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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys and gurls, its me aishika again.. Well, im starting a new thing on this forum which is called fanfics. Fanfics is what u want to happen.. So ima write an episode for mamta what i want to happen and i want u guys to comment it and maybe even write ur own... evryday i will write the episode after it so it can continue...

It is a big day for mamta and sid because theyre having a barbecue... they invited a whole bunch of ppl they even invited the shrivastav family.. mamta is getting dressed and sid looks at her in a romantic way, but mamta feels uncomfortable and says " remeber, im only doing this for the sake of vandana" sid gets a litttle tense and leaves the room.. krish is playing with sidd { sho cute } then they start the barbecue. The shrivastav family came but akshay didnt. All are worried becuase he said he would come. Akshay walks in and everybody gets an relief. As soon as akshay came, vandana was talking to him but he walked straight to mamta. They started talking as if theyre were husband and wife. Sid gets really jealous and embarrassed. When akshay was about to leave, mamta stopped him infront of everyone and said this is a barbecue for our son krish and if anyone wants you to leave, then i will leave with u. Everyone is shocked and akshay looks surprised.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oops i made a mistake, sid feels jealous and embarrases akshay.
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part II ) Akshay smiles at mamta and mamta smiles back. Vandana and Simran yell at mamta of her shamelessness to another man. They said that mamta is nothing but a flirt, even though shes married she flirts with other men. Just then, Akshay got really mad and yelled No. He spoke out the truth about krish being his son, he grabbed krish and left. Mamta gets really upset, then vandana comes and asks mamta why did she have to create a storm in this peacful family. Vandana cries and leaves. After hearing all this mamta gets really emotional then takes a picture of akshay and krish and starts to cry over it. Sid comes and hides behind a tree, he watches and listens to what mamta is doing. Mamta said " why did i give up my love, and come here" just then mamta noticed sid looking at her then a teardrop falls from his eyes.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good one,
I want to see akshay and mamta together πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishika_pyar_5

part II ) Akshay smiles at mamta and mamta smiles back. Vandana and Simran yell at mamta of her shamelessness to another man. They said that mamta is nothing but a flirt, even though shes married she flirts with other men. Just then, Akshay got really mad and yelled No. He spoke out the truth about krish being his son, he grabbed krish and left. Mamta gets really upset, then vandana comes and asks mamta why did she have to create a storm in this peacful family. Vandana cries and leaves. After hearing all this mamta gets really emotional then takes a picture of akshay and krish and starts to cry over it. Sid comes and hides behind a tree, he watches and listens to what mamta is doing. Mamta said " why did i give up my love, and come here" just then mamta noticed sid looking at her then a teardrop falls from his eyes.

oh my god! that was so romanitc, sad and shocking,πŸ˜› hearing tt sid cried cos his love for mamta was so strong made me cry too!😭 i feel so sad! good job aishika! tt was a great story start! πŸ‘

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishika_pyar_5

part II ) Akshay smiles at mamta and mamta smiles back. Vandana and Simran yell at mamta of her shamelessness to another man. They said that mamta is nothing but a flirt, even though shes married she flirts with other men. Just then, Akshay got really mad and yelled No. He spoke out the truth about krish being his son, he grabbed krish and left. Mamta gets really upset, then vandana comes and asks mamta why did she have to create a storm in this peacful family. Vandana cries and leaves. After hearing all this mamta gets really emotional then takes a picture of akshay and krish and starts to cry over it. Sid comes and hides behind a tree, he watches and listens to what mamta is doing. Mamta said " why did i give up my love, and come here" just then mamta noticed sid looking at her then a teardrop falls from his eyes.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks guys. [ ;) ]

part III) Mamta looks at sid and they both start crying [ so emotional ] She tells sid that she only told him 75% percent if her life, not the whole truth. Mamta says " the truth is that i fell in love with the father of my son " " Before I came to you and accepted this pretend marriage i was living with akshay and krish in a house at panvel { or thats where i think it was ] she told him about there meet at the temple and what akshay did upon the holy fire. Akshay said, " i swear upon this holy fire that i love you mamta".. Then she told him about there romantic moment and specifically the one in the backyard. In the presence of the god she said that akshay had stated that mamta only belonged to him and he only belonged to mamta.Then she told him how akshay took her around the tulsi plant for seven rounds... After hearing all this, Sid is shocked and starts to cry. He said " Why Mamta, WHy? Why did u play with my emoticions? He also said that even though u want to marry akshay, i wont let u go, not now , not tomarrow, not ever. At the same time, Akshay walks in with krish and heard everything.

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