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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

loved both d updates.
finally pragati met her father n mother..
n d truth of karna is out..
wud luv if u can give a brief moment of togrtherness for parth pragati n panchali..

Yes Sruti I will give Parth Panchali Pragati update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetka

Brilliant update...u r such a gr8 writer Di ...U portrayed everyone's character so well

Thanq Sweetika Keep reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update..
loved how madhav cleared doubt of his parth..
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The eighteenth day battle is about to start still one hour left. As Karna had been cremated with due formalities. Every one got back to their immediate task of finishing off the battle as early as possible
they know with Karna gone Duryothan would never have an edge over Pandava side.Defeat glares at his face while Victory bells are ringing in the premises of Pandavas.
Arjun got back to his Sibir to finish off his Siva worship and Krishna said." I will tend the horses. You gear up to finish off the war which is now a cake walk for you. Great achievement I must say Parth.You lived up to my expectations."
Arjun smiled at him ." Credit should go to you and your Gitopadesh.That did the trick. Not me." He said.
Krishna smiled back." You don't know it will remain forever,yugas may change. But the conversation between me and you will be the guiding source. We both live forever in the minds of people. Great. Isn't it? Finally I succeeded in clearing the doubts of the most intelligent warrior cousin of mine.More than my teaching your questions should get the credit. By the way where do you keep your question bank?
Arjun laughed. " Now go and get ready. Otherwise Eldest will get hyper. He is in bad mood ever since he heard that Karna is our Eldest."
Krishna said precisely." He should be calm till the war gets finished. Then he will be enlightened in a proper way.
Arjun is excited . He enquired." Will you instruct him Gita?"
Krishna firmly stated." Never. Gita will never happen again?The Super power will not manifest before any one and every one. I told you. Sages and my devotees never had the good fortune that you had."
Arjun asked curiously." Why Madhav?"
Krishna walked off turned around and said ." Because you are me. There is no difference at all. So only Arjun can make Krishna speak that way. No one else. Not even your Eldest."
Arjun stared at his disappearing form and wondered." What does he mean to say?

As he took his Gandiv in his hands and tying up the string he felt the warm touch of his daughter's hands round his neck.Pragati bent forward and looked into his eyes.She then looked at the Gandiv and said cheekily." Pitasri Mata says you love Gandiv more than her and me."
Arjun pulled her to the front and asked." And what do you feel?
Pragati smiled cutely and gave a peck on his cheek.She then said." Mata doesn't know that you love me the most."
Arjun laughed gleefully at the way she said the words like she is telling a secret.
Panchali came inside with Arti Thali and saw the father and daughter sharing secrets.
She pouted and asked." What is that you are laughing at? Share with me."
Arjun and Pragati looked at each other with smiles. Arjun kept the Gandiv away and said." Pragati says she took after you in getting angry instantly as per Hastinapur gossip."
Panchali understood his mischievousness.She smilingly said." They must have said she is just like you in stubbornness.
Arjun shrugged his shoulders and Pragati laughed. She hugged her father close and said." Yes I am Arjun's daughter in every way. Ganthari Dadi always tells me that.
Panchali looked at them endearingly and then pretended anger." Fine. Father and daughter enjoy together.I will leave if you let me finish off Arti.Otherwise your Madhav will blame me for the delay."
Arjun smiled at her and stood with Pragati for Arti.
Pragati immediately took Arti thali from Panchali and pushed her beside Arjun." Let me do Arti for you both Mata. It is my dream to see you together. Thirteen years I just imagined my legendary parents as I am not lucky enough to be with you two. I consider myself fortunate to be Arjun and Panchali 's daughter.Pragati's voice broke as she got emotional.Arjun and Panchali together hugged her closer and kissed her on both her cheeks.
Panchali said." We are fortunate Pragati to have you in our life. You are your father's dream. You are my most precious gift to my most cherished husband. We felt crushed by fate to live away from you."
Arjun did not say anything.He has moisture in his eyes. He just kept both his wife and daughter close to his heart.
Just then Kunti entered and declared." Phalgun. I will go back to Hastinapur. Arrange for me a chariot."
Arjun looked with surprise and asked." Why Mata? Why should you go? You didn't forgive us for killing your Eldest son?"
Krishna who came there said." Nothing like that Parth. Kunti Bua knows those who side with Adharma will have to face punishment. Fate ordained that to happen through your valour.Bua never for get the prediction at Satasringa mountain.She knows still you have to accomplish great deeds."
Kunti nodded in agreement." Yes Phalgun. I don't hold you responsible for the death of Karna.You are my dearest son,the redeemer of Pandavas and the glory of Kuruvamsh. I want to go to be with Gandhari Didi in her moment of crisis."
Arjun walked to her bent down and kept his head on her shoulder as he always does. Kunti ruffled his hair and scolded Panchali." What is this Bahu.You are not arranging his hair properly? See how unkempt it looked?"
Panchali side glanced Arjun who has a naughty glint in his eyes and said." Your son will not be available for such things Mata. He is too busy handling war."
Pragati hugged Kunti and said." Pitasri I will go with Dadi to look after her. Till you come there I will take care." Arjun has pride in his eyes.He touched Pragati's head and assured," Go my dear Princess..I promise I will arrive there very soon.The war will end in a short while."Panchali had an expression of disappointment. Again her daughter is moving away.Krishna placed his hand on her shoulder and assured." Don't worry Sakhi. You will be together again in a short while. I promise."




Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update di..so cute pragiti
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it was so lovely...n cutee...to see d three together...
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Kirti ran towards Draupadi and hugged her close.He teased Pragati " you know if Pitasri loves you the most Mata loves me the most."
Pragati pouted and replied sharply." Bhrata, You are wrong. I am the youngest. And I think Mata also loves me only." Pragati turned to Draupadi and asked ." Tell me Mata. Am I not your beloved daughter?"
Kirti did not stop.He taunted." Son always holds special place in mother's heart.You can ask anyone."
Kunti smiled at both and walked out to take leave of Yudhishtir.
Arjun turned to his saviour to solve the issue as he doesn't want his daughter to go with even a little bit of displeasure.
Draupadi also turned to her Govind as she want both her children to get satisfaction.
Krishna smiled and addressed his nephew and niece together." Kirti Pragati tell me the answer for my question. Whom do you love more? Your father or mother?"
Kirti looked confused. He saw the beautiful face of his dearest mother who pampered him a lot when he was an infant.At Indraprasth he never remember atleast one moment he spent away from her .
Every one including his father used to ridicule his mother for pampering him too much. After thirteen years when he met her again the same bond continued . Even in war atmosphere he never left her side after he came back in the evening. He certainly loves her the most.
Kirti then looked at his father the greatest warrior of Aryavarth.he remembered his warmth his affection at Indraprasth. He never neglected him despite his obsessive love for Abhimanyu.
After thirteen years when he met him he felt the same warmth,same love that made him feel complete At the training camp he used to teach him with so much patience as he is younger and needed more time. He never compared his skills with the extraordinary skills of Abhi who excelled every one in warfare.Once when he is learning sword fight he got wounded and Arjun literally carried him on his shoulders like a smal child and bandaged his wound. How could he say that he loves his mother more than his father.
Pragati looked at Arjun.her dearest father who so obsessively wanted to have her as his daughter. She heard from Gandhari how much Arjun wanted a daughter and literally became mad with joy when she was born.
Pragati looked at her mother who faced so much in her life. Her position as the wife of five Pandavas despite loving Arjun the most ,always been a matter of attention which made her face the situations that others could never imagine at all. Gandhari Dadi told her that Panchali readily gave birth to her as she wished to fulfill the ardent desire of Arjun even at the cost of her ill health.Now when she declared that she would go with her Kunti Dadi she saw pain in her mother's eyes.
Krishna laughed on seeing the children get into dilemma. He insisted." Hurry up kids. We have to go for war. Already the band started."
In a split second Kirti and Pragati together spoke." I love them both."
Arjun and Draupadi looked at each other smiling with contentment. Their saviour solved the issue and how? Kirti and Pragati together hugged their parents and ran out ,Kirti to get ready for war and Pragati to get ready to go with Kunti.
Krishna turned to Draupadi and said." I know you both want to thank me but no need. Today is special because the war will come to an end. Krishnaa do Aarti fast and send your husband to get the ultimate victory." So saying he walked out.
Panchali did Aarti and asked in a broken voice." Arjun, will this happiness last forever? We will be able to spend happily with our children? I don't know Arjun. I am scared. I fear how the end will be."
Arjun pressed her shoulder and said." Don't think too much Krishnaa. We sacrificed so much. We sacrificed Abhi. Iravan,your father,my grandfather,my Gurudev. Now we deserve to have peace with our children.Madhav is with us. Leave everything to him."
Arjun took the Gandiv and walked out towards victory,towards establishment of Dharma Rajya.
Little did he know that Panchali's fears will turn into reality.
That he still has to sacrifice so much to fulfill the purpose.




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Posted: 9 years ago
so cute...but sad 2 see dat our kirti will died soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was so lovely n cute update...
loved how madhav solved dere problems...
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After the death of Karna Duryothan plunged in the river of grief. Kripacharya counselled him." Yuvraj.the great Bheeshma,Drona and Karna were vanquished by Savyasachi. Jayathrath was killed by that hero when all of us stood there helpless and stupefied.You collected eleven akshouhinis army but that was wiped off almost by the wielder of Gandiva like heaps of cotton extinguished by fire.
Now the Sparks of Gandiv will scatter the remaining army of the Kurus. Who can resist Arjun in battle? Your army became leaderless. I advise you to save yourself by making peace with Pandavas.If Dhritarashtr requests Krishna to stop the war he will oblige.Do that now."
Duryothana disagreed.He said." I prefer to die in the battlefield fighting till my last breath.I can't make peace with Pandavas."
Then on the advice of Aswathama Duryothan made Salya the chief commander of his army.
Having heard of this Krishna goaded Yudhishtir." Use your ascetic powers and slay Salya in battle."
As the battle began Arjuna rushed to slay the Samsaptakas who are less in number now as he himself destroyed them fiercely till then.
Nakula killed Sushena ,another son of Karna in battle.
Salya fought fiercely and destroyed Pandava army in huge numbers.
Bheema killed Salya's horses and his driver.
A great mace fight happened between Bheema and Salya
Both were wounded severely and Kripa took Salya away in his chariot.
A great battle happened between Arjuna and Aswathama.
Aswathama covered the two Krishnas with hundreds of arrows.Then the straight arrows released by Arjun covered the whole battlefield.The battle ground looked like the sporting ground of Rudra.
Aswathama's horses and chariot were killed Then he hurled a big mace with spikes on Arjun.
Arjun smashed that mace with seven arrows.
Aswathama assisted by Samsaptakas fought with Arjun .
Meanwhile Salya wounded Yudhishtitr severely and Nakul rushed to help his brother
After fighting with Salya for a long time Yudhishtir hurled a weapon that he always wordhipped towards Salya inspiring it with mantras. It pierced the heart of Salya and entered the earth.Sahadeva killed Sakuni and fulfilled his vow.
Savyasachi exterminated the whole Samsaptakas and kuru army and stood triumphant in the battlefield.
Unable to resist the shafts from Gandiv the soldiers either succumbed or fled away.
Arjun killed the Trigarta king Susarma and put an end to the long standing rivalry between him and Trigarta king.
On seeing every one wiped off except Aswathama,Kritavarma and Kripa Duryothan fled away from the battlefield.



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