)

She tries keeping garland to the main door..even though everyone tries to stop her..adamant she is she insists on keeping it and climbs the ladder..she finishes it n steps down a few when the closed main door is opened with a jerk n priya loses her balance n falls sidewards..

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Even before she can hit ground..someone catches her tightly n remaining garlands in her hands gets wrapped on eachother(truly filmy style)..they get lost for a moment in eachother's eyes..priya comes out of trance first n tries to remove the stuck garland's..when she see's the person is not doing any effort to remove garlands or keep her down n is staring at her..

"Hello..Chodo mujhe..(waving hand infront of him)maine kahan chodo mujhe.."

"Kya?"(dazedly)

"Maine kahan chodo mujhe"(struggling n shouting)

The person without thinking leaves her n she hits the ground on her back..

"Ouch..(rubbing her back n standing on her feet)Tumhari himmat kaisi hui mujhe neeche giraani ki.."

"(Coming out out of daze)Yeh dekho pehle khud hi ..chodne ko kehthi ho..aur ab mujhpar giraane ka ilzaam lagathi hoo..(coming near n saying slowly)tum pagal ho kya"

"Ahh..how dare you..mujhe pagal kehne ke liye..u..u..stupid..idiot..moron.."(shouting in rage)

"Bas..karo..(keeping hands on ears)kya tumhare mooh se achche shabd nikathe hi nehi hain kya'ek toh maine tumhe girne se bachaya..aur upar se tum mujhe daanth rahi ho..tumhe toh mujhe thanks kehna chahiye"(showing off)

"Thanks..my foot..(stamping)main kyun thanks kaho..agar tum darwaza kholthe hi nehi toh..main girthi hi nehi..aur tumhe mujhe pakadne ki zaroorat hi nehi hoti..so yeh sab tumhara fault hain.."(shouting n pointing hand to him)

"Baap re Baap,,kitna chilathi ho tum.."(trying to clean his ears)

"Main chillao..kudu..jo marzi karu..tum hote kaun ho yeh sab poochne wale..hmm..bolo ho kaun tum?"(hands folded)

Devyani comes to the door hearing all the chaos..

"Priya beta tum yeh kisse lad rahi ho,,?"Seeing the person behind priya who is covered ..

"Maa'''..!!"(excited)

"Aditya,?"(excitedly)

"Maa..kaisi ho aap,?(going near n taking ashirwaad n hugging her)Papaa,,,(taking ashirwaad n hugging) Bro'''wow..kite din baad..(hugging gaurav)congrats dude.."

All are very happy seeing the family united again..devyani says..

"Aditya'kal tumhare bhaiyi ki sagayi aur tum aaj aate ho..yeh koi baat hui..waise hi 2 saalon se tum ghar wapas hi nehi aaye hoo..main tumse bahut naraz hoon.."(getting angry)

"Maa..i am really sorry..(catching her shoulders n turning towards him)aapko toh pata hain na..main studies main kitna busy rehta hoon..par ab toh meri studies bhi ho gaya..toh main yehi rahoonga..aap sab ke saath..ok.."

Brahmanand says.."Haan bhai ab tumhe bhi hmare saath business main haath batana hoga.."

Devyani smiles seeing him n kisses on aditya's forehead..n hugs him.

"Oh..toh yeh hain..Aditya,,aapka pyaara beta ..(sarcastically)aunty'"coming from her behind..devyani replies..

"Haan..aur yeh hain'"before she can say aditya replies..

"Priya'.(priya n all gets surprised how he knows her)maa ..aap priya ke bare mein itna baat karte ho phone par..toh pehchan main toh aayegi na..itna attitude..nakh pe gussaa..chillana..ruthna..yeh toh sirf priya hi ho sakthi hain.."

All laugh..while priya is in rage,,

"How dare u..tum tum tum.."

"Kya..tum'haan?Miss..Nakhchadi.."(coming near)

"Main nakhchadi..tum tum..sarfera ho..Mr.Sarfere'.hmf..(scowls n leave)come girls..hume bahut kaam hain.."

Priya goes away angrily from there with her friends.. all leave for their respective works ..while devyani feels bad for her..

"Yeh kya aditya aate hi priya se ladne lage ho..tumhe pata hain usne humsab ke liye kitna.."

"Maa..(keeping hand on her's)main bas mazak kar raha tha..aur mujhe sab pata hain..aap phone main meri baat kum..priya ki jo zyaada karti hoo.."

"Achcha baba..(smiling at aditya)tum thak gaye honge..chalo gaurav aditya ko apna karma dikhado.."

Gaurav rakes aditya to the guest room..n they talk..

"So bro..batayiye aur kya ho raha hain..vidya bhabhi ko date pe leke gaye ho ya main hi wooh kar du'."

"Adi..tum bhi na.."(shakes his head thinking "lo ek aura a gaya mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye")

Precap:

"Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..aur wooh bhi bina kapdo ke.."(closing her eyes)

"Yeh mera karma hain Miss..nakhchadi.."

"Kya?????Oh god"(Turning around)


Sorry for the delay...was a bit busy..

Please do comment..😃

Criticism /Appreciation both are welcomed..😊

Good wishes..

Sri:-)
Edited by sri_4 - 14 years ago
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wow sri
its awesome👍🏼
so nice to read
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OHEMGE !! Thanks so much for updatin !! Woo Hoo !! great spelendid update honey!! lol romantic precap sweetx !! lovedd dat .. Awesomee😃 Update soon xxx

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