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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting update. Arjun's pain was well explained. Anyone would feel the way he felt if he has to take up arms against the person in whose lap he has played.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
arjun is indeed very much attached to his pitamah dat even after gita gyan
he cant raise weapons against his pitamah
so much adorable his love is...
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Posted: 9 years ago
The five year old Arjun running faster and faster in the corridors of Hastinapur. Kunti and Priyamvada are desparately trying to catch up with him. The little toddler did not stop till he reached his Grandfather's chamber.Bheeshm is seriously in conversation with border Security officers.Generally Bheeshm goes to confidential chamber meant to discuss these things.But since he is unwell due to his mental agony caused by Pandu's untimely death he called them there only. Suddenly he felt the tiny hands of Arjun round his neck looking at him in anticipation.His cloths are dusty and his feet carried the dust into Bheeshma's White Dhoti and spread over it. Bheeshma looked down into the hazel eyes of the kid and immediately got connected to them. Those eyes are sharp intelligent and at the same time captivating. Arjun muttered under his breath.' Pitasri Mata is coming But I won't go to her. I don't like to eat ." Bheeshm melted at his innocent banter.' Arjun I am not your Pitasri I am Pitasri to your Pitasri.Call me Pitamah." Arjun repeated the word Ppitamah with curiosity. Kunti entered followed by Priyamvada but stopped on seeing the officers. She said sorry as her son spoiled his clothes. Bheeshm smiled and said.' Don't be sorry Kunti. My Pandu's dearest son is like my son only.You give the bowl to me." He took the bowl and asked Arjun.' Where is your bow? " Arjun became dull.' Pitamah,It was crushed by Dussasan. It was broken." Bheeshm could not see tears in Arjun's eyes. He looked at the officers and ordered.' Go and get a bow for my boy in his size .I don't mean wooden one." The officers looked at each other. They came there to discuss the hostile Yavana king but now they were entrusted with another job.They ran as fast as they can. Arjun's eyes twinkled with excitement.He stood on Bheeshma's lap and kissed him on his cheek to express his happiness.Kunti and Priyamvada were spellbound. Bheeshm made Arjun sit properly and started. You know Arjun in our Kuruvamsh great archers were there in the past...The story continued with Arjun finishing off his food without knowing it. Kunti felt relieved. Finally Pandu's duty is ably attended by his Jyesht Pita. Within two hours Arjun got his unbreakable small designer bow made by the chief Architecht of Hastinapur.As he fixed the arrow on it,Bheeshm couldn't believe his eyes. Such precision at five years of age? His Pandu's son will light up the Kuru clan with his valour. He is certain of that fact,...The Bird Eye...hit by Arjun only...Drona was saved by his Arjun only... The Gurudakshina Drupad was captured by whom? By his Arjun only...The Fish Target was pierced Ofcourse who is the winner? Bheeshma's Grandson,the third Pandav Arjun... Khandava Dahan,The Conquest of Quarters, The Pasupata Adventure,Duel with Siva,Killing Kalakeyas,Nivata Kavachas who did it? The Pride of Kurus his Arjun only.The Uttar GoGrahan His Arjun singlehandedly defeated all of them including that boastful Karn. ... Now he is on the verge of conquering the Invincible Bheeshm.Who else but Arjun can do that impossible feat? Bheeshma smiled with pride and happiness.But will Arjun attempt that heartfully? If he becomes emotional He Bheeshma will have to drag his life further fighting for unrighteous Kauravas and causing loss to Pandavas. No. That should not happen.He should get liberation. That also in the hands of his dearest Grandson who he knew is none other than Maharshi Nar the soulmate of Narayan. Then only he will be able to attain meritorious Lokas and get solvation. Bheeshm came out of his thoughts and observed that it is time to go to Hiranvati river to take bath. It is still cloudy and sunrise didn't happen yet. He has a little hope to meet Arjun there who will come to the river by that time. Bheeshm prevented his personal security and alone walked to the river. As he reached the shore he saw his grandson Arjun standing there staring seriously into the calm and serene waters of Hiranvati. Bheeshm felt elated and placed his hand on Arjun's shoulder. The dearest grandson of Bheeshma turned back and hugged him tight with tears flowing from his eyes.
Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally I was able to read a few of your updates!
As you know, I have always told you that I absolutely love how you write, and that combined with how much knowledge you provide to us results in such excellence!
I loved that part where Panchali comes in and takes Arjun away from Bheeshma Pitamah. Even small updates from you are so amazing, and the romance is subtle yet so, so powerful!
I love every bit of it. Moreover, I happened to read a part of the Geeta Gyan in the following pages, that just always adds to my knowledge. Keep writing please.
Also, you told me about your updates on Arjun na as this is the month of Phalugun. Please send me those page numbers. I wanna read those desperately!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arjun-Bheeshma 😭😭❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
so serene n beautiful update...loved d part where pitamah was feeding small arjun..d scene is adorable..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

so serene n beautiful update...loved d part where pitamah was feeding small arjun..d scene is adorable..

Ved Vyas particularly mentioned this scene in the Epic. I always adored the bond between Arjun and his Pitamah.
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Arjun-Bheeshma 😭😭❤️

Agree with you.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Finally I was able to read a few of your updates!

As you know, I have always told you that I absolutely love how you write, and that combined with how much knowledge you provide to us results in such excellence!
I loved that part where Panchali comes in and takes Arjun away from Bheeshma Pitamah. Even small updates from you are so amazing, and the romance is subtle yet so, so powerful!
I love every bit of it. Moreover, I happened to read a part of the Geeta Gyan in the following pages, that just always adds to my knowledge. Keep writing please.
Also, you told me about your updates on Arjun na as this is the month of Phalugun. Please send me those page numbers. I wanna read those desperately!😃

Navika I did Send the numbers through PM. Still I tell you again 9 10 12' You have to see alternate updates. By the way good to know you read some.I am elated.
Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago
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For a while none of them spoke. The sound of Hiranvati waters,the sweet notes of birds,the reddish hue in the sky made the two great warriors get enough relief and to some extent revived their spirits.Arjun broke the silence and insisted in his pampered tone that he always used when he was with his Pitamah.' Come what may. I won't do what you asked me to. I won't do it even if you lure me with your rewards." Bheeshm smiled at his grandson who looked like the toddler trying to get whatever he wanted. Years back this endearing child won his heart and made him taste fatherhood despite being a grandfather.Now destiny made them stand against each other and fight . Now Arjun needs to be strong and unshaken otherwise Krishna's purpose of incarnating on the earth will go waste. If he Bheeshm continue to fight there is every chance of Duryothan winning the war as Arjun will never show his full mettle come what may.' Bheeshm sat on the Rock and made Arjun sit on another.He took his hand in his and affectionately placed it between his hands.' Arjun, listen to me carefully.When I took an oath not to marry and not to be the king,I never realised the repercussions. I continued my support to whoever sat on the throne of Hastinapur.The only respite I felt was when your father Pandu ruled the kingdom.But after his death again my troubles started.Pandu's death was a big jolt to me. Then you five came to me. I got hope that the Kuru Empire will flourish with Yudhishtir as the king and you as my successor.I never felt the need to have my own children. But when you came into my life surprisingly the suppressed fatherhood surfaced and I took delight in nourishing you and grooming you as I wished. When you called me Pitasri you don't know how soothing it was to my heart.But I didn't encourage you to call me so as I was afraid of losing my mental strength and grit . My love for you may dominate my life and I may falter in my dharma." Arjun's tears dried up. He touched his grand father's cheek with his palm and asked.' Then why are you making me do this censurable thing? Surely I will be blamed for my sinful act by every one till the end of the creation." Bheeshma pressed his hand and said in a broken voice. ' Arjun we both are culprits of Panchali. We both failed. I am the chief commander of Hastinapur Still I didn't prevent that wretched Dice game and Panchali's insult. You are the chief commander of Indraprasth.You didn't protest against that shameful incident. I am enslaved to the throne of Hastinapur. You are enslaved to your Eldest. We both are at fault." Arjun's jaw tightened remembering the disgraceful incident.He admitted in a broken voice.' I am her culprit Pitamah. More than my brothers I should protect her from those jackals. But I kept quiet. I know I incurred sin. And I will get punishment." Bheeshm looked straight into his eyes.' Arjun we both are getting punished today for our crime. You by making your dearest Grandfather fall down and I by enduring torture till I breathe my last. Let us be brave and face our ordeal." Arjun's tears rolled down.He touched Bheeshma's wrinkled body all over and wailed.' Pitamah how do you endure the pain? Surely it will torture you a lot." Bheeshma smiled.' I won't get any pain. The arrows from Gandiv will kiss me all over. They belong to my Arjun no? Now promise me you won't hold back You will display your fine skills to the maximum today. And I warn you I won't make your task easier.Let people remember this unique encounter between Ganga Putr Bhishm and Kunti Putr Arjun. Take the challenge." Arjun hugged him for the last time and heard Krishna's voice from behind.' Parth come over. Gandiv is waiting for you Open the doors of salvation for your dear Grandfather. " Arjun touched Bheeshma's feet and turned back to see Krishna and Krishnaa on the shore. As he approached them,Panchali smiled and took Sindur from her Mang and placed it as Vir Tilak on his forehead. May you be victorious as ever my husband,She said defiantly making Krishna smile and add.' Yes Krishnaa your husband will win for sure." He hugged his Parth and looked at Bheeshma with his Devine grace. Bheeshma folded his hands and prayed.' Narayan be with my Arjun and guide him in his most crucial battle today." Ktishna nodded his head and said.' So be it."
Edited by ltelidevara - 9 years ago

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