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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Great beginning,,,when are u updating?

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shona

@shona2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

luved the concept...add me to ur pm list

plz continue soon

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hi friends I have given a name to my ff that's

PYAR PARCHAYI😊

(Anyone can give me the best name 4 the ff I am still thinking 4 a better name .)

Dreams are the most real and unreal reality if life we dream because we want to make it a reality but what if dreams turns to be the opposite of what we dreamt ,its horrible ,painful and unbearable .

Hi friends I am Suhan Jhakkar son of Gaurav jhakkar and I am going to tell u the cute love of Aditya and Priya Jhakkar my chachu and my darling chachi.here is the love story that started 3 years ago.

Aditya Jhakkar is the dream man of every girl but he was a crazy lover of a girl who he have seen only once and that through a accident and and he don't anything of that girl and he is in love with that girl ,he dnt know where she live ,what she do etc nothing at all and he is dreaming of making his wife what if she is engaged or married or she is in loved already but my chachu is not going think like that he only knows he loves her and want to make her my chachi.😃😃😃

Hi friends I am Aditya Jhakkar and my champ has already told u about and my jaan Priya ,its him because of she came in my life nt the way I wanted but after all the bad thing and some good thing today she is mine,she is standing with me as my dulhan ,my wife.the only thing I know about her and cared about is I love her and I can do anything 4 her and I can kill anyone if some one try to hurt because I cannt see any thing on her face except smile which her the most beautiful girl . let start the love story before u all go bore .one day I was coming from my office because I was getting late to reach my champ school and I was driving like crazy becauseon been late my champ wont talk to me and I cannt efford that u see he is my heart .i was driving too fast and I looked across the road 4 a sec and then looked on the road again and I but the brakes putting my all powers from the heart and the lungs and stopped the car .i saw someone fell on the road and he no no she was in white college dress but I couldn't her face because of her hairs they were coming on her face covering it.i looked actually stared her 4 a min and then someone said from inside "get out u moron help the girl she is hurt because of u " and I opend the door and raned toward her and a I said r u alright and she turned and I frozed her eyes were filled with tears and her face was bit scarred but yet she was looking so different and beautiful.

I offered my hand to her but she refused and she tried to get up but she was about to fall and I holded like a very special one infact her first look me=ade her so special 4 me her first turnand looking at me like a killer in this actually she was true but I wasn't wrong I was in a hurry but right nw I forgt everything after starring herin my arms , I couldn't belive she was in my arms I smiled and she gaved me a angry looked and I knew its wasn't right and I made her stand and she turned to leave and I trued to offer a lift but she left without saying anything and I was standing in the middle of the road and saw her going and going and in few min she was away from eyes and the cars behing started to horned and I realized that she was and I was so depressed I couldn't have ask her name but what could have done she was gone,but one I thing i belived she meet today mean she will meet again and it means that she will mine forever

😉

That's all 4 today hope all liked and tell me whether to change the title or not and did u all liked

Edited by maria_awan - 14 years ago

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Res 🤗

*Edited *

OMG this Was such a different FF !! the way u started Was WOOW !! how the Kids Introducin their HOT HOT chachu 😆 !! n Adi cumin in !! n Ayeeee the Startin !! ayeee the Meeetin 😍 loved it !!!

Will be Waitin for more 🤗

Edited by -Cwezy_Manoola- - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

nice concept.
lovely update.
loved it.
update soon.

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.Shiva.

@.Shiva.

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

amazing👏 contuine soon

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Whoa! Nice one, maria....please continue!

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Amna

@lonelyshadow

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

i love the concept... and would read the updates later.. will edit this post..!!

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shona

@shona2010

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

amazing update!!!

As u asked name for the FF well im not very good wit name but here r some... Love At First Sight, Beyond Love, Hum Ko Deewana Ker Gaye, Deewangi, Tumse Hi, Ishq Hua, Chori Kiya Re Jiya, Love Happens, hahaha thats all sound soo filmy 😆 or u can use Aditya Priya song - Yeh Ishq Hai , or Lafzon Main Nahi Hota Jo Bayaan 😊 thats wat i can think of

cant wait for the next part!!!

pls cont. soon and thanks for the PM