Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Awesome chapter Aanvi😃

Thanks di!!!😳 there is another chapter!! I reserved it before!!!! plz read it!!😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

really nice story .
read all prts in one go
waiting for ardi meeting
update soon next prt
and plzzz pm me
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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
really nice story .
read all prts in one go
waiting for ardi meeting
update soon next prt
and plzzz pm me
waiting

Hello!!! Welcome to ArDi world!!!!!🤗 This is Aanvi. Thnak u soo much!!!😳 Will soon update... Will surely PM u!!😃

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proteeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Loved how you presented the Kans Vadh and the Pandavs' meeting with the Rishis who would now lead them to their treasure!

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Loved how you presented the Kans Vadh and the Pandavs' meeting with the Rishis who would now lead them to their treasure!

Thanks, Protee!!!😃 Govind's tales may again repeat as new generation comes!😃 And u know, Rishis are always good!!😆

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

CHAPTER ELEVEN

A LITTLE CHILDISHNESS -PART 1

Thoughts in Italic

Panchali was sitting on her Jhoola made of flowers ans jasmines kept at the corner of the room with a stage. She always loved this jhoola. Her father had arranged her room very beautifully. The room had combinations of golden, pink, off-white, and orange. Pinkish golden had been her favorite color. Her room's curtains had different shades. In every window, on the right side was pink curtain and left side had a sweet orange color made of silk. All of them had golden and off-white Zari borders. And the whole window was always covered with a very thin muslin cloth which was especially brought from Pundranagar. And at the middle of the room, there was water container made of gold. It always contained blue lotuses. And the bed was kept at the highest stage of the room. It was round shaped. And beside this bed, there was a mirror in which every morning after surya pranam,she used to admire herself. And her sister shrikhandini had arranged little chanchans which were with the curtains. so whenever wind passed, they would make a sweet sound. Panchali was listening those sounds and was pouting to herself.

"Krishnaa!What are you thinking?"

" Nothing, Govind. I am just bored."

" Bored! So let's play Chausar!"
"No, govind." she said in a sleepy way.

" Why?"

" I am bored of these four walls. I have played Chausar and Shatranj more than hundred times. Now I am bored of it..." she yawned.

" Hmm... It's a matter to think about! So... do one thing..."

" What?"
" Umm... Do make up! I always hear from Rukmini that girls love makeup!" he said with naughtiness and winked.

" Govind! Do you think it's joke! I am feeling utter bored. Dhrist at least got to do something; went to gurukul to learn more. At least he can enjoy there!" Panchali said with jealousy.

" Then you also go to Kanyavaas!"
" Do you think I need it? It's utter boring. I am doing it all day anyway!"
" Hmm... so what to do now?"
" Let's go outside!" she said with excitement.

" Outside! But what will you do there?"
" Yes... I can't do anything also there..." she said with disappointment.

" Umm... Okay, I can do something. You just stay here. Don't go anywhere, okay?"
" But.. I.. What... What Govind!"

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She waited there for at least half an hour. But she had no patience! She was tossing around the whole room." Uff! Now what is Govind doing! Wait a moment, did he cleverly escaped from me! Then aane do, I will not spare him!" she face was red and fluffy with anger. Krishna tip toed to the room. And called, " Sakhi!"

" What! You are here NOW! do you know I..."

" Leave it, Sakhi! I have arranged something new for you!"

" What!" she asked like a curious girl." What is it, Govind!"

" Nothing special, but you can't go there in such regal clothes. You need to wear cotton clothes with very minimal jewelries."

" Don't say we are going to any funeral!! she asked sheepishly.

" No, no, Sakhi! First let's go there, You will know everything! But at first wear this quickly,haan! And don't take much time! You will not go to any wedding!" Krishna winked.

" Govind!"
" Okay, okay. Now go quickly. I am waiting outside!"

TBC...

P.S: Bangladesh was previously known as Pundranagar that time. And we all know that they were famous for muslin cloth. So, I wrote it!

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proteeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Aww! Wating to see Kanha's surprise for Draupadi!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Aww! Wating to see Kanha's surprise for Draupadi!

Sorry, couldn't,t update previous two days... My PC had crashed... but I will update today pakka!

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Sonatia
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sorry i had xms..lemme read it then gonna comment..
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chapter two was great..arjun is very excited..loved how u described her..her beauty..loved the bheem part and bheem nakul nok- ghock..
Chapy three was i am outta my words..hw beautiful it was..superb..arjun vid his brothers..last part u rocked and also loved hw u exclaimed draupadi's fear that who will guide her.realy loved the way u went bout it.
Chapter four was great..i loved draupadi part and arjun part as well...it was so great...loved it..loved the part of vasudev and panchali's eagerness to meet him and do arti of e1..
Loved chapter 5..it was great..loved hw drau don't wanna leave her dad.and her excitement to c d world.and anger for vasudev.keep it up.
Chapter 7 was so cool...it was very cute one..the time when drau stops seeing devine face of vasudev omg! I was laughing..
I loved the chapter eight..i was so so so cute..loved the Sakha-Sakhi scene..and drau is so sweet lyk a Baby...
Oh my goodness this was a mood freshening chapter..ma with his ladla...waiting for parav meeting..awesome one Anu..

Welcome back!🤗 don't worry... My exams r also coming...🤔 leave the exams...

Thank you so much mou! Hope u read my next chaps!!😃